Zhan Shen: the God of Mystery! Establish an Astrological Society at the Beginning

It's pretty good among the Zhanshen fanfics, at least it's better than those of those with broken characters [face covering] The sea, you are all water. [Cover face]

It looks good. The abilities are the twenty-two paths of the Lord of Mystery. They need to be unlocked slowly, but if you are always invincible, it is very enjoyable to watch. The old bookworm of Mystery said: Praise the Fool. A fool who does not belong to this era You are the mysterious master above the gray fog You are the yellow and black king of good luck

This book is really well written, and it almost feels like it's original. It's better than other fan works, and it's more than just a star. How about comparing other fan works? First of all, Zhao Kongcheng must die, or he must retire and return to his hometown. There is no plot, and people can die. Originally, he would be resurrected in the future and would be put away by Xiao Hei Lai, but the main character of the fan fiction just left it there and groaned to himself, and then let Zhao Kongcheng, a good person, become a tool spirit, a ghost, not a buddy... Nothing to say Then he must try his best to get back to the main line. But this book is different. He has created many original plots. The plots are also fun and interesting. It can be regarded as the best among the best fan works. He refuses to make excuses and starts with you and me.

Yes, it's quite fun, and the author's writing style is also good, but I'm particularly worried that the author will write it down and then lose it, because there are 220 sequences from the introduction. Readers of the series should also know about the witch series, so the protagonist will also change gender. Then the next step is my personal wish. I hope that there will be no heroine and no ambiguity. It would be better if the original heroine of Jialan could also be removed. After all, the emotional line in the original work is too destructive. The painting style of this article is also quite special. If the woman is added, it will feel very fragmented. I didn't even read the original work because of the emotional line, and then read some fans The description of this female character in it should be biased towards the original work. Anyway, I was given Raymond. Make a wish and hope that my wish will come true. It doesn't matter if it doesn't come true. I can only say that I have no fate with this novel. This ending is really a bit hasty, and basically has nothing to do with the original work. 07 Is still a weakling. The protagonist directly eliminated the three pillars of the Ke system, and the protagonist's horse disengagement was also very hasty. The rest of the sequences were all presented at once, and then the ending, should I say it, I actually thought that the stall was so big, and the author probably couldn't write the ending well.

It's quite good to watch, and there are quite a lot of original plots. Other fans are crazy about the main plot, not writing the hidden plot at once, or have logic errors, and the characters are broken. There are also some who obviously have system plug-ins that can take off early, but they still keep their heads down and do small tricks to gain favor with NCPs. Or they are too aggressive, and the level is too high, which leads to the end of the game. There are also those who are crazy about the setting, which leads to the collapse of the combat power, and the deep love for 7y, which makes the protagonist have no role. This book is useless. Of course it has shortcomings, such as the plot is too slow, or the updates are too slow. The fun of being a fan is to see completely different plots under different choices, to see the butterfly effect, the ending of the plot, or to make up for the shortcomings, and to open up perspective from God's perspective.

It feels very novel compared to other God-Slayer fan fiction. I play the protagonist of a vest sequence upgrade helper. I feel that I can write for a long time after all, because I have many abilities, rather than those who write about being the spokesperson of the god's costume. This one is very middle-class and very funny. It feels very interesting. Anyway, the author will update it soon, it's not enough to read. [Eat melon]

The writing is really good. In the same story of Yishu Shen Zhan, the character design does not feel OOC. The plot and ability settings are very natural. Such a good book is really worthy of [love]

It's pretty, but it's missing something. It feels like there is a lot missing. This lack does not mean that the original plot is missing, but it is a feeling, especially the ending is too fast. There is no CP in this book. The male protagonist's road to becoming a god is very interesting. I was attracted to it because the male protagonist was a god imprisoned in a mental hospital. However, the male protagonist's writing about mental hospitals was a bit lacking. Overall it looks good.

