Forgive Me, My Lord

At present, it seems to be a very classic and refreshing article, a very classic structure, and a very classic routine. There's nothing poisonous about it. Maybe the system giving foxes is an innovative point, but it is very different from traditional Shuangwen. It's a good read for a novice, and even an old bookworm can guess what happens next.

It's good to read. I finally found a novel with a non-deceptive introduction. I hope to accept Luo Xiaoying, this character is well created. But I still like the fox heroine, but the protagonist is too weak, but after five systems are put together, it should be a qualitative change. Hope to update soon

I have just read the latest chapter. Although the story is only at the beginning, I can already see that there are many relationships between the characters in the novel and the world view is also very grand. But the most important thing is that the male protagonist and several (should be two now?) Female protagonists are described in detail. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist has gradually developed from just calculating interests to a companionship of shared adventures. It can be predicted that the relationship in the future will continue to deepen and become sweeter! I wish the author to work hard and write a perfect work!

I came across an interesting book on a boring day. I was so fascinated by it that I didn't expect to read it all in one day. Personally I think the author's synopsis is quite good, but the story is somewhat lacking. There are some shortcomings in the writing and it might be a bit difficult to write, but the story is actually pretty good. I think two heroines are enough (no more). Whether it's roles, emotions... These are all very challenging for writing. If there are too many heroines, it will be difficult to write. There are many good books because there are too many female protagonists. When the male protagonists fall in love with each other, the story collapses and it makes people feel uncomfortable. The combat power doesn't feel very detailed. The author could consider speeding up the protagonist's training speed by not following the old routine (level-up combat), so that he can be at the same level or slightly higher than his opponent when fighting with others. At present, the protagonist's talent should have all attributes. Personally, I feel that it is a bit mixed, and the combat power will easily collapse later. The current timeline is a bit slow, the protagonist has too little actual combat experience, and it was a bit too sudden to see the instant kill of the wild demon (the wild demon is one level higher than the protagonist and has lived hundreds of years longer, and he should have a lot of practical combat experience), and the appearance and end of this sidekick are too hasty. The ending of the first chapter is also too hasty, and many characterization and polishing contents are not described. The characters enter and exit too quickly. The background has names and characters, but they exit in the blink of an eye, which fails to give readers a sense of involvement. I spent half an hour briefly evaluating it. I don't know if the author can read it, but I still hope that this book will get better and better. The details, plot, and writing can all get better and better. The back part feels too rushed. Plot wise, detailed I didn't have a good grasp of the festival and rhythm. Give people a feeling I feel like I've finished the draft, and I'm scribbling on the draft Just change it, don't worry about the details topic, anyway, this is my outline, the development of the plot As long as Zhan follows the original route, it doesn't matter. Question. Then it ends hastily.

The protagonist should be improved quickly. I feel that the pace of novels is not popular now. It is full of bitterness and hatred, and life is already very depressing and powerless. It is not very pleasant to read a novel in which the protagonist is incompetent. I do not deny that the plot is a great novel, but I still prefer a novel that is not too stressful. I give it five stars [laughing]

The writing is really beautiful. It is rare to see such high-quality novels in 🍅. The characters are well portrayed and the plot is very compact. The male and female protagonists have online IQs. It is really good [heartfelt]

It is real, the protagonist is not brainless, the details are in place, the characters are three-dimensional, and although the protagonist has shortcomings, they are not the kind of shortcomings that make people hateful (for example, he often spits out Chinese quintessence, and always looks like a fool if he doesn't clarify his words). If the title of the book is slightly changed, it will be a god among gods.

After reading nearly a hundred chapters, I just found the plot very attractive, the character settings quite novel, and I also quite like the main characters. Based on the progress I've seen so far, I think it's appropriate to give it 9.5 Points and upwards.

It's well written, but it's a pity that Tomato readers have problems. If the author doesn't aim to make money, I hope the author can keep writing according to his own ideas.

The author's writing is so good. His reading and understanding of ancient books made me feel ashamed after not having read much classical literature in several years. I didn't know where to start boasting. I hope this book becomes a hit soon! Finally, I hope the author will be kinder to the little witch 😢 I can't bear to see the Fengchen woman get hurt again.