The Deadline Has Come, Is the Powerful System Coming?

This novel is very interesting. It is different from other novels. Many people who have a long foreshadowing and are very good may die in a short while without losing their fighting power. Forget it, I didn't say it, starting from chapter 60, it's an old routine. Let's not talk about the identity of the old man. The protagonist also thinks of himself as a young man, and he is also forced to leave by the system. The protagonist joins forces to seek skills, and then the protagonist is often motivated and often rescued. You will find that this is not an old routine from more than ten years ago?

Sure enough, a person's old knowledge and experience plus a young body are invincible. For the first time, Gua produced by the system discovered that the foundation laid by living a lifetime as an ordinary person and experiencing ordinary struggles is very solid, and he will cherish it very much. Those rhetorical articles all had a score of 9 or above, but this non-toxic article only had an 8.6 Score. Those articles that were pretentious with poisonous points made me vomit after reading it. After searching for so long, I found a slowly upgrading and unsage article that ended up being unfinished. I finished it in one day and one night. Please tweet something similar.

It's good to read. It's rare to see a novel that has planning, plot, and foreshadowing. The distinction between realms also has a unique appeal. How can I put it, it's not enough to read, so I have to read the author's previous novels and other updates...

It's a bit interesting. It's a system article in name. The system presence is not high. It's pretty good. It's not the kind of cool article that can be read without thinking. Many readers still don't understand its positioning. It's not recommended for those who want to read without thinking. The writing is almost boring, but judging from the fact that the author has been messing around with this process for a few days, the plot is not bad, the description is quite detailed, and the pace is slow. Five stars encourage it.

I came back to comment after reading Chapter 66, and saw that the protagonist did not run away when facing the invaders, but chose to be strong to save the weak. In an era when refined egoistic novels about cultivating immortality are rampant, this is a rare breath of fresh air. I would like to support the author.

It's not rated 4 or 5 stars. Personally I don't like it in many places, but it's considered good in Tomato and the development is okay. I should be deleting the comments. There are fewer comments that I don't like. There are a lot of bad points, but there are also some good points. The good and bad balance each other out. You can take a look.

With more than seventy chapters, it is considered a masterpiece. The characteristic of this book is that no matter how big the character is, he or she will die. Writing this way means that the author most likely has an outline. Come on.

It can only be said that the author did not appear in the era he should have. The author's writing style is good. Reading the whole novel, it can be said that it is full of a sense of randomness in life. An accident or something can change the protagonist's life and a series of stories that follow. After all, no one expected that just one Zhou Ping died. As a result, the city was destroyed, and Dachu was about to be finished later. Although it was not written there, but according to the author's hints, it should be almost the same. I also feel a little pity for this novel. The author's writing style is excellent, with various control over details, conspiracy calculations, duels between chess players, and struggles between chess pieces. The author uses the simplest words to make those unpredictable conspiracies simple and easy to understand. It can be said that it is really interesting for a conspiracy novice like me. But there is still no way. To put it bluntly, this is an era of cool writing. It's really hard to go against the current. Although he faked his death later and found his sister, it started to become a cool novel, but a cool novel is enjoyable from beginning to end. Some people even like the author's early writing style but not the later ones. So there are basically no people at the back, which is also a pity for me. Give me the last five stars!

The protagonist's creation is quite good, catching up with the mortal flow system + changing the power and changing the map to become an immortal. This method is now more popular from the mortal world to cultivating immortals. The sense of substitution is stronger, maybe because of the fatigue of reading. The path to becoming stronger, cooperation, revenge, one's own power, and the villains from our readers' perspective that appear in the play are all products of the author's careful consideration. I haven't seen the brainless part so far, and it's indeed beyond my expectation. The emotional line has not been developed yet. The appearance of the character Chu Wunian should be to promote the emotional line. After entering the plot of Six Doors, conflicts appeared inexplicably, and the contradictions became increasingly difficult to understand. In the middle, Shi Shifeng went to Qin to find the male protagonist and explained why he left Chu. He also told Chu Wunian and Yi Xing. Here, I feel that some misunderstandings should be solved and there may even be new progress. Unexpectedly, in the middle and later stages, Chu Wunian had no thoughts at all. Even Chu Xing mentioned to Chu Wushuang (grandma) that he basically had no hatred towards the protagonist and there was no need to go to this point. The author is definitely working on the rest of the plot in an orderly manner, and I am still looking forward to it (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑ give the author a thumbs up. But it's true that Chu Wu Nian has always been a little itchy in my heart (I guess I have empathy from similar dramas I watched in my youth, it's purely my subjective thoughts (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡)

