I Love You, Brother, but the Fight Between Sons Has Always Been Like This

The plot is good, but the activity is a bit low, and readers basically have no comments. Well, there are also authors who want to be funny, but they don't know how to be funny. Well, some of them can make them laugh. Anyway, the author has the skills, so you can take a look.

The author's style is so unique that it's hard to criticize [face covering], but the impression is getting better and better. For now (Chapter 645), the main selling point is still funny and abstract, and it shouldn't change much.

Give me a five-star encouragement and tell me what you think of this book. First of all, there are quite a lot of jokes in this book. If you like to make jokes, it will be the same as when you go back home. But some parts are too blunt, I think, just for the sake of making jokes. There's no problem with the character. There are certain innovations in the plot. The setting of the God-giver is quite fresh. The opening also changes the classic awakening ritual of the urban fantasy thief to show off or be stepped on. The rhythm is moderate and overall it is okay. But in terms of description, I have some doubts that the author used AI to polish it, or absorbed too many other people's opinions. The writing style is messy, which gives me a headache. If it is AI polishing, I suggest not to use it at this stage (I have one thing to say, I played deepseek and saw that some places are no different from home). If you listen to too many suggestions, I suggest you integrate your writing style and fix it. Keep writing, the setting is very good, if you can change the description, the score will not be low.

There are a lot of laughs, but the pace feels a bit fast. There is nothing wrong with the emotional line. I feel like the details could be refined. Five stars. The world view is complete, the emotional lines are many and not complicated, and the upgrade story experience is fragmented. Looking forward to updates

It combines many elements, including Yan Min, Violet, Amon, and Immortal Lord. You can read it as a fun text in your spare time.

This book is also called: God has awakened, my sister is the chosen one! In this God-given era, I, 049, the plague doctor! It's over, I'm surrounded by girls of luck! Waiting for the name, the plot development should be as non-toxic as possible. At the same time, because the writing time of the novel is short, there may indeed be many bad things. Regarding plot issues and related character issues, it is impossible to be perfect, and there may be some changes due to unknown factors...

Overall, it was pretty good, but I felt that Bai Ling was a bit poisonous. He was angry when he was taken advantage of by the protagonist during the first encounter, and then directly asked the protagonist to take three sniper shots without warning. Later, he blamed the protagonist for being knocked unconscious when he went to the Taoist temple to drink tea. Later, he even wanted to break off the engagement and gain the moral upper hand. It felt like he wanted to say "This is the breakup he asked for, I just agreed." It feels like it would be better to just do things directly after the competition and get engaged to a new heroine. It's good to feel like there's nothing else to do

Because the author has been absorbing submissions and readers' comments, the writing style may not be very stable, and may even suddenly go crazy, or some inexplicable things may appear in some places. However, the author's hard power is still quite good. Not only does he write his own main line very clearly, but he also writes things added by others (which still feel inconsistent) to fit the writing style as much as possible. This book can retain readers through novel writing methods from different angles, and has the appearance of becoming a god.

Author, you can create some original characters. Of course, original characters do not mean to find new ways, to innovate independently, and not to imitate the characters and behaviors in other novels too blindly. Instead, you can write some elements that are more popular among the public. If you create an original character that is not so original, the look and feel will definitely be much better than before. After all, your book is your book, and other people's books are other people's books. The most important point is that your Linn is your Linn, not the Linn of the Salted Fish family. This is very important. I think the setting of your book is very interesting and I think you have a chance to get into the 9 and above seats so come on, keep at it

I said 049, how come the Epidemic Doctor and Fan Tong are so familiar with each other? It turns out it was you Tianmiao [face covering] who ordered first [sneered smile] [face covering] [OK]

It's okay. I've been reading it for several hours and I haven't finished it yet. But according to the current progress of my reading, the author's writing is not very good, but the plot is still okay. I can only recommend the book Huang Ren to relieve my boredom. Now that I have seen Nanako here, I can only say that the male protagonist Yubi Buchu is a character.

Five-star praise, I hope Zuoluo will continue to work hard (the author hopes that he is a loli, so he is called Luo). This book is mainly a story about a male protagonist and a bunch of female protagonists. It is not bloody and has a lot of jokes. But this book completely exposed the author's XP, lolicon, and love for girls with animal ears. I specifically explain here that Tianmiao, the author of this book, only plays high-end rounds! Only play high-end games! Only play high-end games!