This is a 100,000-word review. The previous one is pretty good. I like reading divination. I think this is a lot of fun to write. However, Qiye's divination doesn't feel as strong as the previous ones. I really want to see the protagonist's divination from the captain of the special team, Wang Mian, whisper: Captain, run, run. As long as we beat the long river of time, one day we will return to you. Let Wang Mian hear it and see his reaction. I think it will be fun. Will it get more points?

I have a friend who is like a bright star in the vast night sky, shining with a unique light in the darkness. He is my beacon when I am confused. When the road of life is shrouded in fog and I am at a loss, he can always use his wise words to clear away the clouds and guide me in the direction. His encouragement is like the warm sunshine in spring, warm and powerful, allowing me to regain the courage to move forward. He is also like a gurgling stream in the quiet mountains and forests. He has a gentle and humble personality and is never arrogant. In the hustle and bustle of the world, he always maintained a sense of tranquility and purity in his heart. This quality also infected me, allowing me to learn to find inner peace amidst the turmoil. Being friends with him was the most beautiful encounter in my life. The time we spent together was so poetic and picturesque that it will always be engraved in the depths of my memory. And. Gas.

I have to say, it looks good. But the more I read, the more confused I became. For the first time, I felt the author's surging passion and dedication to literature and art, the Tai Chi realm. In a word, exciting content is better than long-winded content@_＠ One more thing, it was originally good, but when it comes to the key plot, the progress is very, very slow, and the protagonist has a lot of inner drama. I wanted to watch the follow-up, but I couldn't guard against it. I made several scenes in a row, which was too watery. I can only say that the author was cruel and forgetful when writing. The whole thoughts came out from the Internet like a surging tide. Finally, the writing was not bad⊙▽⊙

Overall, "Zhou Shen: God of Mysteries Begins to Occupy the Astrology Society" is a very creative novel that combines multiple elements to build a complex and fascinating world. Through ingenious plot design, rich characterization and profound philosophical discussion, the author successfully interprets a game about power and destiny into a thought-provoking work. For readers who like suspense, fantasy and psychological game novels, this is undoubtedly a masterpiece worth reading.

It's really good-looking. The more you watch it, the more addictive it becomes, okay. I don't know when I finished reading it. It's a bit short. Come on, author [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's so cool. This is my favorite Zhanshen fic at the moment. It's funny and provocative, especially since I already knew that Old Zhao wouldn't die, but everyone's reaction made me blush and burst into laughter.

It's okay. The shortcoming is that there are still many holes that the author has not filled in. Hazatos appeared too quickly and ended so early. I never expected it. In conclusion, if you ignore the holes that the author has not filled in, it is still a good and refreshing book and worth reading.

The protagonist's mental state is very beautiful, and I look forward to more sequences to be unlocked [Thoughts]

Super good-looking, no heroine, the prisoner is a bit crazy, fortune-telling and handsome, invincible writing This novel is different from most of the God-killing novels. His upgrade method is no longer the same 5% unlocking of a skill but...

A very good book Excellent 🌟The story inspiration outline is super good 🌟Almost original, really great 🌟The storyline is super fascinating. I have been able to see the latest chapter updated by the author, and I have been following it all the way to the yellow button. This is a rare situation for me who is seriously short of books. This idea is amazing. Michael in the article is a woman! I don't know, let's just assume it's good Improvement points ❤️Character creation needs to be improved. At the beginning, when three members of the Masked Team came to the door of the Tarot finishing room and wanted to go in, the protagonist opened the door for them, and the three of them barged in directly. They seemed very rude and had a serious sense of separation from the image of Masked in their minds. ❤️From the beginning, the protagonist had very strong abilities, and it was a good read at the time. But as I read on, I found that the protagonist's approach to certain things was hard to explain, but I quickly threw it away, and then I returned to normal level when I read it again. I kept reading, and it was quite normal to see the latest updated chapters. I enjoyed reading it, and I am still looking forward to the follow-up story. There is also the last one, I don't know if it needs improvement. Just open your eyes. Can you do it without a knife? In fact, after reading so many novels, this sentence pops up from time to time in the comment section. It may seem strange at first. Where does this come from? It sounds pretty smooth. But it's really not suitable to be written in an article. There seems to be an author who wrote this in an article before. There seems to be only one, but after reading more, I think it's very vulgar😂 I would like to give you less than one star because I am afraid that the author will be proud. If it is helpful to the author, please remember to like me and I will give you a five-star review when I come back.