The logic is slightly flawed, but the flaws are not concealed. Generally speaking, there is no problem. The setting of the three monuments of heaven, earth and man in the end is a bit interesting. The protagonist has a good personality and basically has an online IQ. Some readers will only point out the world from the perspective of God. In fact, the protagonist has tried his best. On the platform of Tomato, I feel that there is no problem with a score of 9.3 Or above.

It looks good. The author will update it quickly and wait for the follow-up. The writing is very good. Except that Chu Xinghe is too high in rank, there is nothing else. It is also understandable. After all, if Chu Xinghe is too low, he will not be able to play against the protagonist in the future. This way, the subsequent battle will be more exciting. I suggest that the Chu Kingdom be destroyed. The woman should either be killed or let go. It is best to kill. It would not be good to have someone as a girlfriend or bed warmer. Now is the time to pursue martial arts and magical powers. If it is written because of the love between children, there is really no way to watch it. If it is just to protect one-third of an acre of land, then you can get married, but the mission of the protagonist is definitely not like this. It is best not to have emotional scenes. Once there is an emotional line, your desire to watch will be halved. This is particularly good. Find women instead, and kill them instead.

For the first time, I saw the protagonist in his 80s, and then gradually became younger. The protagonist is experienced and has made his way in the world, relying more on experience. After all, he is a person who has lived in two lives. He traveled through the previous life and the next life, and only began to rise in the third life (the system awakened). Compared with those protagonists who are always 17 or 8 years old, they show a lot of mature experience, and I don't know where they come from. The plot is compact, not procrastinating, there is no water mark, the suspense is enough, and it is sticky, making people want to watch it. The text is quite exciting and worth recommending. Hope it won't be interrupted.

I've finished reading it. The writing style is normal, there is no harem, the protagonist's values ​​are correct, the plot is very quaint, and the human connections are everywhere. It's well written, and I didn't feel bored after reading it. It feels like I'm going to finish the book soon.

Summary: Excellent: The characters are vivid and lively, the content is exciting, the plot is ups and downs, and the writing is smooth. Cons: The ending is a little rushed. Overall, the novel is good, a slow-burning one, and worth reading.

The author is deeply immersed in the Chinese dark culture, the combat framework is logically rigorous, and the story progresses at a fast pace. However, the characters lack details, and it does not have the gray lines and passion of traditional novels. However, it is indeed a good article that you can't put down once you pick it up. The biggest drawback is that updates are too slow

Another great book. In the early stage, it started with the gang struggle for supremacy, and there were strategies and rivers and lakes. It was well written, and the protagonist's golden finger was not bad, which was a lot of fun. In the middle period, as the story unfolds, the struggle between countries is revealed, and the protagonist's strength also improves as the scene unfolds, so it will not be like being unable to keep up with the rhythm. And one of the characteristics of this book is that anyone who seems to be very good may die in a hurry. Unlike other books, there are a lot of people in Novice Village who are still considered bosses in the later stage.

After reading the first few dozen chapters, I feel that the IQ is on the line, the writing is fluent, the logic is rigorous, and the protagonist's scheming character is well portrayed. I was also wondering why the score was so low. I checked the comments. They all said that the first part is good but the second part is poisonous. So I will give it a try first, and then comment again if I am not poisoned.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it. I haven't finished it yet. I've written a lot and I can read it for a long time. People can't put it down after reading it.

