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The real protagonist, a unique way of immortality, righteousness, faith, kindness... Clear goals, steady, decisive killing, currently only has one apprentice (Chapter 285), the female apprentice has her own career line after joining the apprenticeship, no ambiguity, no emotional drama, a good novel.

The protagonist lives an ordinary and stable life of cultivation, and gradually becomes stronger step by step. It is an alternative immortality novel. The protagonist has a black dog who accompanies the protagonist. The author's writing style is light-hearted, joyful and humorous, without the cliché of bitterness, hatred and clichés of pretending to slap people in the face. I keep reading the updated chapters until the poison test is completed. Readable [laughs], it summarizes the basics step by step and brings a little joy, without any poisonous points. It is good to read this book if you are in a bad mood [OK]

It's quite interesting. The inevitable author of this kind of article is to write about the girl next door, the widow next door, or the tofu beauties. There are no such female characters in this book, and the male protagonist has never been to those Hualiuyue to watch ditties and listen to music. They have never appeared. Why do you want it to meet me in Chapter 70? It's so abominable, update soon

It's very interesting to watch, and the martial arts flavor is very authentic and strong. I thought it was just a simple martial arts world, but I didn't expect it to be a story about a war between martial arts and immortals, demons, and gods in the world of spiritual recovery. We are still laying the groundwork and it is estimated that the protagonist will be reincarnated once or twice before reaching the later stage. The author has written very carefully. It is rare that the reincarnation of immortality is written so well and rigorously in terms of story, writing style, world view and logic. I didn't plan to stay up late when I worked overtime yesterday, but I couldn't stop watching it and went straight to midnight. Fortunately, I saw the update button today, otherwise I would have to stay up late again @ @ @

The combat power system is very well done, and you can feel the process of the protagonist becoming stronger. Although the protagonist is not a grandmaster yet and is a bit impatient (not dissatisfied but looking forward to it), I am still looking forward to the protagonist's achievements as a grandmaster. Some people say that the pace is slow, but I think this is exactly the characteristic of the article. The longevity article is about seeing all things in the world and understanding the truth in the world. Slow work leads to fine work, and a quick knife cuts through the mess, but it also removes all the flavor. I hope the author will not give up, and I will keep pursuing it.

It's a very good read. Lao Xie really climbed to the top step by step. There are not many flaws. He just takes revenge and there is no ambiguity. The disciples and grandsons also respect the protagonist very much. The best setting of this novel is martial arts. I have to say that the person who invented martial arts is really a genius. Literally. The heroes or demons who harm are either very good or very bad, and they won't worry about hypocrites stabbing them in the back. Moreover, the Buddha in this novel is a real holy monk, and the Taoist priests are also working hard for the entire human race. The people the protagonist knows are pretty good, and everyone who can be a hero has love and justice.

The overall writing is very good, and there are no problems with the plot and missions. Unfortunately, it was finished a little too quickly, missing the fairyland part. The author said that the dog's life was at stake and his body could not bear it, so he had no choice but to finish it. I understand that, and I look forward to the possible sequels.

Good reviews. The first hundred chapters are very good. I haven't read the rest yet. The story logic is very strict and there are also conflicts. Opinion: I hope the author can improve the use of exclamation points. Sometimes it feels like exclamation points are a bit redundant, affecting the narrative rather than emphasizing it.

It is rare to see a novel that attracts me so much. There is no system or deliberate suppression. This is very attractive to me. Especially the part about saving people from thousands of miles away is very beautiful. It makes me think of a loyal and righteous man. Keep up the good work. The author hopes that he can write such beautiful articles in the future.

Okay. It's the first time I read this kind of relatively ordinary text and I can understand it. It's a good start

As soon as I tasted this book, I noticed a familiar smell, which was very similar to the Chen Xun Big Black Beef. Many of the books tasted almost the same, and they probably used the same seasonings. The name of the protagonist and the pets he brings are almost just like using different colors of soy sauce. It may be a tribute to the immortality of the system! It's very beautiful, really good, and the writing is good. The emotional scene between the protagonist and the heroine Xiao Tian is also well written and very natural. This shows that the author is of high standard, unlike some authors who cannot write but still write hard. The writing was embarrassing, poisonous and discouraging. I passed by a small mountain village and took in a little girl, and even killed the whole village. She was very talented. When she grew up, she was still a peerless beauty. Peerless. I can see why. It's just because the author wants to raise a daughter.

It feels a bit like Chen Xun and Ximen Heiniu, very funny [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's a very good book, I really recommend it. The author writes it very rationally, unlike some authors who can't walk when they see a woman. Some are passionate, some are boiling, some are funny.

