Training Routine at Hogwarts

I rely on my good skills, and I feel that the basic skills are very solid. The protagonist is very handsome and not brainless, Long Aotian. He is better than most fans. The narrative development is also very comfortable. The character design of the protagonist is also well established and does not feel out of place. In short, it is good-looking☝ and it will definitely occupy a place in HP in the future. Malfoy, Harry and the protagonist, you three must be fine, that's what mom is looking forward to😭😭😭

It's a bit sad to tie it up immediately. This book is really good-looking. The most important thing for a novel like this is that it is not OOC and the protagonist cannot be too flat. This one is very well done, and it feels like reading the original but a comfortable version. Here are some points for your reference 1. The protagonist of this book is cultivating immortality, which has a bit of an invincible feel to it, but I personally think it's innocuous (because the plot is so good) and I wasn't meant to read it to develop. It is worth noting that the protagonist is a real person, Dan Ruju, and there is no vulgar plot about insisting on participating in the Triwizard Tournament. 2. If you usually pay more attention to the characters, you can watch it with confidence. In my opinion, there is no OOC, but there is ambiguity. 3. The author of the plot of this book also said that it has a happy ending, so in daily life, everyone is not as miserable as in the original work. Let's make up for the regrets in the original work. 4. The writing style is not as outstanding as the popular ones, but it is much better than other works of the same type. If you don't pay special attention to it, you can feel free to read it. Does the author dare to publish 300 chapters a day? It scares us to death. Since I read your article, I have never read other articles of the same type. You have to be responsible.

Really good, good, good, good, good! ! ! ! Ning Xiao and Professor are really warm and cozy, he really treats Xiao as his own child🥺🥺🥺 and Xiao's character is really cute The whole book hit me hard XP Please give me more updates, thank you to the author! !

The author privately added some settings based on his own plot. Some of the fights and life details are described in an immersive way. The characters in the original work are basically described in a positive light, with relatively few OOCs. There is basically no personal evaluation of the author involved, and they are all relatively objective. The male protagonist also has a good grasp of the child's psychology. He is afraid of being criticized and tries to escape by acting coquettishly when he gets into trouble. It's really cute. The male protagonist's life used to be a Spartan education, but now his life is like a family drinking wine, so that the ambition and decisiveness shown by the male protagonist occasionally reminds him of his background in cultivating immortals. It's just that it makes me sad when I think about the male protagonist living so long while his young best friend is slowly leaving. The experiences a person experiences when he is young are with him throughout his life. When he thinks about the male protagonist holding the portrait in memory in the future, he wants to shed tears.

Finally found an article about Severus' son! An adopted son is also a son! Most of the articles I saw were about my daughter, and I was very curious about how I get along with my son. I look forward to more family lines and more interactions between Xi Fu and Ning Xiao. I love watching it! Please he!

I think it's so well written, with a touch of humor and a friendly atmosphere. I love it so much. Your wife, the author, is so good at writing. I feel like everyone is lovely. Author, I dare say that if you update 10,000 times a day, many people will definitely read it.

It turns out that no CP is what makes me eat it! ! ! [Adoration] Hahahahaha~

The author's writing style is very good, and the protagonist is not an idiot. He is a good boy who is slowly improving and working hard. The character creation is really good. There are also some beautiful picture descriptions in the article. The sense of immersion is really strong. It seems that I really saw a few brave teenagers. In short, it is a very good work!

It's so good-looking, and the author's arrangements and plot settings are quite interesting. Although the feeling of a Chinese cultivator accidentally entering Hogwarts is not very strong, it is still very interesting overall. The characters are not OOC in my opinion, it's just that sometimes the author uses description instead of description. In fact, many authors have this problem. Some very charming little snippets of life, or some, detailed descriptions and psychological activities of the characters seem to have been skipped by the author, especially how Ning Xiao and Snape got to know each other little by little when they were young, and the initial interactions between them until they really cared about each other. In my opinion, it is actually worth writing about (I really want to read this). There are also details about Harry and Ning Xiao, and Ning Xiao's relationship with everyone around him, but it seems that they are not described too much and have become an established fact. But in fact, this can be regarded as my request is too high. The author has actually written it very well. Anyway, come on, author (ง ˙o˙)ว I want to keep reading!

Very nice! Although I don't know who the CP is, it's still very good-looking! (In addition, I like Huo De or De Xiao, and I like Xiaolong! This book is a point in my transition from Draco

A very real, non-ooc fanfic. This is the best HP fanfic I have found so far. The writing is delicate, the language is natural, and the protagonist has a distinct personality. The most important thing is that he did not change the plot beyond recognition, but added it in a very reasonable way without forcibly interfering. This is rare among fans of books with many regrets like HP. As you read slowly, you will even feel that the protagonist really seems to have appeared in Harry Potter. It is really a very good fan.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but it's very cute. The plot rhythm is suitable and the writing style is fresh and natural. At the same time, the author is very good at making jokes. It's very enjoyable to watch. Love to watch[love][love][love]

It's one of the few stories where the main character who cultivates immortality enters HP, and it has few Chinese dialogues and idioms. I just hope that the author won't abandon the story because there is not much income. There are too few for my taste [crying] Will we see Lao Deng and Xiao Bao discussing magic, spells, and immortality in the future? Super sexy

It's good to read. I really like some of Xiao's descriptions of everyone's daily life in the book, as well as Xiao's change of attitude towards Hogwarts, and the communication with the seniors like electronic pets. Haha, I feel that the author has time to change the introduction. I feel that the description is a bit confusing. The text is very good, very good.

