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No CP, Hilarious Writing, the Kind That Can Make You Laugh with Eight-Pack Abs
No CP! If you have CP, don't get involved! It's best it's over
Please Ask Everyone to Read Their Minds. on the Surface: ~In the Heart: *@#&¥$@*
Mind Reading ✚Eating Melon🍉 Hilarious! ! ! the Kind That Twists into Maggots!
I want to watch something like "The civil and military forces of the Manchu Dynasty listened to my voice, and I showed off and ate it!" Book. Quick! ! ! Sisters! I am short of books! ! !
The Heroine Is a Beast, and Was Contracted by the Young Lady, and She Soon Turned into a Human Form
Are There Any Cp Stories About Ye Qiao and Mu Chongxi? Please!
I want to read a book similar to "The Little Junior Sister Is Clearly Super Strong, But Is Overly Dumb (Yijian Xinghedu)".
Mind Reading + Court Eating + Hilarious, the Heroine Is the Minister's Female Goose
I want to watch something like "The civil and military forces of the Manchu Dynasty listened to my voice, and I showed off and ate it!" Book.
I'm Looking for Someone with a Simple Theme of Eating Melons, the Kind Where Everyone Eats Melons, Gossipy Melons
Want to watch something similar to "Eat the Big Melon!" The book "The Paralytic Man Stands Up After Reading My Heart". It's not about the plot. I have personal protection when eating melons. If you have any books, please recommend them to me. There is a shortage of books.
Mind-Reading + Melon-Eating System, with Cp, Ancient Court Literature
I want to watch something like "The civil and military forces of the Manchu Dynasty listened to my voice, and I showed off and ate it!" Book. Beg
Everyone Can Hear the Voice of the Heroine🔥, the Law of Eating Melon Is Really Delicious
I want to read a book like "The Tyrant's Family Panicked After Eavesdropping on the Little Princess's Voice". Mind reading, everyone, little princess, lighthearted and funny, eating melons, slapping in the face, and torturing scum.






































It's very interesting. It would be great if the lover from the heroine's previous life could travel through time.
This is the first time I've read the heartfelt stories of the two heroines, it's so interesting! It may be that the author's descriptions are too detailed, and there is no plot in several chapters. They are just paragraphs of description, and there is too little plot. Almost every chapter of y is devoted to describing some idea or the like. It is so detailed that it feels like writing an essay.
Mo Yun loved the heroine all her life and never liked anyone else. The heroine was reincarnated with her memories. She also saw that Mo Yun died alone in her previous life and helped the heroine take care of her parents. I feel that if I am the heroine, it is difficult to like others. Others can be consistent, why can't she? I think it's unfair to Mo Yun, but I think Prime Minister Su is also very good. She can be written as the reincarnation of Mo Yun.
This girl named Qin Qianluo died tragically in her previous life, but she had parents, sister and a lover who loved him. When she was reborn in ancient times, she also had parents and brothers who loved him. I hope she can grow up happily and safely, and no longer end up like the previous life.
After reading it, I also read the comments, and I feel like one of the comments is actually right. In my previous life, I was an anti-narcotics policeman, and I had people who loved each other very much. How could I become so lustful now? Even though it is said to be appreciation [face covering], it still makes me feel a little uncomfortable. As for the CP of the heroine in this life, I think we can set up a person who is in Xuanyuan Kingdom but not Xuanyuan Kingdom. She looks exactly like the girlfriend in her previous life (it would be nice to have the memory of her previous life), but she lives a life of hiding in the east of Xuanyuan Kingdom. Although the little girl is mentally very old, her actual age is still thirteen or fourteen after all. The most important thing is that she loved her girlfriend so much in her previous life [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] tonic socks Overall, I was very happy to watch it. Even if you throw away the emotional scenes, it is still very good and enjoyable to watch. Come on! ! [Adoration]
The voice of the heroine in time travel is heard by everyone. The heroine's voice is more about national construction, planting and breeding, training of military personnel, weapons manufacturing, mineral discovery, etc. By the way, she discovers corrupt officials and treasonous people, making them malicious towards her, and she suddenly dies...
I hope that the heroine and Mo Yun will renew their relationship.
