Daiyu Has a Younger Brother and Is in Trouble in the Red Mansion

The writing is really good. I didn't like Jia Baoyu very much before and always felt that he was not good enough for Sister Lin. However, because the high school teacher said that Jia Baoyu was pure, kind and respectful to girls, I have been reluctant to accept it. Now after reading this novel, I found that many netizens also have no rules in the Jia family and are very tired of overly pampering Jia Baoyu. I feel that I have finally let go after all these years. Hahaha, I hope that Sister Lin can finally have a good husband who truly loves and cares for her [Sending Hearts]

It is quite good. The writing is well-founded and not mindless at all. It gives people the feeling of interpreting the Dream of Red Mansions from another perspective. The key is to combine the historical and political environment of the book at that time and you will find that many psychological activities are true. It really opens a new door to the Dream of Red Mansions. As long as it is not unfinished, I will definitely pursue it to the end.

It's really good, not aggrieved, but has the little character traits of Daiyu in the original work. It shows that Daiyu is really good in all aspects. This book also shows the real Jia Mu. It's not that Jia Mu doesn't love Daiyu, but she does love her precious daughter, but this love is a bit insufficient compared with Baoyu. It is also a positive reaction. It is not what the Internet said in the first 80 chapters. Cao Xueqin wrote that Jia Mu loved Daiyu and then 40 chapters, Gao E wrote that he did not love Daiyu. The so-called love in the first 80 chapters was only for food and clothing, not to mention that Daiyu brought money herself. When it came to really giving Baoyu When choosing between profit and benefit for Daiyu, Baoyu is not an option but a must. Emmm, it's a bit biased. In short, it's really good-looking. It allows me to see another side of Sister Lin. It allows me to see Sister Lin who has the youthful vigor and the extraordinary demeanor of a scholarly family. Thirteen hairpins, each one has their own shining point and their own freshness. Every choice is not for the simple love between children [shy][shy][shy]

Jingyan is reborn, smart and prudent, and works hard to give her sister a good future. Daiyu is no longer sensitive and thoughtful because she has a group of people who love her, and is much more wanton. Lin Ruhai works hard to support the children. Wang Xifeng and Jia Lian support each other and advance and retreat together, full of true love. Many others also have a good ending, which is really good! One character I like very much is Lin Xiangming. He lost his parents when he was young. He was raised by the clan's kindergarten without a father or mother. He later entered the clan school and was very talented. At the age of fourteen, he won the fourth place among scholars. He was a well-deserved favored son of heaven. However, his family asked him to give up the imperial examination and work as a clerk for Lin Ruhai. , He is also very decisive, "I am a human being first, and then a scholar. To be a human being, you must be filial to your parents, be kind to your sisters, be honest, know etiquette, and know how to repay your kindness. I am single, and my uncle has given me the gift of reincarnation. It is what I should do as a human being to be sent by him." He is really a very upright and straightforward person! The writing is excellent, the plot is smooth and natural, and each character has his or her own characteristics. It's really great!

This is the Red Mansion fanfic that I feel most willing to read. I like Sister Lin who is favored by the group so much, and I hate those crooked melons and cracked jujubes in Jia Baoyu's mansion. The legitimate son of the Lin family is different

It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was like other fanfics. After reading it, I realized that it was particularly interesting. Daiyu had a good ending and was loved by the whole family; the legitimate son of the Lin family, not to mention, was very good. As for the shortcomings, it is that it is not finished yet. In short, it is not a loss to invest in the stock.

So far, I dare say this is the best Red Mansion novel I have ever read! If Sister Lin has a direct brother... Not to mention the writing style, the plot, and the concept are novel enough and do not fall into clichés. At the same time, it is also my attitude towards Jia Baoyu and the Jia family. There is no excessive darkening. The Sanchun sisters also have their own shining points, and the protagonist also has his own growth. He is not some standard prodigy champion. A true depiction of the situation in the Lin Mansion

Very good. I understand all the unreasonable aspects of the 87 Dream of Red Mansions TV series before, which made me confused when I watched them. The plot is very good and very close to the novel, and the author's own innovative plot is not obtrusive.

