After Turning into a Beautiful Girl, the School Beauty Gradually Started to Feel Strange

I am a senior reader of transformation stories. I saw that the author said that he wanted to write a novel with transformation as the main content. I originally wanted to comment on this aspect, but after reviewing it, I found that many of the transformation stories that I thought were very exciting in my impression were not as pure as this author in terms of the plot of transformation [face covering] I'll just talk about it casually. Crying in the rain shows that the protagonist has a mental journey, which is quite good. Some authors don't write about this aspect at all, and just write about the protagonist's experience and becoming stronger. Experience and become stronger. If the first two chapters of the article had not clearly stated that the protagonist changed from male to female, he could have been regarded as a female protagonist. However, at the same time, several wonderful transformation books in my impression were also written in this way. The difference is that these authors are very good. Although they are only mentioned once, the transformation is indeed engraved in the background of the protagonist. Then those authors will deliberately write more to make it easy for readers to actively think about the transformation of the protagonist. For example, the little loli is pampered in various ways, and all kinds of rua rua rua Or maybe the protagonist's beauty is unparalleled in the world, the protagonist is full of talent and has far-reaching influence, fans draw the protagonist's book, etc.

It's really great to watch, but it would be even more exciting if it were written according to the original plot (like the introduction)! (Unfortunately, it may be like ten thousand times if I delay the author again.) Besides, I love lily very much, and the author will continue to experience it [eating melon]

This book is very beautiful. I read a book about changing marriage before reading this book, and then read this book. At the beginning, I was quite anxious because the gender of the protagonist would be switched, so I took the book out of the bookshelf for a day because it didn't look good. After thinking about it, the author said that she will become a girl permanently in the end, and I personally feel that the plot is almost over, so I want to check it out later. The result was as expected. Within a few chapters, I saw the section where the protagonist completely transformed into a girl. Generally speaking, the progress of the plot in the early part of this book may be relatively slow. However, since the author was urged by everyone to change the protagonist to remain a female character, he was forced to adjust the plot. Readers who like to read this kind of article must be patient and read the previous plot first. Although the author's later plot was forced, I personally think it is better than the original plot, because the background provided by this book is actually very suitable for writing lily novels [laughs]

I vaguely remember that the author mentioned somewhere in the commentary that the plot was modified or sped up for some reasons. Although it is a bit regretful, I can understand the author's great dilemma. Sometimes there is really no way to fully express what I think, so as long as I try hard, it will be fine. In fact, it is common for people to live a life without systematic cheats. Transformation is just an opportunity. The love and the courage to pursue love are the most valuable qualities. It may feel a little draggy at the beginning, but if you stick to it, it feels much better at the end, and the emotions are still very delicate.

Why am I so upset when I see that Jin Dawei and Qiu Yuning are real online dating partners? [Cry][cry][cry]

I think what attracts me most about this book is the pure love of the protagonist. Although it also has ss content, it is overall good. I read ten lines at a time in the last few chapters because school is about to start tomorrow. Later I regretted it. I think good works come from serious appreciation. Although I don't know why the rating is so low. Well... Maybe everyone has different ideas. I also wish the author to have better works [Send my heart][Send my heart]

This type of whitening that I haven't seen before is quite interesting.

Compared with other similar works, the characteristic of this book is that the protagonist can switch between male and female identities at the beginning, but later on the protagonist sacrifices his male body for his friends. Although the plot is a bit old-fashioned, it is still quite touching.

I hope the author will work hard, it's very interesting so far

Summary: The closing remarks are better than the original text [laughs] This book is generally good and not systematic (but I personally still like reading books that are systematic). I don't know what to say. Anyway, it's good and it's over [Blow kiss]

Personally, I think it's very good-looking, but it feels a bit short and the ending is a bit hasty. I also want to read more stories about Qianmeng and Qingzi [almost crying] [almost crying]

Overall, it's good but a little bit toxic.

Their love is as bright as a star, unfettered and shining for each other. The vivid plot, super good looks, and the role of the supporting characters are clearly described. Don't end it too quickly. In the end, I hope it won't end unfinished later.

This book can be said to be the most emotional book I have ever read. The reason is not only her writing style, but the rich emotion in the text, which made me really feel the story between two girls. At the same time, the storyline is of high quality and seems to incorporate real emotions. It also brought me unprecedented feelings. Finally, I hope more friends will try to read this book. I personally think the author writes very well.

It's very well written. It would be more annoying if it were a pure campus transformation [heartfelt]

It's a bit disappointing, but it's not a big problem. Just skip that part of the plot. It has nothing to do with the main plot anyway. The rest of the plot is still very good.

[Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] Sweet but not greasy, it is the finest delicacy! [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's beautiful. I love watching it. Although, it's not as beautiful as Sister Lu's, but it's really good. And the name Xia Qianmeng is so familiar.

Woohoo, I struggled for three nights and finally finished reading it. I was so moved. I think this is the best Lily article I have ever read [crying] [crying]

Don't be fooled by the name, this is a good book, I recommend it, but I don't recommend it to those who don't like lilies. Anyway, it's still very interesting…

The writing is good and sweet, I highly recommend it.

It's very interesting. I prefer reading this kind of book. Of course, I like to read any book. Others regard novels as leisure and entertainment time, but I regard novels as the main thing. Maybe it's because I don't see much hope for the future. I just feel that when I read a novel, I'm not so confused about the outside world. It's not like being disturbed by classmates when reading in reality.

It's okay (self-feeling)

It looks good, the author should keep writing, it's not enough

Like this feeling

Looks good, this is a set, I like it too

A bit poisonous, but okay

It feels okay

It's so beautiful, why is the rating so low?

Thousands of words can be condensed into two words: awesome!