It's very well written, but I feel like it's not posted enough. I want to read more if line extra posts. We have a baby. We worked so hard in the previous life, but this life is also a very good baby. Is it wrong to like to appreciate beautiful women? No! Therefore, I strongly urge everyone to write more posts, and write more if lines in the extras. I feel that all the women depicted can be posted with Luo Bao!
I won't comment on the fact that there are only a hundred chapters, but I haven't found the collapse setting worthy of five stars in more than a hundred chapters. There are very few stories about this kind of characters where the main character is sane and knows how to learn kung fu to enhance his strength. The only thing I don't like is that the system couldn't detect the appearance of Wei Er's mysterious man [face covering] Although I know it's a foreshadowing, I still hope that the system will have the function of automatically searching for creatures after the system is upgraded in the future [laughing]
"That's for sure, that's the ancestral dragon Yingzheng, the first emperor of the ages, the origin of the name of the emperor. The chariots tracked the same track, the books shared the same text, the weights and measures were unified, the currency was unified, and the Great Wall was built. I once said that I will unify the six countries and unify the world. Build the Great Wall to control the dragon veins of the nine states, defend our Qin Dynasty, and protect our country." I swear here in the name of the First Emperor that I will guard the land and open up the frontiers, wipe out the four barbarians, and establish the foundation of our great Qin for eternity. When I die, I will transform into a dragon soul to protect my country forever. This oath is witnessed by the sun and the moon, recognized by heaven and earth, and listened to by immortals, devils and gods."
1. Delicate writing style and meticulous depiction The author's words are like thin embroidery needles, depicting the characters, environment, atmosphere and plot development in the story in detail. In the delicate narrative, you can not only see the whole story, but also gain insight into the inner world of the characters, making people feel the warmth and depth of the text. 2. The plot is twists and turns and exciting The plot of the whole novel has ups and downs and progresses layer by layer, which not only attracts the readers' attention, but also makes people have a strong interest in the development of the story. When the author skillfully sets up suspense and reversal, readers feel like they are in the story, experiencing the joys, sorrows and joys with the characters in the story. 3. Characters are three-dimensional and full of emotions In terms of shaping the characters, the author has a good grasp of it. Each character has a distinct personality and complex inner world, allowing readers to empathize with them during the reading process. The emotional entanglements and interactions between the characters are also very real and moving.
It would be nice if my lover from the previous life could come over, it would be better [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. The author is cheering for the check-in [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] [Blowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Sending heart] [Sending heart] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing]
It would be great if there was a story with two female protagonists! Recommend this book📚📚📚
Big cheers for the author! ! ! I hope the other half of heroine Lily appears! !
It's very interesting. Please give it a thumbs up, the author.
It's very interesting, but the heroine was abused in her previous life at the beginning. I'll cry as long as I'm thinking about it. The author's writing style is also great. I love watching it hehehe
It's awesome, it's awesome, author, your brain is very powerful, keep on being more powerful, come on! Their emotional scenes are also very exciting. Yes, I love watching it😍😍😍😍
Damn, who is the other heroine?
I cried after watching the past life. I feel sorry for the heroine. It's so heartbreaking.
It was so fun to watch. I really hope that the protagonist has no cp. (Personal opinion) The protagonist is so powerful. I feel that the protagonist can single-handedly destroy Xuanyuan Guola. The sense of substitution is so strong.
It's well written. I like it very much. Author, don't be discouraged. It's just the beginning. Slowly there will be more and more readers, because it is really beautiful and gold will always shine. Come on.
It's okay. I understand that the teacher asked us to use less metaphors and idioms. It's too wasteful. Halfway through, I didn't want to read it [Thinking]
This novel is so nice [OK] [OK] [OK] [OK] [OK] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] Great, great, like it
Very nice, I personally feel very good
I want to know whether the protagonist's surname "Tan" is a polyphonic word and is pronounced "tan" or "qin". Please reply to me quickly otherwise I feel uncomfortable and want to know which of the two pronunciations is pronounced (mainly only after seeing that comment did I know that there is another pronunciation, otherwise I always thought it was "tan") ah ah ah
Super nice heartfelt essay
Very interesting, thank you to the author! 😘
It's so beautiful, I love the two heroines
Full of stars! Must be full of stars! ! It's just that when I saw the heroine's previous life, I really wanted to cry.