Mine*****

At present, it seems to be a very classic and refreshing article, a very classic structure, and a very classic routine. There's nothing poisonous about it. Maybe the system giving foxes is an innovative point, but it is very different from traditional Shuangwen. It's a good read for a novice, and even an old bookworm can guess what happens next.

I have just read the latest chapter. Although the story is only at the beginning, I can already see that there are many relationships between the characters in the novel and the world view is also very grand. But the most important thing is that the male protagonist and several (should be two now?) Female protagonists are described in detail. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist has gradually developed from just calculating interests to a companionship of shared adventures. It can be predicted that the relationship in the future will continue to deepen and become sweeter! I wish the author to work hard and write a perfect work!

It's good to read. I finally found a novel with a non-deceptive introduction. I hope to accept Luo Xiaoying, this character is well created. But I still like the fox heroine, but the protagonist is too weak, but after five systems are put together, it should be a qualitative change. Hope to update soon

The protagonist should be improved quickly. I feel that the pace of novels is not popular now. It is full of bitterness and hatred, and life is already very depressing and powerless. It is not very pleasant to read a novel in which the protagonist is incompetent. I do not deny that the plot is a great novel, but I still prefer a novel that is not too stressful. I give it five stars [laughing]

I came across an interesting book on a boring day. I was so fascinated by it that I didn't expect to read it all in one day. Personally I think the author's synopsis is quite good, but the story is somewhat lacking. There are some shortcomings in the writing and it might be a bit difficult to write, but the story is actually pretty good. I think two heroines are enough (no more). Whether it's scenes, emotions... These are all very challenging for writing. If there are too many heroines, it will be difficult to write. There are many good books because there are too many female protagonists. When the male protagonists fall in love with each other, the story collapses and it makes people feel uncomfortable. The combat power doesn't feel very detailed. The author could consider speeding up the protagonist's training speed by not following the old routine (level-up combat), so that he can be on the same level or slightly higher than his opponent when fighting with others. At present, the protagonist's talent should have all attributes. Personally, I feel that it is a bit mixed, and the combat power will easily collapse later. The current timeline is a bit slow, the protagonist has too little actual combat experience, and the instant kill of the wild demon is a bit too abrupt (the wild demon is one level higher than the protagonist and has lived hundreds of years longer, and he should have a lot of practical combat experience), and the appearance and end of this sidekick are too hasty. The ending of the first chapter is also too hasty, and many characterization and polishing contents are not described. The characters enter and exit too quickly. The background has names and characters, but they exit in the blink of an eye, which fails to give readers a sense of involvement. I spent half an hour briefly evaluating it. I don't know if the author can read it, but I still hope that this book will get better and better. The details, plot, and writing can all get better and better. The back part feels too rushed. Plot wise, detailed I didn't have a good grasp of the festival and rhythm. Give people a feeling I feel like I've finished the draft, and I'm scribbling on the draft Just change it, don't worry about the details topic, anyway, this is my outline, the development of the plot As long as Zhan follows the original route, it doesn't matter. Question. Then it ends hastily.

The writing is really beautiful. It is rare to see such high-quality novels in 🍅. The characters are well portrayed and the plot is very compact. The male and female protagonists have online IQs. It is really good [heartfelt]

It is real, the protagonist is not brainless, the details are in place, the characters are three-dimensional, and although the protagonist has shortcomings, they are not the kind of shortcomings that make people hateful (for example, he often spits out Chinese quintessence, and always looks like a fool if he doesn't clarify his words). If the title of the book is slightly changed, it will be a god among gods.

Well written. Leave your name before the fire.

It's well written, but it's a pity that Tomato readers have problems. If the author doesn't aim to make money, I hope the author can keep writing according to his own ideas.

The author's writing is so good. His reading and understanding of ancient books made me feel ashamed after not having read much classical literature in several years. I didn't know where to start boasting. I hope this book becomes a hit soon! Finally, I hope the author will be kinder to the little witch [crying] I can't bear to see the Fengchen woman get hurt again.

Looks good, nothing bad about it so far. [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Please update] Gone? [Cry][cry]

After reading nearly a hundred chapters, I just found the plot very attractive, the character settings quite novel, and I also quite like the main characters. Based on the progress I've seen so far, I think it's appropriate to give it 9.5 Points and upwards.

