The Plot of the Alphabet Actually Made the Entire Starry World Laugh.

A standard heartthrob, close to the love-at-first-sight type. The writing style is average but adequate, without any bad points. It makes people want to keep reading, author, come on ~ [love] [love] [love] After seeing that the heroine deliberately made a "micro-abuse" card, let's stop it. There is a sense of déjà vu of bullying a loyal big dog... It doesn't make people feel happy, but very uncomfortable. Especially after brutally abusing a big dog, the big dog anxiously wants to save its owner, but the owner still hates the big dog's rescue action, and even blocks it out of "fear"? What's all this... Didn't she have any idea of the impact that stimulating a male like this would have? This plot shows that the heroine has a very low IQ [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] There is a sense of déjà vu that after getting into trouble, the network cable is pulled out and the grudges are gone. It's really hard to bring in… I probably won't read this book again, I just slipped it away~

It's pretty good to watch, but the plot is a bit jumpy. I hope the author writes more about games Not great, the plot is very jumpy. I think the male protagonists are described too much. And those plot cards don't feel that good, as well as those five-star cards. It feels very miserable for the one who was implicated and blacklisted. Looking at the directory, it seems that the blockade has not been lifted yet. I also feel that the males written about are too crazy about this game, but the content of the game written by the author feels out of proportion to the attitudes of those males. Also, when the heroine was making the live broadcast card, she blocked the person after she finished it. It felt like she was deleting her friends if she couldn't handle it. Is this an act of anger?

I think the plot is passable and very novel, but I think the heroine's personality is a bit weird, she can be cold-faced and angry at every turn, and then the male protagonists all fall in love with the heroine for no reason. Some of them are disgusted one second, but they are so happy when they are touched by the heroine the next second. I think it's okay to watch one, but they are very similar after seeing it.

There is more space to describe the supporting characters than the protagonist, so be careful with the female protagonist. It feels like the heroine is just a background board, an introduction that connects all the stories, nothing more. The author's writing style should be pretty good. Although there are many omissions, typos, too many words and too few words, and the sentences are not fluent, the author explained the reasons for deletion. I really like this imaginative theme, wow wow, what a pity [crying].

It's very interesting, but I'm worried that the heroine will fall off the horse... And end up becoming the so-called wife of some male protagonist. Now it seems that the male protagonists are either high in combat effectiveness, or rich, or have high status. If the female protagonist is found to be a real person, it feels a little less interesting. I hope that the final development will not turn into a clichéd interstellar female-oriented novel. The setting is very interesting, which is why I kept reading, but the plot progressed too slowly. After reading the latest chapter, I was actually a little worried about the direction of the novel in the previous chapters. In the early stage, the heroine wanted to come out and exchange her body for reality. I was worried that the heroine did not have enough rights. The power and strength can resist the male protagonist, be forced to love, and have no freedom of their own. After all, females are rare. Of course, the author replied that it is not necessarily a head-on confrontation. In the mid-term, especially the two black cards, can the characters of the male protagonists be more memorable, or add a few more male protagonists? Like Canary, the author has more than ten male protagonists, but each one has a reasonable plot line and memorable points. Every time the female protagonist reaches the five-star card, she will suddenly exceed her expectations... I regard this interstellar B game as a highly interactive game. The female protagonist has 100% control over the virtual game. Power, these two points make me feel very contradictory... The essence of B-game is that the player and the character go in both directions. It is the same when playing B-game in reality. I only see the love of the interstellar people for the heroine unilaterally. If the heroine expresses her love for the player more through five-star cards or plot settings, will the factory screen of the heroine be higher? After all, there are several chapters in the later chapters about the peripheral products of the B-game heroine and the attitude and crazy pursuit of these products by the interstellar people. The author keeps up the good work! Just write according to your own ideas

I want more five-star plots and content, but I don't really want to see any plot where the heroine actually becomes a real person. The beginning is a bit slow, but the overall plot is quite sweet.