Watching it with relish, Lin Daiyu finally no longer had to be blinded by Jia Baoyu, that ignorant idiot. Finally, I no longer lurked in the big dyeing vat at Jia's house. The author's writing is good and conforms to the logic of the original book. He gives Daiyu an excellent brother.

So far, the writing is just right, no OOC or confusion. The characters are original but very harmonious, and Sister Lin is not used as a background to divert traffic. The setting is reasonable and logical, and there is no system or casual cheating. It is really popular. It is very friendly to readers who like Sister Lin, the new characters are all lovable, the female characters are all cute, and I also like the original character descriptions. The current single-arrow Li Yanqing is also not greasy and knows etiquette. Looking forward to the follow-up! ! !

This is the first time I have read The Dream of Red Mansions. The writing is smooth from word to line, and the author's ideas and concepts are very coordinated. The main line is to prevent Lin Daiyu from being wronged. From the initial departure from Jia's Mansion, to the later raising shore line, each character is very richly portrayed, and now the destruction of Zhen's Mansion. There are many perspectives to think about. Two flowers bloom, each represents one. I spent a whole day catching up on the latest chapter today, highly recommended!

This book is really good to read. I have also read about four or five Red Mansion fanfics. This book feels very close to the original work. It mainly refers to the government affairs in Jiangnan. The reason for Lin Ruhai's death in the original work should also be similar. In the plot, Daiyu➕Brother, having a legitimate son will indeed give the Lin family a different future. And it is written from the perspective of the male protagonist. It feels quite different. The younger brother taking the imperial examination is also the fastest way to support the Lin family. After all, both father and son are pure ministers. In terms of characters, Daiyu's character is finally no longer cautious. She has a proud character that belongs to a family of civil servants. I am very happy to see this. And I think they also portrayed the hot and spicy Jia family very well. After all, a shrewd person like Sister Feng will still make a comeback when given the chance. It depends on how the author writes it later. It's all good now.

The author's writing style is super interesting. Yingchun has a naive lover, and Sister Lin meets a naive Li brother who can please her. I really like this kind of boy with a naive little sunshine personality. I hope they can all be happy.

The writing is really good, with a flavor of Hongxue, and the character description is also very delicate. However, I don't know what kind of man Daiyu is suitable for, and I feel a little reluctant to let it go. I hope the author can give Daiyu a good home, and the heroine, please give it a try!

I'm currently up to chapter 159. It's very interesting. It's very interesting. I saw a different Daiyu and the unspeakable vast world outside the Red Mansion. After seeing clearly the reality of that woman's low status, I was even more impressed by Daiyu. All in all, this book has its shortcomings. It's good to read and the characters are well drawn. Of course, the premise is that we don't worry about who Daiyu chooses. I am a Daiyu party, but I have to say that who she chooses is Daiyu's freedom and not even the author's decision alone. Daiyu is sober. Her character has already been formed. No matter who she is, Daiyu's character is excellent. Why should she make a conclusion so early? It's best to let everything take its course.

It's very beautiful. I can only say that this is not the protagonist's Dream of Red Mansions, but a group portrait. Everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses, and it's really cool to see the counterattack! ! ! Who understands that I have watched Dream of Red Mansions so many times, and finally saw an author openly and honestly write out the insidiousness of the Jia family?

It's very interesting. I've read a lot of Red Mansion fanfiction. This book is very smooth in terms of plot and character logic. The best part is that there is no messy time-traveling in the book. The time-traveling and new characters appearing are not obtrusive and have a logical relationship with the original characters.

Sister Lin, it's best to have no CP, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, if so, could it be Li Yanqing, a perfect combination of one civilized and one martial, and the puppy is also very cute!

It's really good to watch, but when I saw some parts that said Xiao Li was not good, I personally stand by Lin Li [crying] Xiao Su is also very good, and is too calm, which gives me a feeling of a big boss. I would also like to see Xiao Li grow up and correct the problem of being unable to open his mouth. The character design of Zhen Wan'er is also very good, and Jia She is also very good. Zhen Chun'er's character can actually be more ruthless. In the later parts, I feel that the characters of Baochai and Tanchun have been downplayed, but I believe there will still be explosive moments.