The writing is so good, it is about reincarnation again and again, the life and death of people around you, the hero is willing to die for the people of a city, ugh

①The characters have their own characteristics ②The protagonist has great love but is not the Virgin ③The plot development is coherent, there are foreshadowings but not poisonous points ④The emotions in the book are not cold ⑤The protagonist currently has no dark side and is pure justice ⑥There is warmth and warmth in human life and changeable world affairs ⑦Loneliness is low and the knife does not hurt ⑧The protagonist values love and righteousness and is decisive in killing ⑨Slowly warming, currently martial arts blind guess late fantasy (blind guess👀) ⑩The content is rich and colorful, and the writing style is more of a line drawing.

The writing is very good, you can do whatever you need to do, your IQ is online, and you are a chivalrous person. He stood up for his friends, even at the risk of swords and swords, showing the heroic spirit of a hero. The old village chief, shopkeeper Zhang, and County Magistrate Meng are all kind people, and there are no disgusting villains.

It's nice to watch. Although it's different from what I thought about reincarnation, this kind of martial arts style is really exciting and exciting, and it's also accompanied by a black dog. Taking on an apprentice actually doesn't have much of a role, but the apprentice is also a good apprentice. When he travels, he always gives secrets to the protagonist, and it becomes more and more interesting later on. It's just that the pacing in Southern Xinjiang is not good, and the cycle of reincarnation is a bit slow. By the way, there is no female protagonist and no ambiguity. I still have a little problem with male porn, and I like to describe the body occasionally, but it's not harmful. The protagonist is a numerical weird, and he doesn't use his brain very much, so he just ends up being reckless [laughter]

After reading dozens of chapters, it was pretty good. The style between the protagonist and Xiaotian is similar to "Chen Xun Patriarch and Ximen Heiniu". The whole story is relaxed and honest. Of course, what is essential is immortality in the world of mortals. When I think of the mortal world, I think of the sentence "Escape from the mortal world" in the theme song of the anime "A Mortal's Journey to Immortality". People seek immortality just to seek immortality, so they escape from the mortal world. The protagonist is immortal, so his goal is different from ordinary people, it is to experience the world of mortals. This book is a growth story about experiencing the mortal world and cultivating immortality from childhood to adulthood. In fact, the style of this book is very similar to another one I read. "The system gives me immortality, and I will survive everyone." Chen Changsheng also grew up slowly, and then strategized to protect the people he cherished, and gradually became "Mr." After that, I met various people and became friends with them to teach. Of course, pretentiousness is also essential.

A very humane book, this book is like the life of a person. He started from being small and became a powerful person step by step. He values ​​love and justice. He has been watching his friends pass away one by one in reincarnation, and watching his friends pass away one by one in the struggle. He is flesh and blood, real, as if he is right in front of me. Xie Gou, Ya Sheng, Xie Xun! ! ! Every character is vivid, not a backdrop but a protagonist in their own lives, with sincere emotions. I am not good at Chinese. Please go to this book and read a legendary story. No words can equal the shock that the text brings to me.

Many of the ideas are quite good, and I also like the settings. Then there is no heroine, and the handling of the character relationships is okay, but maybe the writing style is a bit lacking. When it comes to describing the characters in the plot, I feel that it is not even meaningful, including dialogues and emotional expressions, but compared to many books, it is already very good. Okay, actually, maybe the writing is not strong enough, but the emotional waves in some places, including the sudden change, are not quite enough. The stimulation to the readers is not strong enough, so it feels relatively flat, but overall it is still very good. Come on, there are still some refreshing points that should be there [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] Overall, it's good. The combat power and world view system are relatively complete. It has its own ideas. It's not awkward. It looks really cool. However, the dialogue between the characters is awkward in some places and the psychological description is almost meaningless. And I personally think that there are some places that don't need to be written out. For example, the protagonist is not a womanizer. You can say it, but you don't need to mention it often. Come on [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

