Zhanshen: My Girlfriend Hongying

Reborn from Sanjiu, reborn from Zhanshen. Although it has not left the category of doujin, there are signs of establishing a new branch. The addition of the protagonist is not rigid, retaining the original character of the character while filling it with flesh and blood, showing a real side of life that many people have not shown in the original work. It makes up for regrets on the basis of logical self-consistency, highlighting the aura of the protagonist without covering up the light of Qiye. The setting of the new plot and new abilities was clearly a result of painstaking thinking. The moment Jianjia appeared, Su Yanhongying really lost her temper. Come on [shy][please update]

It's very interesting, and there are many jokes about the author. I like this kind of step-by-step pure love. I like it inexplicably. I suggest you cut the red cherry and let Su Yanga come back to life again [sending my heart] [thoughts]

It's very good-looking. The biggest feature is that it inherits Zhanshen's funny style and it's very funny. I even think it's much better than the original Zhanshen. And the key point is that the author of the original version of this book has wiped out all the knives. For example, when Zhao Kongchen died, he was resurrected by the protagonist, "Captain Run, as long as you beat the river of time, we can return to you." That time, he was also saved by the future protagonist. Everything was smoothed out on the spot, rather than in the original work until Lin Qiye became a god in the later stages.

Finally, there is a Zhanshen fanfic that takes the lives of ordinary people as fate. I read several high-scoring God-Slaying fanfics, and many of them are popular supporting characters who can be saved. Then ordinary soldiers and night watchmen can die at will, and even a group of people can be killed for the sake of sensationalism. For Jiang Bai to join the special team, the entire 008 team can be killed. In order to follow the plot, the ruin monument in the fasting center is still broken (the protagonist knows the plot) and then a group of soldiers die. No matter how awesome the tricks are, ordinary people can't be saved, as if ordinary people deserve to die.

It's really good to have one thing to say. The protagonist initially felt dazed and confused as "he does not belong to this world", but later found an opportunity to join the Night Watch with Fuxi's expectations. In this regard, unlike other fans who completely follow Lin Qiye, he has his own ideas. The protagonist's idea of ​​joining the Night Watch also stems from the concept of "letting the ancestors go home." This book is good at humor but not self-righteous which makes it boring. It likes jokes but does not cross the line and makes it too vulgar. I watched it in one go now, it is a Zhanshen fanfic worth watching The exercise part was too awkward, I didn't quite accept it.

It's very good, the protagonist is perfectly portrayed, and the protagonist's personality is outstanding, which is very good. Finally, I want to have a single heroine, Hong Ying. This is my wish, please!

I would call this book the best fanfic of Zhanshen. The author has perfectly integrated the protagonist and the protagonist group, and the subsequent plot direction is also unique. I think the author could have written a separate book.

All I can say is that it looks great to me. Don't be fooled by the title of the book. The book is mainly about Fuxi's agent and the story of unlocking the various hexagrams, zodiac signs, etc. On Fuxi's plate step by step. And his campfire setting is very new and pretty good. Well, I can't explain it specifically, but it's okay. Then I feel that the character creation is a bit unfamiliar and does not have the full feeling in the original book. This should be because the author is still relatively unfamiliar. And the plot is still okay, it is relatively coherent, there is no big pause, which is very good compared to those who write blindly. Anyway, it is very good for me. Then there is the protagonist's feelings for the characters in the book. I think his slowly evolving form is good. His feelings with Hongying were only officially expressed in the later stages (about 100 chapters), and the early stages were all foreshadowing. Overall it is very good and I hope the author can continue to work hard. By the way, the author has also worked hard on the character, emotions, and actions of the protagonist in the book. He usually creates some funny scenes, but he is affectionate when he should be affectionate, happy when he should be, and decisive when he should be decisive. I can only say that it is good and worthy of praise. In terms of character creation, I also caught up in the later stages. It is much better than the beginning. There is progress! [Like] Forgot to mention, the author's writing is short, watery and weak. [Laughing evilly] If you think the review is good, please give it a thumbs up [I'm about to cry]

It's okay. So far, the writing is pretty good. All the regrets that can be made up for are made up. The emotional scenes are also good. Unlike some fanfics, one second the protagonist has a bad mouth and is fighting with Hongying to death. The next second the two people fall inexplicably in love and even go to bed. People who read it want to laugh. This book is written with more delicate emotions. , There is also a process of getting together, it will not be so abrupt, and it will not be like other novels. One second, the protagonist is hated by others, and the next second, Hongying falls in love with her inexplicably, just like being possessed by a demon. Some fanfics should not be written if they don't know how to write emotional scenes. Readers who don't have a heroine will not say anything. If the writing is not good, you can learn from it. There is no need to act awkward.

It's beautiful and beautiful. It's a masterpiece among God-killing fanfics! ! !

I still have more to say, and I lost it after just watching it. The characterization of the characters is very successful, and the writing style is very natural. From the beginning to the end, I still can't forget the ancestor's words: "My child, if you can't hold on, you can give up. No one will blame you." [I'm about to cry], I like it very much

Based on the original work, it has made innovations with a very online feel, and the rhythm is refreshing and not procrastinating. The protagonist's character is distinct and three-dimensional, he kills decisively without losing the bottom line, and it is very enjoyable to watch the counterattack and slap in the face all the way. The supporting characters also have their own memory points. They are no longer just tools. The love, resentment and resentment are written with tension. The plot combines passionate battles, secret adventures and counterattack growth, with intensive conflicts and exciting points, which is very suitable for online reading habits. The overall characters are vivid and the plot is compact. It has the excitement of the original work and the novelty of the original adaptation. It is a refreshing novel that is suitable for reading in one sitting.