The main character of the Jia family is well portrayed. Jia She is no longer a flat dude. The moment the three urgent orders appear, his image suddenly becomes fuller. He is the one who is greedy for life and afraid of death, and he is also the one who defends the border to the death. I have endured humiliation for half my life, lying drunkenly playing music and singing, hiding my pride and empty ambitions. He sacrificed his life for ten days, and his blood was sprinkled at the border to show his loyal soul, and finally reward his innocent heart.

It looks good, and the buying lines of Daiyu and Li Su are also attractive. At present, I support Li, because Li has more shaping and growth lines, and Li's family is more familiar to Daiyu. Although many people criticized Li's father, Li's mother and grandmother were very good, and Li's father also learned lessons from several people. In comparison, Su was a little less sculpted.

At first I thought the rating was a little low and I wasn't going to read it, but when I saw the number of readers, wow, I looked at the comments and they were all overwhelmingly positive, wow!!! So I jumped in and gave it a try, and I couldn't stop it at first glance. I just hope that the follow-up CP will not be bad. Currently, Daiyu is getting married, and our protagonist is also getting married. Although I am secretly looking forward to a cool and domineering little attack, but at present, no one is really worthy of it. I just hope that when there is no suitable candidate, don't force it. I would rather the protagonist be beautiful alone!!! Finally, cheers to the author, keep writing!! The author of such good writing style is simply a treasure, I love it!!!!!!

This book is really great, and it also rewrote Lin Daiyu's ending, allowing her to live more comfortably. In fact, I think the author's analysis of these characters is really good. After careful consideration, I found that I can find out the reasons for the decline of Jia's family. At the same time, some words can reflect the collision between the protagonist's correct values ​​​​and that era, which I feel is quite inspiring. And they also buried clues, which is really cool! Come on, look forward to seeing Sister Lin's bright future [Blow a kiss][Please update]

Love to watch [Adoration], Daiyu's biological brother saw Daiyu's ending in the form of a soul, and relived his life. Daiyu had a father and a brother and no longer had to compromise. It was impossible with Jia Baoyu, but Daiyu would have a husband who would mind protecting her from lightning. In that era It is impossible to have no husband. It deeply analyzes the death of Jia Min and his son in the original work. The political struggle in Jia's house and the court is also very in-depth (at least I have to read the explanation given by the author or Duan Ping to understand it [thinking]). Many explanations of the original work are also very reasonable.

It's so well written. I love reading this kind of story where everyone works together and is full of warmth, and it doesn't stick to love. There is no official match until the extra episode. Daiyu is sweet, and the emperor and Lin Ruhai are also sweet (young brothers and close friends). They trust each other and support each other throughout their lives. It's great! I personally don't hate him, including the Prince Consort. In fact, the few things he writes are a bit exaggerated. Everyone in the book has a high sense of morality, but I may not be able to empathize with him. His so-called calculations are for the country and not for himself. It is impossible for everyone to be glorious. He has not done anything wrong and should not be miserable to the point of betraying everyone. Warning, there are many typos, and the names of characters are also wrong. Those who are serious should proceed with caution. I just finished reading the game while ignoring the typos for the sake of the plot [laughing and crying]

As a boy, I really like Lin Daiyu, and I have watched it a lot among Red Mansions fans. Many of the novels that were advertised as cool actually got offended, especially the ones that failed more than the male protagonist of the book. Some princes and first-class marquises ended up being controlled by Mrs. Jia in the Jia Mansion, let alone the old lady Jia. They were pointed at the nose and scolded by the big-faced treasure. There was also the eldest son of King Zhongshun who was beaten and scolded by Mrs. Wang and said she wanted to kill his whole family, but ended up with a few slaps in the face. I wonder if those authors were able to write such plots if their brains were gnawed by dogs. This book is considered to be one of the best among the fics I have ever read. It is entertaining and takes into account both the plot and depth. The characters are also rich in layers and are not just for the sake of enjoyment.