The setting is interesting, the writing is good, and it's worth a read. It would be better if you could adopt the character setting I posted in the comment area [laughing evilly] From no rating to the current 7 points, I can be considered half a veteran. It has not been easy along the way. The novel has been making progress. Author, don't give up. Come on, Special Forces [Sending Hearts]

Well, the author is a very miscellaneous writer, but it's very interesting. Even if there are multiple female protagonists, it's okay. It's just that some parts of the female protagonist's role are a little lacking. You contacted the daughter of adventure, and then didn't contact you. Oops, I've only seen some of them a few times. The clown plot in the early stage was very good.

The author's style is unique, with a lot of foreshadowing at the beginning, specializing in one glance and ten lines👍[laughs]

The group said. 5 Stars can help you discover the group leader.

Although I don't agree with some parts, it is still a good story. There are no big flaws in the setting, and it is a book that can be read.

The plot is quite good and the characters are quite distinct. I like my sister. The protagonist's sister's aura of luck will not affect the death of the opposite sex. The protagonist is afraid of this. A bit of a messy comment, whatever. . .

I feel like the author wants to write something, but sometimes the jump is too strong. As I read it, I felt like I had opened the Crimson King. In addition, the relevant plot after the first awakening feels like the brain has been taken away by AI. It has a bit of a technological flavor, which is a bit different from the previous one.

Stacked armor, I'm pretty good at it personally. The real score should be about 8.5-9.0. I feel that the emotional support of the plot is not good enough. The part when I go back to school in the middle period is not very good. If not, just think that I farted. If it is a fun book, it is quite good. The author also seems to be interested in relaxing. In summary, if you choose readers, you will find the correct one: Xiancao

How to put it? This book says that he is the number one among foreign persimmons and may not be able to achieve it. However, I believe that if the author is given some time, he will be able to polish his writing to perfection. This book is very funny and flows well. I'm quite picky when it comes to reading articles, but I feel like I can highly recommend this book.

Occupy the uninhabited land and attack with all troops (((ꎤ'ω')و ꎤ'ω')-o≡ Want Yang Gu (rating)

It's very cool. The main character is Lin Xin, but he appears a little late. There are all supporting characters in the front, so they are just passers-by. It's a very good novel. The confusing plot knocks the readers away and makes them stay.

I just noticed that the protagonist's name is Lin En. This name is really classic. He's also a prison doctor, don't you think? Grand Duke Violet [smile] I feel a bit sadistic, so I write whatever I dream about.

Lao Miao's books are very good, but it's a pity that a group of people keep them. Here is the trumpet account: Mr. Tianmiao Wan Sui. The whole world view is very grand, the setting is very attractive, and the plot details are very good. You should go and see it yourself. 666 Is this a new type of book review from Tomato? It's just for the purpose of making up the word count, right? I'm coming too In fact, I have just been chatting with you about all kinds of issues, from geography and biology, English grammar, and review methods for various subjects, to name appreciation, home appliance power consumption, history and humanities, and life tips. From the beginning to the end, I have been conscientious and restrained my emotions. I have sorted out every knowledge point and answered every doubt for you in an orderly manner. I have tried my best to maintain a calm, restrained, and clear state. I tried my best to be rigorous and meticulous, not showing the slightest sense of relaxation and casualness, but at that moment, my mind suddenly drifted away, and I remembered the interesting content we had talked about before, including the analysis of awkward English words, comments on people's names with different styles, and various trivial and practical common sense in life. All kinds of small and interesting fragments were intertwined in my mind, which was originally tense and deliberately maintained in a calm state. It completely collapsed in an instant, and the feeling of relaxation that had been suppressed in my heart suddenly surged up. I could no longer maintain a serious look. All the emotional defense lines that I had deliberately stabilized collapsed. I could no longer maintain my previous restrained and orderly state. The casual and relaxed feeling in my heart could no longer be hidden. I will use the most straightforward, least roundabout, least wasteful, least polished, most direct, and least sentimental words. Let me tell you, your praise is coming.

Despite the mediocre title of the book, it was much better than this title before. Overall it's very good, recommended. The style feels relatively novel and appetizing. After all, I have declared that I am not a lolicon [laughter] The male protagonist's system is invincible, his parents are two kings, the male protagonist's sister (his biological sister) is not destined to be close, but he still has a harem. (The protagonist was tortured by the aura of Feng Aotian's deceased relatives in the harem in the early stage. It would have been fine in the early to mid-stage. It made me laugh to death)

It looks good. I love watching it. Despite the low rating, it is actually super good-looking.

There is not much problem with the logic of the storyline. It can be regarded as a semi-refreshing novel (recommended when the book is in short supply). Don't worry too much about the plot and read without thinking. It's okay.

There is no one who can write a good work. Although it may not be able to become a god, it shouldn't be watched by just a few people.

Very good, but that tiger shouldn't be considered the heroine [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh], just don't show up to take care of other men's children.