Now That I'm Reborn, Who Isn't a Top Student?

How should I put it? I feel like it has both advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the plot is quite smooth. It can be seen that the author wants to write it well, and I feel that the overall structure is acceptable. In addition, the character designs of Xia Yuhe and Ye Chu in the main mission are good, with emphasis on writing and ink, which distinguishes the supporting characters. The shortcomings are also quite obvious. First of all, the character creation is not very good. For example, the protagonist's best friend Ma Xiaotian clearly wants to create a comedian's position, but the jokes Ma Xiaotian made in the first few chapters are actually not very funny, and no one in normal life would think those words are funny. There is also the character of Li Yu'er. I know that character is a shy character, but Li Yu'er's character design overlaps a bit with Su Muyu's, and he has very few scenes. I don't know if this character can be followed by a plot. Regarding the plot issues, I actually thought it was quite dramatic. I remember that my high school was also considered a provincial key point. As far as I know, both my school and other provincial key points seemed to be more strict, but private schools would be much easier. Another point that I can't say is good or bad is that the starting point of the current plot is campus life and Xia Yuhe. I personally think that we should consider writing more character stories, otherwise the narrative will be too linear. Of course, this is my personal suggestion. I am just doing a brain test, so I don't know the actual effect. It still depends on the author's performance! There are also obvious areas where the author has made improvements. The dialogue written by the author in the early stage was a bit man-machine, but the subsequent dialogue became more and more natural as he wrote it, which is great! Brag! Keep it up! Finally, to sum up, this book is compact and rich in content and tells the story in a narrative similar to a unit drama. I personally like it very much. The shortcoming is that the character creation and connection with reality are not perfect enough.

Advantages: 1. **Theme attractiveness**: The theme of rebirth is very popular in online articles, especially the setting where the protagonist makes up for regrets and changes his destiny through rebirth, which is easy to resonate with readers. The protagonist achieved nothing in his previous life because of his playfulness, but is determined to study hard after his rebirth. This "counterattack" plot can arouse emotional resonance among readers, especially those who have regrets about their lives or desire to change. 2. **Reality of campus life**: The novel is set on a high school campus, showing details of campus life such as study, exams, and friendships, making it easy for readers to recall their youth. The protagonist conveys positive values ​​through studying hard and enjoying the learning process, which can inspire readers to cherish time and work hard. 3. **Single heroine setting**: The setting of a single female protagonist avoids the complex emotional entanglements of polyamory, making the main story line clearer and focusing on the growth and emotional development of the protagonist. If the image of the heroine is vivid and the emotional line is delicate and moving, it can add a lot of color to the novel. 4. **Inspirational theme**: The novel conveys the inspirational theme of "trying to change your destiny" through the protagonist's rebirth experience. The protagonist's change of mentality from being playful to studying hard can bring positive inspiration to readers, especially young readers, who may gain motivation to study and live from it.

It's a mediocre rebirth story, although it has some minor flaws, but overall it's okay. Also, now that the heroine is almost definitely Xia Zai, how should we deal with the relationship between several female classmates in the class, especially the school committee [eating melon]

The author is awesome. He thought it was very difficult to write everyday articles, but he ended up writing so many of them. They are both plain and sweet, and also interesting. It is a true portrayal of middle and high school. I won't say that I am uneducated, but the author is awesome!

Nice! It's all a youth I never had. I dropped out of school in the second grade of junior high school because of autism and a broken leg. I had no friends at all before. After a few years, I found a secondary school, but I didn't accomplish anything big. I still didn't dare to speak face to face, and I only dared to chat online. This book is easy to get into, youthful friendship! Some comments say that there are too many supporting characters, but I personally don't think it matters. The writing style still has room for improvement, but it's enough to watch! I hope the book won't be gone. It's probably quite difficult to write about romance in high school. I hope there will be a chapter on college romance later on, after getting married, raising a baby, and living in old age! [Crying] However, there is one thing to say: the heroine has reached the point of committing suicide, and she succeeded in her previous life. The persuasion always feels a bit sloppy. Is it so easy to persuade someone who is bent on death?

This is the best campus novel I've ever read on Tomato.

From the story of the first year of high school to the story of the sophomore year, and finally the story of the graduation and wedding. It is really rare to write such a complete content, especially the leisurely and interesting daily life with friends and classmates in the high school class. The writing has a strong sense of picture. I really feel like I am back to campus life. I feel that such days are very happy, but also sad that such days will never happen again. After watching it, I felt like my whole body was blown by the "typhoon of youth". The fluctuations in my body when I was happy, and I remembered that it was all in the past tense, the depression, the discomfort in my heart, limbs, and stomach. To be honest, the whole text is full of pleasant content. The discomfort is the reaction when thinking about your lost past. You can temporarily forget it when you focus on reading. Overall, it's a very interesting novel that fits my outlook and hobbies. I have the desire to "complete the imperfections of youth" after rebirth. Other novels are: "After rebirth, academic qualifications and reliving the memories of youth are not important. Making money is more important." I can't say who is good and who is bad. The world of adults is not so clear-cut. I feel like there are two dishes. Both dishes are delicious. This dish just tastes different and unusual.

The plots are quite real and relevant, but isn't the Chinese test for high school exams two and a half hours long? Can you finish it in one and a half hours? I hope the author can write more realistically in this regard [laughing][laughing]

I hope this is a book about ordinary life, with the help of a big boss but without losing the sense of blandness, instead of other pretentious atmosphere that is awesome and lightning-fast, and the atmosphere is airy every second. I hope the author understands the meaning of the word life and implements it throughout the text [Like]

It is a rebirth novel without plug-ins. It is a very good story about the excitement, ignorance and high spirits of young people in adolescence. The author's writing is not good, but the plot alone is worth 10 points.