It's beautiful and interesting. I stayed up late for two days to finish it. I hate how Gu Xingjin and Ji Yanyi whine, they have done so many bad things and still act as if nothing happened [crying] I want to see them punished and retaliated. The result is that they are "favored" again and again, and their happiness is added [crying] [crying] [crying]

Don't be tired, don't take a break. Our goal is to become the chosen one and update tens of thousands of words every day! Regarding the plot, I think I can write something about the old father raising his own and a female Zai Zai, and then accidentally triggering the card when the Zai Zai grows up. In the picture, the grown-up female Zaizai came back with a male, stubbornly stared at her old father and said: "Daddy, he is not such a poor boy, he is my lover." Instantly I felt my fists clenched, and I felt like my cabbage was being eaten by a pig, hehehe.

Ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, the author writes quickly ah ah ah ah ah, the tonic is a scam Who knows how to feel when it suddenly disappears halfway through [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I can only say that it is not the kind of plot I like to watch. It is very baffling.

You can watch it to pass the time, but there is too little description of the female protagonist. It feels like the male character is described to set off the female protagonist, but this goes against the female character.

Even though I am a bitch, I also feel that this book is really good at shaping the heroine. The character of the heroine is much better than other books. Although there are some Mary Sues, the heroine is not as clueless as the White Lotus Virgin. So in terms of the heroine, I really like to read it. The main part of this article is devoted to several male protagonists. The author is really good at writing male protagonists, with various personalities and various car styles. It really fills my limited understanding of male characters. Among the cuteness and aloofness, I actually see a lot of personality traits that the male protagonists do not have in other novels. There are many places in this book that have little hooks designed to attract readers with ups and downs of emotions, such as changing the card surface after each interaction, their actions after blacklisting a few people, and the Dark Star boss and a few people grabbing the Pink Spirit doll. I think when you think about these, you will feel that the author is really cute, so I personally think the little hooks in the book are very cute. For me who has been reading for a long time, compared with the works of the same type that I have read during this period, I really like this one more, but the ending is a little too fast. I heard other readers say that it is not effective, so keep working hard in the future.

Is the low score because it ended in a hurry? The subject matter is very novel and the writing is very good. The feelings and card descriptions are really well written. There are a few small flaws but they are not major problems. You are my god, the author! I hope there are still people with this kind of subject who can watch [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's such a novel article. It's like playing a B-game. I accidentally clicked into the serialized article and it made me scratch my head. (Actually, it's okay. I haven't watched the New Year special yet. If I'm really slow, I'll continue my life [laughs]) I've finished watching it. The ending is so sudden. Liuliu is also offline suddenly. Is it true that I can't earn cat food to support Liuliu? There are many men in front of me. I didn't expect that only three of them will have a side story with sister Bao. The crown prince should not be much different from Baili in terms of power and strength, but In the end, only Baili found the younger sister, which didn't feel right. The crown prince also seemed to have gone offline suddenly. Although, I prefer Baili Yidiudu/Overall, it's good-looking. It's the first time I've seen a story with this kind of plot. I'm looking forward to the author's new book, and I'm also looking forward to all the chefs cooking [Blowing kisses]

This subject matter is really great! Very nice! But why do I feel that the female protagonists don't have as many roles as the male protagonists [crying]

It seems that you can cut into the team members, which is very novel, but the ending is a bit rushed. After the concert, the vest is over, and the system is disconnected immediately after receiving the body. Everything feels very rushed. Fortunately, there is a New Year bonus, and you can see him interact with most of the male protagonists. Otherwise, I would not like the remaining extras at the end. I don't know if it's because the extras haven't been finished yet. Anyway, I've read all the newer extras so far, and there's not a single male protagonist I like. It would be nice if it was a little more delicate

Come on, keep up the good work! The subject matter of the article is very novel, and I like the character of the heroine very much. The plot cards and hidden cards of the heroine torture not only the male protagonists, but also us! But I am also very happy about it [Top post][Top post]