I have read more than 40 chapters so far. Let me give you five stars first. The fights are wonderfully written and the calculations are wonderful. Many of the supporting characters are vividly written and full of personality. The quality has dropped since the third volume, mainly because of the excitement of the plot. It can be withdrawn after more than 180 chapters.

The writing is quite good. In addition to the cheating being a bit fast, the pace of the whole book is also very good. The protagonist is old and shows his experience. It is okay if he can pop out a golden sentence.

The setting is very good, and the first look is very attractive. I read 50 pictures in one breath. My sister came out and endured it for a while, and the apprentice came back and endured it for a while. The disciples were a little bit into it. Maybe I am suitable for reading Lone Ranger novels.

If you take medicine to have an abortion, you won't be able to level up without using any medicine.

The writing is flesh-and-blood and deserves 5 stars! Now that I've seen the scene where the Zhou family was wiped out and Magistrate Chen's body was missing, I always felt that this scene was almost meaningless. Among the three sons of the Chen family, the eldest joined the army and the second entered the sect. The third wanted to prove that he was not a good-for-nothing. In the end, the whole family died, and the second child defected to the sect after hearing the news... I feel that this section can actually add some childhood experiences of Zhou Lin (the second child), such as the stability of the elder brother, the naughtyness of the younger brother, the love of his parents, etc... I think it can be described in a big way instead of just going over it in one stroke. But that doesn't stop it from being a good book. The protagonist is a late bloomer and returns to the world at an octogenarian age... The third son of the Zhou family!

Five stars presented. There are really not many books that I can praise well. I really feel like vomiting when I read a book recently. I won't say whether it's good or not. I have read more than 3,000 books, and this one is still readable. This is the reason why I recommend him.

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The content is rich, not naive, not monotonous, the characters have distinct characteristics, and the world view is not described grandly at the beginning, but is described bit by bit as the protagonist progresses. So far, there are no plot holes that have not been filled in, and there is intrigue among each other! There are intrigues, the situation changes unpredictably, and one wrong step can lead to death. Such wonderful novels are all in Tomato! Read novels! Use tomatoes 🍅 Like it! Nice! Love watching! Still watching!

I have been short of books for many days and can only read some mindless and cool articles to pass the time. I accidentally read this book and it can only be said that another magical book has appeared.

The author is a master. Other novels have a system and are brainless. The protagonist of this film has a clear layout, an online IQ, and is very old-fashioned. The key is that it is divided into: ultimatum war, national war, and civil war. It is very exciting, very brain-consuming, and very passionate. The most important thing is that it is too smoke-consuming, hahahahaha! I hope the author will work hard to rise from the emperor's hegemony on earth to the kingdom of heaven and the kingdom of gods. Don't let everyone down, give you five stars (normally I never comment, and this department won't do it if I don't give it). Work hard! ! !

Tell me your personal feelings as of Chapter 380 This is originally a clichéd plot of a dying old man with no talent in the early stages, who acquires the system. At most, it has the setting of an old man practicing martial arts, but nothing else. In the development of the plot, there are many loopholes, which make people feel extremely poisonous. I couldn't stand the boredom at the time. I originally quit after seeing the poisonous point, but then I forgot about it and came in again. After all, there are not many books in Tomato, and the book shortage is too serious. Then I read it intermittently. By the end, I got through the poisonous point. It became a new world. The system was actually him. He was the main body of the stone tablet, but he was split in two by the powerful, and controlled him to repair Kyushu and fulfill his destiny. This world was actually a vegetable garden, and he was only raised as a vegetable. He worked hard to get rid of the fate of death. Except for Zhongzhou, all other continents in Kyushu were made from the corpses of strong men with dharma. The protagonist transcended the previous structure and wrote and developed it. , Among them, there are scenes of first-level gods and super-level gods slaughtering lives in order to extend their lifespans. By 380, he had left a backup plan for the peace of Kyushu, and began to get rid of his fateful layout. So far, it's pretty good, much better than the poison in the early stages.

It's a very good book on Tomato. The only problem is that the author has too many personal things. The background of each force and the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters do not gradually evolve according to the development of the story, but are determined by the author's understanding of the world and eager desire to express.