This book may have flaws, but the flaws cannot be overshadowed. Many people don't like to read it, but everyone has their own good points. I personally like it more. Maybe the protagonist is sometimes naive, but people will always have such naive moments. This makes the protagonist more like a living person rather than a heartless and desireless plant. Although the protagonist's combat power suddenly increased a bit quickly in the later period, under the background of the times, there must be one or more people who stand up and serve as the backbone of the people, just like the last century. The Eight-Nation Allied Forces and the Japanese Army were not also sudden disasters, but our country also had heroes after that, and there were countless national heroes who served the country and the people. Therefore, in my opinion, the improvement of combat power in the later period is also understandable. Although Ling Yu's Guan Jian hole has not been filled in the final about this system, but the flaws are still there. The most important thing is not the result, but the process. Life is a process of appreciating the scenery. We don't need to get to the bottom of it. The process is always greater than the result. Of course, if possible, I hope the author can think about it and write a few easter egg chapters about these two pitfalls. After all, everyone is still curious, hahaha, or look forward to the author's next book. Maybe these two pitfalls and Xie Xun's new journey will be in the next book. After reading the book, I noticed that there was still a chapter left that I had not read. After reading it, I found that the author had explained these two big pitfalls, but it is also quite a classic. Haha, see you soon! I wish you all a happy reading, and I also hope that you will look at problems more objectively and less violently when reading novels!

This novel really gave me a different feeling after reading it, because the training system in it is very unique. It is biased towards martial arts but also combines a little bit of immortality. There is a big map at the end but the author couldn't write it, so the system was not added later. But this martial arts system is also very unique. One of the realms is called "Big Hero/Big Demon". Entering this realm is all about one breath of your heart, so this will make the good things better and the bad things worse. The whole book is very unique, and the existence of the system is not obtrusive and helpful. Overall, this book is worth reading.

I enjoyed reading it. It's really well written, but it's a little short of 10 per day. Can it be better? Don't be fooled by the introduction. This book is really a good book. I have tasted it for you. It is really good. If you are interested, take a look. Anyway, my evaluation is good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. You're still not satisfied with 8.9 Points, little greedy cat [you taste it carefully]

It's a pretty good book. It was a little dull in the early stages, focusing on daily life, but it's also quite interesting in terms of daily life. From the current point of view, there should be no female protagonist, and the fighting power has not collapsed. Book lovers who are in a book shortage can feel free to enter this book.

This is a book that I can read. The apprentice in it is not the heroine, but a simple apprentice. It is not a poisonous one. The ending is very abrupt. The author himself said that he cut off some parts and did not change the big map, such as ascending to the fairy world. It should be considered a bad ending. However, I personally feel that it is at least better than most of Tomato's books. Some of the contents are relatively homogeneous and childish. (After reading it, I found out that someone commented that this book is a baby book. I really couldn't stand it.) Let's talk about the general plot. The pace should be very slow. Chapter 600 or 700 breaks out of the scope of martial arts and advances to the realm of immortality. This should be regarded as a bit of a retreat. After reaching immortality, the progress is very fast. It doesn't take long for the protagonist to directly attack the top combat power of other races. I don't know if it counts as the collapse of combat power. Akaishi has eaten too much, so much so that he can eat everything. He deserves recognition, yeah! ! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Oh, by the way, there is another huge surprise in this book. The protagonist is a dog owner, and he feeds the dogs from the bowls used by humans. I don't know if the author has thought of this. Anyway, I was confused at the time and didn't think of this. Another point is that the protagonist is proficient in dog language. The dog can accurately translate every word when barking. This is quite amazing.

The author writes very well. Although he writes about reincarnation, he doesn't have Gouzi. He has been helping Gouzi survive, so he didn't write very fast, so the characters are not that fast. That's enough, there's a story and content

I gave it 4 stars because it's not enough [laughing] The plot is quite compact. There is an outline. The plot advances slowly, but there is a sequence of processes. The first life is good health, the second life is enlightenment, the third life is Shennong, and now it is the fourth life. The writing process is okay, and there are not many poisonous points, but there will be some problems later on when it comes to knives. The characterization of the characters is more profound, and the fighting scenes are more exciting. And his current word count is more than 400 that can be read, which is enough. As long as you don't read it all at once, it's basically enough.

Wow, I didn't dare to confirm until I was halfway through watching it. I've watched the anime video of this book before. For a pure warrior like me, (more than half a year later) I can still remember the plot. The author does write it really well! ! ! However, it is true that the rhythm of the article is a bit too long in the early stage and too short in the later stage. The flaws are not covered up! But looking at the end, it said that the follow-up content was cut due to poor data. If the data comes up later, can I still continue writing? 🥺🥺🥺🥺 (Want to see——!!! Super loud. Jpg)

Very nice, with a bland feel. I feel like my irritable heart has calmed down. After reading it, it won't last long.

Beautiful! It feels like it goes from low-level martial arts to high-level martial arts to spiritual recovery. The protagonist has no ambiguity and no CP in the whole process. However, the supporting role has a lot of scenes with the son of luck from the ancient harem. [Grief]. In the end, the fairyland ending is not written and it is good to stop here. It will not feel unfinished.