This book deserves a five-star rating. It can be seen that the author has a deep understanding of Red Mansions. The plot has been extended and supplemented based on the original work of Red Mansions as much as possible. Although it is not perfect, the flaws are not concealed. After reading Jia She's extra chapter in more than 200 chapters, I decided to give it a five-star rating first. The author has brought to life a madman who is so lustful and stupid but still noble. Yes, there is no contradiction at all, and he has killed many people. I tied it with more than 400 chapters, so I deducted one point. I give my own evaluation very pertinently. I hope it can help friends who want to follow it (spoilers are missing, so don't read if you don't like it) Later, it seems that the author was changed, or the manuscript was not corrected. There are many typos and garbled sentences that affect the perception. Then there is a point where I think it has gone too far, but the beholder has a different opinion. The author originally gave Daiyu a suitor, the son of Li's consort, who was very straightforward and innocent and had a secret crush on her for several years. Later, the stranger-like Mr. Su came out. At first, readers had a high impression of Li, but as the author wrote, he probably wanted to change Su to be the cp. , So there was a scene where the prince-in-law wanted his son to go to the battlefield, so he used Daiyu to provoke his son. He provoked his son by saying that Daiyu's father admired Mr. Su very much. Afterwards, he realized that he was wrong, and sincerely apologized for not using Daiyu as a raft to provoke his son. Because of this, Daiyu was not so close to his family. Daiyu's father used to be good brothers with his consort, but he never paid much attention to him because of this matter. Then several years passed, and Daiyu's father also continued to ignore the consort. People around him still criticized him in various ways, saying that he felt cold and so on, and the consort felt guilty. I think the author went too far and used too much force. I like Daiyu very much, whether it is the original work or a fan, but this scene makes me think that Daiyu is a crystal baby, which cannot be touched or touched, otherwise he will be like a sinner through the ages. I can't say that the prince is right, I can only say that it is not a big mistake, and he will not use so much force. After all the efforts, the only guess is that the author wants to change the CP and cut off the possibility of Li, so he blackmailed his father.

A fanfic with a score of 9 or above for the awakening of a strong woman. Although she is Lin Daiyu's younger brother, she is still a beloved daughter in all aspects. Recommended to read. The book is logically compact, with three-dimensional characters and plots. It is very interesting to read. From the content point of view, it is a good book. However, some of the characters and plots in the original version of Dream of Red Mansions should be the author's own subjective color (please don't get involved if you mind). Another small flaw is that the author's ability to write poems is average. In terms of plot, many characters in the novel are well treated, such as Daiyu's family, Jia Lian's family, etc. The new screenwriter's plot is in line with the setting of the book and the plot is rich. I like the description of Jia Baoyu very much. I've seen a little bit of Red Mansions before and it felt very special. . . You're an adult, you don't know shit, you get in among women every day, either acting crazy or invisibly harming others. Daiyu Baochai also likes and protects everyone in the Jia family, which is annoying to watch. In addition, I also like the idea of ​​female awakening. Female videos should be about strong women, otherwise, why would you write about them? Are diaosi counterattacking?

The ending of this book is the best I have ever seen. This ending breaks the fixed shackles of the so-called feudal ethics and is also a subversion of Cheng-Zhu Neo-Confucianism and Ming and Qing ethics. It makes people dream back to the prosperous age of the Tang Dynasty, when seas, rivers and rivers were clear and unified. Fanfiction is often about dancing with shackles, but in this book, I think that although there are still shackles from the original work and feudal ethics, it is also the background and foundation of the Dream of Red Mansions. It can be said to be holding the shackles in the hand, shaking them and playing with them, turning the shackles into help, creating a good online novel [Love][Love][Smile][Smile]

Author, please hurry up and write. It is best to write that they are married, have children, and live happily together. I like this book very much. The language style is very comfortable. The protagonist's IQ is online. There is no system flow or all kinds of unrealistic things happening. I guess they will be a pair for life. Nowadays, many protagonists of Dream of Red Mansions have harems, and sometimes they are slapped in the face. This writing is very comfortable.