My Concubine? Since When?

I'll give it four stars. Overall, the plot of this book is very cliche. It makes me feel like I've gone back to when I was reading urban literature seven or eight years ago. I can basically guess how it will develop. It's nothing special but nothing too poisonous. Generally speaking, you can read it if you have nothing to do. However, the plot seems to have been deleted, and some foreshadowings were not used. For example, when I felt that something was about to happen and the violence started, nothing happened. It just felt like it was picked up heavily and dropped gently. From the total of less than 100 chapters and the author's short comments, it can be seen that part of the plot must have been cut off. But it's a good thing. I can't watch abuse as I get older. Here's another suggestion for the author. Today's readers no longer like abuse for the sake of abuse. Many plots are simply unnecessary. For example, the conflict between the heroine and her father. What's the point of supporting him as a biological father for so many years when you have the strength to get rid of it? Just for the so-called marriage certificate? It's completely unreasonable. I always feel that the author has not kept up with the times. I suggest the author write a full-length relaxed daily novel to accumulate experience and understand which plots current readers are disgusted with (namely naming the heroine and her father) and not deliberately create conflicts. Above.

It's really baffling to watch. Watching the exchanges between the characters makes my head hurt, I don't even know who said those words. It doesn't describe the characters' reactions, but just throws out a sentence, and it's hard to figure out who is talking to whom. At the beginning of the second chapter, it was said that he was reborn. After rebirth, he started to say that he had forgotten it. Then he started to feel familiar again but couldn't remember clearly (Who are you playing?) After reading these chapters, I really don't know how to evaluate it. If I really want to say it, I can only comment: I really don't understand what I read! I don't know whether it's because my reading comprehension skills are not good enough, or because you, the author, thought about the characters' communication in your mind and wrote it down directly, but you didn't write about who was speaking, who was speaking to whom, or what expressions the characters wore during the speaking process. Or do you know all these detailed descriptions in your mind, and at the same time, you feel that I have written so much that you must know it, but we really don't know what you are writing, and we are even a little confused. So, if you don't talk about it, no one will know. Every time I watch a character exchange, I have to watch it over and over again to figure out who is talking to whom. Why is it so abrupt? What a waste of time!

What a sweet novel. The writing is very good. Except for the heroine, her little mother is not a good person. I hope there will be a bad ending in the future [smile] Her father's words will have a regretful ending. Hey, I have a plan. If her little mother's child is not his father's biological child, it will be a dead end [laughing] However, the novel is mainly about the sweet life of the male and female protagonists, and there is no too stupid plot. The setting of being reborn but only remembering the vague memories of the past life is very good. It makes the change of the protagonist, the relationship with the heroine and the distance from the vicious supporting characters very reasonable. There is no need for some sudden changes, forcible slaps in the face of the vicious supporting characters, etc. The plot is very good. It's just too little, but it's not bad. I was studying, but I accidentally kept watching it 😢 😢 😢 Fortunately, I finished it in two or three hours [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Finally, cheers author, the writing is very good, support 👍👍👍

I originally clicked in and thought it was a simple yandere who forced love and then reborn for revenge or something, but when I came in, I didn't find any yandere, inexplicable abuse, and the character's personality changed very abruptly. At first, I thought the heroine's father was just a strict man who didn't know how to educate his daughter. Then the hero read him letters and said he saw photos of his ex-wife, and I felt that he loved his ex-wife very much. . . As a result, he brought a woman back, and she didn't love his ex-wife or his daughter at all, which was very strange. The part about the male protagonist's allergies was also outrageous. The male protagonist said he was allergic, but he knew he was allergic but still tried. Then the female protagonist's father and the girl clearly said that in order to solve their needs, they became submissive at this point. Anyway, he is a very naughty and useless character. . . There are too many characters and the names suddenly appear and I can't remember them. In fact, you don't need to write names of unimportant people, just write relationships, like Celine. Then in the plot, a reincarnation plot was arranged, but it was forgotten. Well, the function is only to stay away from Du Cong in the beginning? There might also be some foreshadowing. Overall it's okay, but some details are not well controlled. Come on

It's not bad. Those who like to see daily details will like it. The disadvantage is that the plot is too bland. The beginning has no connection with the main text. Whether or not he is reborn has no impact on the plot. It may be to attract people to come in.

Promise me that the next one will be as good as this, okay?

Summary of the ten chapters, the classic opening begins with a turtle dragging a sister to seek revenge, and then it is revealed that the male and female protagonists had a bad relationship when they were young. They were beaten by someone and had to go to the hospital for gastric lavage due to allergies. After returning to China, they imprisoned the male protagonist for half a year and later led to the company being kidnapped and killed. At this time, the affectionate yandere comes online? Inexplicably, after rebirth, the male protagonist transformed into a solar energy, the female protagonist felt the warmth, and they kissed her over wine on her 17th birthday, and that's the end of it. I don't understand, because I think it's understandable that the adopted male protagonist separated from the love of his elders when he was a child, and so many excessive and harmful behaviors and character flaws are also acceptable~ How did he become a yandere and fall in love with him after leaving the country after hurting him in his previous life? He didn't explain it clearly, and said, "How dare you *'#*#~ the person I have protected for more than 20 years~" When he was a child, he was fucked by his sister and when he grew up, he was fucked by his brother and girlfriend. He is also an old unlucky guy. After his rebirth, the male protagonist has always been protective of you. It's really top-notch. Don't explain it to me later. You kissed me in Chapter 13, so why are you looking forward to it? Without the inexplicable setting before rebirth, I honestly can really watch it. With this setting, everything goes against the grain.

Okay, just a few flaws. The only one that impressed me most was the transformation of the heroine's father. It was not listed in the outline. The transformation was too fast. It changed directly in one chapter. It almost killed me. Fortunately, I persisted.

The first volume was okay, but the second volume was a bit boring mainly because the heroine had too few scenes.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author will stick with it✧*｡٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*｡