Nice! Looking forward to the follow-up

Beautiful and well written

The writing is very good and the characters are fleshed out. Is it a single female protagonist? In fact, I personally don't have much sympathy for Luo Xiaoying. Although she has a tragic experience, we cannot ignore how many innocent people she killed in the Killer Pavilion. It is also her greed to try to win the male protagonist's Five Elements physique. Just because of a person's past sufferings, you cannot cover up and forgive his past bad deeds. One code equals one code, that's what I think

It's very, very beautiful. Please update it more. It's not enough. [Sending my heart]

Good luck. The two heroines seem to like each other very much so far. Although the plot is a bit slow, I am still looking forward to the follow-up. Hope to add more interesting love daily life

The writing is very good and the literary talent is outstanding.

It's really rare to see such a beautiful and refined vixen. Most of them are naturally charming. I didn't expect that this one here is so serious and charming. The female characters here are vivid and lively, and they are real people. The fox maid is smart, knowledgeable, considerate, and repays kindness. She is gentle when she cares for others, and she is brave when protecting others. The male protagonist is the most inconspicuous. The latest demon oiran killer is also charming and charming. The female protagonists in it are all so well written. Unfortunately, they do not have a harem, but they are so good that the male protagonist is not worthy.

It's really beautiful. I can't put it down after reading it. It's a beautiful and connotative writing style.

The character descriptions are exquisite, the plot is compact and orderly, and the world training system is also very complete. But why is the rating not high? I don't understand.

It's pretty good, the writing is also very good, but the introduction is too hasty and it won't easily attract the appropriate readers. Come on!

The writing is good and the style is sweet, but I read it early and the book is a bit short. I won't be able to read it again after a while.

Well written, keep it up [smile][smile][smile]

Looks great, looking forward to the follow-up! ! !

The writing is good, but why is there no traffic?

Support me, I watched it all night but it was a bit lacking.

Personally I feel very good and worth watching

It's really well written, and the story is engaging and moving. The training system is also very complete. The character dialogue is concise and sufficient. It makes people not want to make a mistake in a word. His writing skills are also very deep. Added to bookshelf. I just feel that the current plot is advancing too quickly and is overwhelming.

It's a pretty good story, the writing is delicate, and the female characters are well developed. The current problem is that combat power suppression is a bit obvious. The role of the male protagonist is a mystery, and the sense of substitution is not strong. Even the male protagonist skips many situations directly. It feels like the fox girl is the male protagonist, and the male protagonist is just a supporting role. I hope the battle strength doesn't collapse later. Or like those piles of articles on cultivating immortals. When the combat power is high, you can only go to the next world. That's funny. Finished the first volume. Downgrade one star. Mainly the author is arranging supporting characters, especially in the battle at the end of the first volume. The action logic of these supporting characters with obvious strong combat capabilities is very problematic. The first thing that made me think of it was the Metal Slug game I played back then. The leader is captured by an octopus alien, and those hostile soldiers immediately become friendly forces and fight the aliens together with the protagonist. But here, Prince Wow has been replaced by monsters, and the power level of our human race has been infiltrated by monsters. I will continue to work for the fake prince. Although my job is to catch monsters and suppress them, long live the fake prince, I will kill the protagonist group. So the behavior of the goldfish here is simply... Then, in the previous plot, Huo, who solved the case like a god with martial arts and superior intelligence, could obviously use his identity, such as blocking Hong Si, and then deceived his colleagues, saying that the assassin was controlled by him, and the top priority now was that the prince was replaced by the demon clan. Ask everyone to catch the monster together. Stirring the water and taking the cold shoulder will give you more room to maneuver whether you want to fight or flee. As a result, the author forcibly removed his intelligence, which was as high as 98, and died immediately. Sherlock Holmes turns into Hodo instantly... This plot kill arrangement... Speechless Then there's the protagonist. Prince, the second-in-command of the human race... The most important basis for maintaining the power level of the human race is blood, right? They have become monsters and no longer human. Such huge evidence of treason will not be used. You are the son of the warlord, the eldest son of the leader of the prince's hostile forces. It doesn't matter that the author suppressed his fighting power and made him look like a transparent person. There were so many officials with good martial arts skills nearby. He shouted at them, but in the end, his intelligence was castrated by the author. He would only be reckless... So the plot at the end of the first volume seems very baffling. Especially the behavioral logic of the powerful supporting characters is strange. For the sake of the established situation, the author deliberately killed the plot and deliberately reduced the intelligence. This kind of trace is too heavy.