This book is actually one of the best among God-killing fan fiction. Let's talk about the setting first. The protagonist is the successor of Fuxi. He has many abilities to unlock, and I really like to read the zodiac gossip. Secondly, the protagonist is well portrayed. He is funny at ordinary times but reliable at dangerous moments. There are many laughs in it (my favorite aspect), and almost all the regrets have been made up so far. Some people say that when they saw the snake demon, they felt that the protagonist knew the plot and was doing this and that, but they may not have read it carefully. It was mentioned earlier that the protagonist was sent to this world by Fuxi's ancestors. The ancestors asked the auspicious beast to give the protagonist some help. Something might have happened in the middle and the things brought by the auspicious beast were divided into five parts. After the snake demon got a share and advanced, there was a crisis that was different from the original plot. This was something that even if you knew the plot, you couldn't predict it. Moreover, the protagonist had to be wary of Azathoth's gaze, which made it inconvenient to do some things. Another point is that this incident is the beginning of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I think it is still necessary. Later, There's nothing wrong with the plot. The protagonist is perfect when you know the plot of God-Destroying. I hope you won't give up just after reading some reviews. This is indeed a good-looking book (I didn't read the reviews before reading this book. I only posted this review after reading it. And I've read other God-Destroying fanfics that have mixed reviews. In this situation, you may think that those five-stars that look very human-machine are fakes (in fact, I think most of them), but I think you have to try it yourself first whether it looks good or not. I hope you will read this book first before deciding whether to continue reading it.) Finally, I am not a procrastinator. Who can be idle and have no time to post such a comment on Dior [smile]

The style is interesting, there is no messy writing, there is no harem, and it is very comfortable to read.

Emmmmm, what can I say? It's a good fanfic. I just saw it where Lao Zhao finished killing the Ghost Face King. I heard many people say that this book is very cold, so I decided to give it a five-star review. Maybe we like different books, but I hope you can give him a chance and read a few chapters to experience it. The part where Lao Zhao kills the Ghost Face King is quite cool. It doesn't matter if you don't like it. We meet each other because we are destined to meet each other.

It's quite good to watch, at least among the Zhanshen fanfics I know, the plot is compact, there are laughs, the emotions are written in a more delicate way, the actions, details, language and so on are also very good, five stars recommended [smirk] [smirk]

This is a very good fan novel. I hope the author can develop more of the relationship between Su Yan and Hong Ying.

It's a good novel. It has some laughs and made me laugh. I'm very happy. I don't know if that's because I'm in a good mood. The plot follows the same process and timeline as most fics and anime. Of course, this is not a bad point. After all, it's a fic and it must be the same as imagined. To make up for regrets or something, as for the setting of the protagonist, it's normal. As for the strength, I don't know if it's because I like to read semi-invincible, invincible and fast-growing genre novels. I feel that the protagonist is not refreshing enough. To be precise, this novel is a slow-paced format. Overall, it is worth reading.

It's pretty good, it must be awesome, okay, but I won't watch it. I still prefer the protagonist to be calm and not harsh and talkative. The content is very interesting, but the protagonist's character is a bit abstract and funny, which doesn't suit my taste.

Well done, author, keep up the good work. Book review: The description of the characters is very vivid, the images are full and interesting, the plot is complete and coherent, and the laugh lines are well-paced. It also fulfills its mission as a fanfic and gives people a happy feeling. The pace of the plot advancement is also very good, and the emotional line is neither abrupt nor irritating, but very detailed. As it stands, this would be a good book if it were completed at this level. Suggestion: hurry up and push the emotional line. When the protagonist and Hongying officially start dating, there will be a layer of window paper between them, which will make people's hearts itch. You don't want a haircut, do you?

The writing is very good, the writing style is very delicate, and the content is also very funny. After reading Chapter 228, I feel that the content has little to do with the title of the book [face covering] Personally, I think the only drawback is that it's not enough to watch.

Although the pace of this book is slow, it sometimes pays attention to small details, and sometimes the speed is quite fast [laughing]. The author still spends some effort on character description. Compared with other fan fiction, he pays more attention to the description of character. Although some characters' personalities have been modified, it is within the acceptable range. This book also has some daily entertainment and comedy style. I have read more than two hundred chapters so far, and the content also has some of its own original style and plot. Everyone thinks it is comedy style. Sometimes the knife is caught off guard, and sometimes the knife in the hand at zero frame cannot be dodged [face covering]. Although it makes up for the regrets of the original work, the author himself has started anew and issued a new knife. Overall, it is worthy of a 9.5 Rating. It is a poisonous point. There are only a few, and they are all within the acceptable range (those without brains will be discussed separately). However, don't be immersed in the daily style of the early stage. I personally feel that there is a big knife waiting for us, and the author may have been planning for a long time [Note] Hmm... I just feel like the protagonist is talking too much nonsense lately.

I think this book is much better than the original in some aspects, whether it's writing or plot, and the protagonist's abilities are also very interesting. In fact, I was a little confused when I first watched God of Destruction. I felt that all the forbidden ruins and even the divine ruins in it were quite weak, and there were no interesting developments at all. They were just like primitive people, and there was not much integration with modern technology. This is great

The writing is very good, but the question is, can the protagonist fall in love? [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

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Come on, author, this book is the kind of adaptation of other novels that I would rather see. I just like this kind of book that focuses on a companion, okay!

It suits my taste very much, I like it very much [full]

It's very interesting. I've been following it for a long time. I personally think it's the best among all the God-destroying fanfics. You can tell that the author has written it very carefully, but it's just not enough to read. I'm about to read the latest chapter. Can you write a hundred chapters a day and let me see how good you are! ? ! !

It's not brainless, it's actually quite logical, and the style is a little lighter compared to the original work.

Extremely funny, very interesting, highly watchable, double thumbs up.