The writing is very good, why is the ending so rushed? I really hate it. The author makes people love and hate him at the same time! Teacher, I want to read it again. Also, it hurts to see negative reviews. This novel is originally about this kind of subject, so it's good to read it [crying]

Wow, this is another channel for me to read books. The plot is quite good. I personally like to read interstellar novels. I finished reading it in one sitting. It was a new book at first. I read it with the mentality of reading it before I rated it. I finished reading it in one sitting. 🙉 I have to look for books again. Dear author, you must have a good rest, but don't stop every day. Remember to add more chapters and don't rest too much. [Blow a kiss], hahaha

The first part was pretty good, but I stopped reading after about 100 chapters. Share my true feelings. The theme is popular + card drawing, very novel, and combined with the hot topics of the times. As a person who plays card games, I was really shocked. The previous plot is not procrastinating and is quite gripping, because the two five-star cards of First Meeting and Desire are explosive. Personally, I don't think the plot cards are as attractive as the five-star cards. I hope that there will be more five-star cards of different types to arouse players' emotions. We also enjoy watching them. In addition, I feel that the characteristics of the male protagonists are similar, and I hope they can be more distinctive [adoration] [admiration]. I hope this work will get better and better, that's it for now. Happy New Year to everyone~

The author is very thoughtful, and the plot is progressing very well so far. The only troubling point is that the female protagonist will eventually have her own entity and may be with a certain male protagonist or multiple male protagonists. If I put it into perspective, it would be unimaginable if she appeared in the real world and was still with the big boss fans. It depends on how the author handles this.

It's so beautiful, I can't find the kind of meal replacement [Adoration] [Adoration] The excitement and excitement are so exciting [Making faces] Watching those unlucky guys go crazy when they can't get it, I can't help but feel very happy. Sure enough, happiness comes from contrast [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] @Hedi's fans

Very nice! But the early stage is a bit similar to the male worm I watched in JJ, but the later stage is different! Just one thing! Don't worry, everyone! Really pretty! ! ! Recommended!

My wife is so beautiful, not enough I have always wanted to read a story where the female protagonist is the protagonist of an interstellar love game. It fits my imagination so well. The author said that he is not good at writing big scenes. Hey, I don't like watching big scenes, I just like daily episodes.

The female protagonist travels across the interstellar space and becomes a rare female in the interstellar love game. The female protagonist is super beautiful. She has new cards and plot cards with each male protagonist. She is extremely hormonal, super spicy and delicious, and the female protagonist is the favorite of the group. Not a single one was skipped, and I read it again and again, [adoration][adoration][adoration][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] Update soon, roll around, dear author, update soon

Dear Chef: Seeing words is like meeting each other, showing your trust is soothing. Falling in love with you is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in this world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or coming up with ideas, but suddenly having you makes me worried about you and I can't let go of you. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning or a nap at noon, I love you. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Love is just one word, I only say it once, you know I will only express it with actions [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's good. I've read articles about people who dress up as avatars a long time ago. But that one was about fast travel and it ended very quickly. It's not enough to read. Finally, an author writes this kind of article [Love]

Short! It's too short! It seems a bit unfinished. But the content is okay. [Eat melon][learned]

It's really beautiful, please update soon! Is it possible to make the female protagonist stronger, that is, the female suppresses the male, and is stronger?

Is it definitely a very novel novel (because among the books I have read so far on Tomato, this one is unique), similar to Oto Man? But it's a bit different. If you don't have a book to read or don't know what to read, you can give it a try~

The subject matter is relatively new, and combined with the current B-game, I performed a role swap for B-game, and I felt the feeling of a female protagonist passing through a hundred flowers without touching her body. It would be much better than a script that simply describes a heartthrob. The portrayal of the male protagonist is also better, and the image is more three-dimensional. Occasionally, some sentences may not read so smoothly, but the author also said that he is a newcomer, which is understandable. Overall, it can reach a score of 9.3. Come on, author, please update it quickly. Author, please don't be tired, and of course don't be idle either [laughing].