Being Cheated*************

The writing technique is very delicate, and the characters' personality changes are well described before and after. After suddenly entering the invitation of the Silk Thread Witch, the style has changed a bit, but it can be seen that the author wants to dig out a main line. Come on

The author is a light novel lover! ! Absolutely! ! The writing style of this novel is very similar to the Japanese light novels I read, and the protagonist is also very cute. It just doesn't have the dark depth of the classic Japanese magical girl novels (I think it's very good~). Overall, it's a great novel, very suitable for readers who like to read Japanese light novels~~

It looks good, but the pace and switching of perspectives are a bit fast. Then there are a bunch of settings thrown at the beginning, inexplicable flashbacks, and long and abrupt analysis... There are many minor flaws, but I like the writing style very much. I hope the author can also improve himself and slow down the pace.

This book describes the psychological feeling and environmental feeling, as well as the complex plot. How to say it? The psychological effects are really well written. The protagonist gradually changes from the confusion and disgust at the beginning, although there is a mastermind behind all this. Our goal is also very clear, which is to defeat the final king, but we are not sure what the final king is, or why the elves do this?

Very good, I can't see anything wrong with it anyway If you bring it in, those self-descriptions won't feel too inconsistent. If you don't bring it in, you'll understand, hehe! In Chapter 17, the protagonist acted too weak and gave in. She knew that others were using this to oppress her, but she could not become stronger. We still have to fight for territory, what's wrong? If you choose to give in, can you avoid their harm and threats to your partners? It's okay to write about weaknesses in some aspects, but when you use your partners to threaten you into submission or restrain you, you have to show that you are tough and ruthless. Otherwise, when they push forward, you will still retreat again and again?

The writing style of "Bianbai" is excellent, but it is partial to hydrology, and there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration. Magical girl setting, group portrait, first-person perspective, emotional line is reasonable, lolita control welfare, other settings are just average, next book.

It's quite interesting, but it looks a bit strange in the first person [face covering] There are not many people watching.

The main character is so cute! ! ! ! The author has created the images of the protagonist and supporting characters very well! The delicate psychological description is the finishing touch, instantly shortening the distance between the readers and the characters. Also, the protagonist is so cute! Like it, like it, like it the most!

Although the first-person perspective feels weird, the personal psychological description of the protagonist is indeed very realistic [laughing] (I suspect the author has also transformed into a magical girl)

The characterization and psychological description are really great, and the first-person perspective is also unique, allowing me to quickly enter the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist opens his heart to Su Wan under her care and concern, and the ambivalence about sexual transformation is well portrayed. The plot was also good and quite attractive to me (but the part about eating hot pot in the apartment always felt like I had missed watching it). A good treasure novel[shy][shy]

It's so rare to find such a magical girl fanfic on Tomato. The psychological description is really delicate. It's great.

Overall good The problem is that the main character, a 30-year-old man, has a mentality that breaks down at the drop of a hat. It's not as hard as a little girl

Twisted magical girl love [laughing]

Is the main character's change of character permanent?

It's so perfect, my brain is shaking!

There are so many characters, it's hard to tell who is who [punch]

Read to Chapter 51. The author's psychological description is delicate and true, and the character's psychological changes and growth process are smooth and natural. This kind of skill is rare in 🍅. Readers can truly feel the emotional changes of the characters without feeling abrupt or disjointed, making them immersed in the story. Paired with first-person narration, the sense of substitution is even stronger. The protagonist's inner activities and views on the outside world are vividly displayed through the first-person perspective, and the protagonist's cuteness and vulnerability are vividly displayed on the page. The plot is smooth and the language is vivid. The relationship between Xiang Hui and the protagonist is gradually laid out step by step, and the emotional changes of the protagonist and Xiang Hui can be felt in the details. At the same time, Kenshin's process from self-confusion, recognition, collapse of faith, to finally regaining faith is described in a clear-cut and traceable manner. Different from the routine of other magical girl novels, this work does not follow the common setting of "the strong one retreats and the femininity gradually deepens". The protagonist is a completely feminine 10-year-old magical girl from the beginning, and reaches a very high combat power level in her first transformation. Although not invincible, he is not weak either. Moreover, the novel lays the foundation for factional struggle. A well-planned game secretly controlled by a high-level magical girl. By the way, the protagonist was originally a 30-year-old uncle (magician [smile]), but due to lack of the warmth of family and friendship, after turning into a 10-year-old lolita, and affected by age and the body's hormones and nervous system, her behavior and mental state did not fully maintain the maturity of an adult. This makes her emotionally greener and more volatile. This makes her even cuter and cuter [admiration].

I've read dozens of chapters, and it's really good [Send Heart][Send Heart], but sometimes it's a bit awkward when switching from the third-person perspective of other characters to the first-person perspective of the protagonist. Is this a single female protagonist?

I like it, as a 30-year-old dead house, I have a unique sense of belonging, hhhh

Why does it feel like no one is reading such a good book?

So, the protagonist Lily?

I haven't read a first-person novel in a long time. It's very interesting.

It's great. It's like reading a light novel. The changes in personality and the conflicts between the characters are also very interesting. Like What happened to you?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The protagonist doesn't quite look like an adult.

It's very nice, and the overall impression is good.

Is Xiang Hui the only female protagonist? Will the protagonist become good friends with other magical girls in the future?

It's a bit interesting. The protagonist is very cute. Good luck to the author.

Baby baby baby

Don't have a knife. This kind of magical girl always says that the knife will come. I hope the author will not use the knife [grievance]