Western Fantasy************

Destiny wants to take the protagonist into its hands. How can the protagonist tolerate such a thing? Gua! That visitor from outside the world, the snake of time that transcends fate! You must beat the goddess of fate to her knees. The greatest hero wants to seize fate by the throat [Cool]

So cool! Unlimited time loops to hone your skills I just want to read such a powerful novel! ! Great author! It's awesome, it's awesome, it's time to update!

The work is okay. The protagonist is Tou Tie Wa in Tou Tie Wa. We can't expect the protagonist to have any intelligent behavior. I can only say that when he can't beat him, he will think of other ways to fight. The only thing he won't do is sneak around. This reminds me of the head-to-head confrontation between me and those bosses. I couldn't use all kinds of props even if I wanted to. That's the memory of Elden's Ring, the battle between kings. Holy shit, the protagonist is so cruel. Is he trying to turn himself into some kind of ultimate life form and superman? By the time the protagonist completes this task, he may not have been able to prove that he is among the top 10 in his world. When the male protagonist becomes a legend, no one will be able to beat the male protagonist.

Yes, it is rare to see a hot-blooded and reckless protagonist. Now the rankings are full of sissy characters with the reputation of "fun people" who play witty battles like little kids. I don't feel a sense of immersion at all.

It feels pretty good, but the beginning of the chapter is a bit discouraging. It would be okay to explain it more clearly in the introduction. In fact, I feel that the identity of the time traveler is not suitable for the protagonist. If the protagonist is a native, it will be better. It depends on whether the author wants to leave a hole and extend this aspect of the plot later. After the first resurrection, watch the story. The feeling of writing has really been raised, and it also makes readers deeply feel that the first volume does not require thinking at all, because anything but recklessness is reckless. Of course, I feel that this writing method is still very good. As a new writer, I won't make too many mistakes when writing like this. As for the second volume, I started to learn strategic knowledge. I feel that the author feels that he can control the plot after writing. The protagonist, but I would like to give some advice to the author. It is better to describe it more in the introduction. Otherwise, the first few chapters will not be very good to read. At least, there must be some reasons. The plot also feels good and the writing is quite sufficient. As for the heroine, I feel that it is enough to leave a suspense. Too many strokes are not suitable for this protagonist, and It's not easy to write, and it also affects the viewing experience (from the beginning, the protagonist is an iron-headed boy, and there is really no need to write about falling in love). It's OK to give a rough summary. Of course, it's just a suggestion. The final evaluation is five stars. As for why it is four stars, you have to ask the author why it is so short.

Although it seems a bit abusive, the more torture, the better. Not bad [smile]

Although relatively straightforward. See the head at a glance. But it's really cool, like being possessed by Khorne

Blood sacrifice to the blood god! Skull offering skull seat!

It's okay, although the main character is a bit stubborn, but there will be changes later on.

It's pretty, but it's a bit cruel, but it's okay

Maybe it's a bit high, but it's in line with my personal preference. Feature film: A traditional Western fantasy novel with the ability to return to death (panels per capita). The first dozen or so pictures have messed up the panel data many times.

Pay tribute to the legendary death-resistant Ironhead Varas Elkrel, a numerical monster warrior who is trapped in a time loop and uses it to continuously strengthen to defeat his opponents. A reckless brave man who never gives up.

This book is really good-looking. Although it is a bit watery, it is still awesome!

Nice! The protagonist is a lunatic with an innocent heart, and all his mental journeys clearly point to the path of becoming stronger. My personal guess is that this world is just a game, and Invasion of the Alien Gods is the latest large-scale DLC. The protagonist is the character controlled by the "player". In the constant battles, the "player" has gradually transformed from a handicap to a master in the gaming field. But the protagonist retains his memory and attributes in the "game" after reading the disk. In the eyes of outsiders, every time he fights without fear of death is the "player"'s constant trial and error. Maybe the protagonist's fuzzy past life was a gaming master who suddenly died in front of a computer screen while playing games [laughing] When the protagonist has trained all his skills to the full level, broke through the fourth wall after defeating the alien gods, and slapped the game planner on the face, how could the GB level design be so simple? It will be very easy to fill it out next time! [OK]

Is this considered third person writing or narration writing?

Also watch, don't come up with new ideas

The main character reminds me of the old man, Santiago

The return limit welcomes its most qualified person

Sincerity is always a must-win. I've seen enough of the cover-ups. Give me something straight to clear away the darkness.

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Very well written, really very good

A time-loop Western fantasy game panel with a very interesting setting and nothing too sinister about the plot. I have read a lot of novels such as time loops, but most of the themes are Eastern fantasy and weird invasion. This is the first time I have read a Western fantasy novel, especially the character portrayal. The protagonist has a very distinctive personality, that is, recklessness, but the reckless character also has advantages, that is, you don't have to spend much time describing the conspiracies and machinations, but you can carve out the plot. Anyway, after reading more than 70 chapters, I haven't seen any poisonous points.

Come on, the author is great!

He is really reckless, but not poisonous.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A very good book

It's fine except that the main character doesn't look like a modern person. It feels like a strong magnetic field person or a demonic warrior from the past such as Saber Ya.

It's also one of the few that I thought wasn't very good at first, but then it turned out to be okay.

Okay, okay, it feels so good

At first I felt a bit bored when I read the title of the book. I have read the theme of archived immortality several times, but I can't help but be attracted every time. Maybe it's because I don't have strong perseverance and perseverance. I can't help but be attracted when I see such a character who is full of perseverance and perseveres to the end.