Good-looking and good-looking, Ning Xiao is strong and strong! However, the author greatly lacks some detailed descriptions. Sometimes it reads a bit like a memoir (it feels like many things have been skipped), but there is not much psychological description, and the description feels a bit thin. If you want to watch Cultivation to Immortality, I don't recommend it very much. This element is not very prominent in this article. Other than that, it's very well written❤

It's a really good book... It's a pity that it's not finished because I don't like the second update very much hhhhh. The author's writing style is very good, and the progress of the story can be said to be too comfortable. The protagonist has a halo but will not steal the special ones. He is just a support (the plot design is reasonable), and he will reflect on his own problems like a student. He is a modern good young man with a good reputation [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering] All in all, this is my favorite book in the HP fan series after reading it. I highly recommend it [Learned]

The characters are not OOC. Although a new character has been added, they will not act like heroes without thinking. The characters are very full and the plot is very interesting. It is really one of the best HP fanfics I have read! I want to see Sanchuang! !

Very nice, this one. The protagonist doesn't know the future plot. I think this is really good, and there won't be a strong sense of deliberateness. And the protagonist is really strong and handsome, and a little bit cute and kind. It's really beautiful, one of the best HP books I've ever read. The collision of immortality and magic, but is the level of immortality too high? She has the magic power reserves of an adult at 7 years of physical training, while Xiao is only 10 years old. If this is the case, it feels like the world of immortality can directly rule the world of magic.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, not ordinary good-looking, but very good-looking. I would like to call it the ceiling of HP fan fiction! ! ! ! ! The lovely Mrs. Xiaobao [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] also writes very well [learned] [learned] [learned] The writing style is humorous and loving, and her daily interactions are not OOC at all [learned] Xiaobao and Xiaolong's cp is very good. Anyway, this book is very good! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's pretty good. The setting felt a bit weird at first, but luckily I didn't read the introduction carefully, otherwise I wouldn't have clicked in to read it. . It's quite good-looking, the author's basic skills are pretty good, and there's almost no OOC. Personally, I think Dening and Haning are simply delicious. .

I watched it on August 2nd, and it tied today. It's really super good-looking (❁´ω`❁). It has family ties and ambiguous CP tendencies. The time may be a bit confusing, but it's easy to understand after reading it a few times. The protagonist goes to school at Hogwarts, and also goes to the Eastern Secret Realm for trials in the middle. It's private, but it's not a big problem Just like that, I got the first place in the job (.) Teacher, do you still remember us by the Daming Lake? Orz The child is going to starve to death orz I don't know if I have read it three times or four times. Teacher, your article is like a love potion. Orz I have to come back every few hours to check for updates. Has Teacher come back? I miss you very much [cry]orz

This is so delicious, it breaks the record of the 1990s when people never mentioned future immortal cultivators going back to the past [laughs][laughs] So pretty. . . . . Everyone. . . Point five stars. . 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Very nice. . There is no OOC, and this is not a mindless praise of the protagonist. The original character's attitude towards the protagonist has changed. There is no doubt about the protagonist's favorability and trust from the beginning. The setting is very novel. In short, it is a good book worth reading.

It's so beautiful that I can't help but watch it all. The protagonist is very powerful but has some childish characteristics. He is not just aloof and arrogant as a cultivator. He is like a little fox and is very cute and [shy][shy][shy]

I think it is a very novel setting, and the emotions are particularly delicate. I can detect the changes in the emotions of several characters towards the baby in terms of language and behavior from the time they first met until now. However, it may be that I think too much, and I think Xiaolong giving Dobby the gloves should be intentional. Xiaolong is a very good child. The author's writing is smooth and there is no uncomfortable feeling when reading. Please do your best.

This is a very surprising article. It is the best one I have seen that integrates the world of magic and the world of cultivating immortals. It can be seen that the author respects the settings of both worlds and does not criticize them. I am looking forward to the follow-up development.

So comfortable... The basic skills are really hard... There is no OOC at all. I have watched some other movies before, but it gave me the uncomfortable feeling that the protagonist is the destined child, crushing the whole world. Dening and Haning are really delicious... And the boss's paintings are also very beautiful! Come and read this book

Take a good look, take a good look, take a good look, if you click in, you won't be able to get out [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] The description of the Eastern Magical World is so attractive, I like it, I like it Reluctant to tie up [crying] The teacher's writing is so great, so powerful, it has simply upgraded my aesthetics.

It looks good, it looks good, but the narrative feels a little bit boring, but it's very interesting.

It's good to watch. I like Draco here very much. He explained clearly some plots that I didn't understand in the movie. I'd like to ask, is the one at the palace level Draco? [Shy]