Bibliophile: I Have a Riddler System

The advantage is that the writing is fluent, which can be regarded as an upper-middle to upper-low level in the online literature world. The setting part is very good. The atmosphere of the esoteric sect is fully created, and there is nothing inconsistent. The story and character creation are flawless but stable and good. This is rare on the Tomato platform. People can read on and look forward to the subsequent plot development. However, this is suspected to be an article written by a so-called paid advanced AI. I like to explain one thing clearly in three or two sentences and repeat it several times with similar words. It has seven or eight paragraphs, and the battle and conspiracy parts are drowned out by a lot of flowing nonsense. There are also many small language errors, giving people an uncomfortable feeling. It feels like mistakes made by human beings. The non-colloquial words are missing or reversed. Sometimes you have to think about it for a while before you can figure out the meaning of the sentence. Moreover, some descriptions are too simple. Words such as calm, decisive, and uneasy are used upside down. Almost everyone has an unfathomable look on their face.

Let us worship Arc Moon, the god of dazzling glory, the god of revelation, the god of incomparable beauty, and I hope that his divine power can reveal to me the secrets in the author's article.

It's okay. So far, the mystery of the Esoteric Cult has been well created, but I don't know if the author has the idea of ​​​​writing an emotional line through the plot of marriage. With all due respect, it is very difficult to write an emotional line in the world view of the Esoteric Cult, and it is easy to write. I hope there will be no female protagonist. I still want to see more adventures of the protagonist.

Come on, I wonder if there is a female protagonist?

I always feel that with the character of the protagonist, he is more suitable to be the leader than the cheese book [laughs]

It's rare, it's written about esoteric Buddhism

Good secret teachings that make my immortal spin.

Yes, overall it has a tantric atmosphere. Unfortunately, the system is not very useful and can easily mislead people who enter by mistake.

Why didn't I see Zhu? Could it be that the protagonist takes the edge first? After all, the combat effectiveness of the edge is really high, which refers to exploring and killing Laoden (it seems to be using a moth statue? It's been too long, I can't remember). Then he goes to the edge later, and then ascends to become the Si Chen of the form.

Very novel subject Very novel subject

It's so right, so right, the taste of Tantric Buddhism is so right

Very good Cthulhu

Good esoteric text It's pretty good, the atmosphere is relaxed and pleasant. It's good to have a protagonist who doesn't have any bitterness or deep hatred.

It's hard to imagine that this plot and writing are from Tomato's novel

It's still possible, cheers, author＾0＾~

Very good tantra, opened my soul

I like the atmosphere of the esoteric sect, and I hope that the rest of the writing will not be too close to the ordinary Western fantasy, secretive, and vague. Maybe some more game factors can be added.

Very good book. Well, those who have never played Tantric Cult should be able to understand it. Like me

A very good book. Is this considered a esoteric fanfic?

Well written and attractive

The writing is very good and the plot flows smoothly.

A rare secret text

It smells like the Lord of Mysteries

This is my first review. The writing is very good (♡ ὅ ◡ ὅ )ʃ♡

Not long ago, this piece attracted the prying eyes of moths, and it has disappeared, but still has an aura of +3 hanging over it.

All I can think about is sharp eyes and knife-like sight.

It's a good book here [I learned it] [I learned it]

A good book about repeated life and death, The Death-Resistant King!

Very good, very Western fantasy, the unknown dangers and the desire for knowledge are very interesting

Very good, the setting is OK, the writing has the feeling that it has not been written for a long time, and the text feels like playing a game (text type)