It's really beautiful. At first you may think the pace is slow, but if you think about it carefully, it's not really slow. It's a plot unfolding in another way. I think that even though I went to the training camp after more than 100 chapters, Yiyu Ancient God Church and so on have appeared, and And the protagonist is also very powerful. To be honest, I feel that other novels follow the same plot as the original work, but this book is different. This book is a re-creation of the original work and is very different from other books, and 07 in it is also very pitiful. In short, I recommend everyone to read it. For such a good book, it is a pity to get a rating of eight or so. It looks good, but it's just too watery.

I like the subject matter, mystery + killing gods. The writing is readable and quite funny.

She is very good-looking and always seems to be deflated, but in fact there is nothing wrong with her at all. Except for Lin Xiye being fucked so badly and always being misunderstood, there is nothing poisonous about it, and it is not considered poisonous. She should look good. It's so beautiful, but the update speed is too slow. I'll give you a 101-star rating.

It's very good, but it's a bit unfinished. The main character is invincible throughout the whole process [eat melon] but it's a bit short. T_T, it was finished in about 250 minutes. What a tonic! [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] (If you don't believe me, you can see how long I have been reading this book) It's not like you read it very carefully. I read it from Chapter 1 to Chapter 224 (ten lines at a glance) and it took me 6 hours to read it.

It's pretty good. It's a bit cool. The main character's vest appearance is quite amazing. I feel like some pitfalls are not filled in at the end, but overall there's no problem. I'm looking forward to the author's next book. I really like this kind of vest story that hides a mysterious organization. It's a bit shabby, but maybe I'm not too demanding in reading articles [face covering], after all, it's free to watch for fun.

I finished reading it in one go, and it started well in the early stage. I thought he would slowly write a million words to get started, but in the middle stage, he started to do whatever it took to get the magic potion value, deliberately disrupting and forcing the original plot characters regardless of the situation. This was a lightning point for me. In the later stage, he even lost all salt and just took off, and then the battle of gods came to an abrupt end. The reference to the 22 sequence path setting is quite good, but the overall effect of his book... It's hard to say. I can only say that if you want to see something pure and cool, you can take a look.

Why is it only 8.3? Such a novel fanfic is completely different from other stereotyped gods-killing novels. It's good to read and will be updated soon [shy][shy]

I think it's pretty good-looking, but the word count is probably okay. It's just too short, and I finished it in a while. It would be better if the author could update it more!

Starting from the new camp, the overall rhythm became faster and faster. Lin Qiye didn't even leave the novice village, and Su Yi didn't even appear in the mental hospital at the end. It felt like a dream, but overall the plot was relatively novel [Like]

Save people without being vague, be funny without being vulgar Have goals and ideas It looks good. Please update me quickly.

How can I put it this way? It's really good. I personally think it's much better than other fanfics. It's very exciting. The protagonist has many identities and plays an entire astrological meeting. Now this book is what supports me every day [crying] I hope the author will update it soon.

It's good-looking, quite funny, um, not bad, but the progress is a bit slow, eh, I'm not asking for help. I've seen the latest chapter and it feels like it's going to be unfinished, isn't it? According to the original timeline, before things in Cangnan No. 2 Middle School were over, you had the God of Resistance appearing. The progress was a bit too fast, special team? Cangnan disappears? Jinnan Mountain? Nothing 🙂‍↔️I'm disappointed. It was quite good at the beginning and it was so funny that it kept me awake most of the night. But now I'm also very disappointed. Maybe the ending is just not easy to write? I believe you just once, it's really baffling...