Chuan Shu: After Taking Away the Male Protagonist's Luck, He Confessed to Me

It's weird, really weird. It's well written, but it feels weird. It feels gentle when you read it, but when you read it carefully, it doesn't feel like it. The love between the protagonists is not earth-shattering or sensational. They get together for a while and then separate. It can only be said that there is not only love in their lives, but also many things that are important in life. It feels like they have only sought love, not to be together [Start] Tsk tsk tsk, anyway, it feels weird. Gong and Shou are also becoming ordinary. Gong is the favored son of heaven, but he is only the favored son of heaven in their world. He is trapped in one world and is supported by the belief that there is a world beyond Gong's desire to return to him. Therefore, he is the most special person in that world and will not be trapped in the consciousness of the world. He is special. But when he began to accept the various rules of Gong's world, fell in love with Gong, accepted his mortal qualifications, and began to cultivate immortality and abide by discipline, Shou became ordinary, and his specialness gradually faded away, and he was no longer the most special. Both Gong and Shou have imperfections and are not the strongest in the world. Their emotions are always at risk of being suppressed. Gong has people he respects, his own circle of friends, and a position to inherit, but these Shou are not deeply involved. Sometimes it feels like they are not on an equal footing when they fall in love. I've watched half of it, I hope they finally achieve success It's okay if you can't achieve righteousness in cultivation, you can have regrets in your life

It shouldn't be rated so low for this article. It needs to go up from eight points anyway. I don't expect it to go up from nine points (for fear of being taken off the shelves and replaced by AI). The protagonist Shuang Jie, Gong is really pure in love, he will not let go of someone when he is alone, and he is also really good at taking care of people, and then he will keep a distance from the person who has a crush on him, and will not be ambiguous, and will firmly choose the direction of his heart. Shou always wanted to go back to modern times at the beginning, but in the end, Gong did too much, and Shou was tempted, so he stayed. Wen's system person is also good. He didn't force Shou to do anything. At first Shou did what he did just to go home (the system needs energy to send Shou back to modern times), but later his thoughts changed and he was reluctant to leave. At this time, there was no plot where the system forced Shou to complete the task (everything was decided by Shou himself). Both Gong and Shou have their own charm, which makes people feel that the two of them should be together. The plot that touched me the most was probably the scene at the end where Gong becomes an immortal, and Shou unbinds himself from the system in order to Gong Liu (the system goes to find the next host to do the task, and then the system and Shou have a good farewell). In the novels I read in the past, the protagonist is either an orphan who has no nostalgia for the previous world and therefore firmly chooses to stay in another world, or someone who gives up family ties because of love. There are two types of family ties. One type is relatives who treat the protagonist well (which is why the protagonist is so determined to go home at the beginning), and the other type is those who treat the protagonist badly, so the protagonist chooses to stay in another world. The first type is really regrettable. Regarding the choice of family and love, the protagonist may have the opportunity to go back to modern times to say final farewell to his relatives, but I think he cannot really let go. In the future, although he will not regret it, he will have regrets to some extent. Regret is normal, but the world of novels more or less reflects the emotions of people in reality. For example, many people may write regrets that cannot be repaired in reality into novels and give them a regret-free ending. This is really the moment we want to pursue. A few sentences in this article made me feel the feeling of healing. Because Gong is an immortal, Gong can go to Shou's world with Shou (because I skipped to watch it, I didn't see the reason why Shou insisted on returning to modern times in the first place), but this represents the best of both worlds. No one has to give up, and no one has to regret because of anyone. This is the most perfect ending. There is something I would like to add here. I saw in the comments that some sisters said that the protagonist's relationship is too peaceful, so I would like to give a personal interpretation. In fact, every stage of life has different pursuits and different worries. When I was 17.8 Years old, I was particularly eager for a vigorous relationship or something. I had the best expectations for the future. I didn't want my life to be too dull and always pretentious. But when I was 22 years old, I hoped that there wouldn't be too many twists and turns in my life. I didn't forget what I had asked for. It was just because I had too many worries when I grew up, so I became dull. I hope that I can have a stable job and future, not because I denied myself, but because I have grown up and experienced more things. The setting of the article is that Gong is already over 100 years old, so he has experienced a lot to become what he is today. Now he has become mature and stable, and he is the big brother in everyone's heart. But my thinking still stays in the author's description of him in the past. Although he has already formed the prototype of a little adult at a young age, his nature is still that child who loves to cling to his mother, and he lives in a world full of love. He was a child of the environment (attacking the love of his parents), so he had the nature and innocence of a child, but then everything was lost, and he was forced to grow up. He was gifted and the son of the master's friend, and was given many shackles, so he was mature and stable. He was the senior brother in everyone's mind. He had hidden the past in his memory. He would not tell others, he could not be cowardly or retreat. But Shou's appearance brought about changes, and a stone dropped into Gong's plain heart caused ripples. As everyone can feel, Shou's desire to go home at the beginning was so special that he was out of place in this world, and such a person approached Gong. , It's hard not to notice such a special person. He gradually fell. He started to conquer, and then he also fell. He gave up his specialness for the sake of attack, so in our eyes, he was no different from other people in that world. But even so, even though it seems plain to us, it is actually not plain in the hearts of the two protagonists. They are the only special ones in each other's hearts. It is precisely because of their specialness that love is plain and has no twists and turns. Because there is no misunderstanding between amnesia and thunder, so their love will be plain in our eyes. Addendum: After Gong met Shou, he began to tell Shou about the past of his parents. This incident meant that Gong had not forgotten his past and had never let go. Shou learned from people Gong knew when he was a child that Gong was a sticky boy when he was a child. Finally, everyone reads the article from different angles and has almost the same life experience. This is what I experienced when I wrote it visually. There is no need to distinguish between right and wrong, and there is no need to argue about right or wrong. Because for me, this article is biased toward healing, and some details require people who resonate with me to deeply understand and interpret it. So for you who read this, I hope you can also feel the beauty in my words. I also wish that your life will be smooth sailing and happy.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! This novel is really good to read. Everyone, everyone, I must strongly recommend it. Using my life span as a bargaining chip, everyone must read it. Everyone must read it. It is really good to read!!! [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] 1. The character image is outstanding, and as a reader, I have a strong sense of involvement. The author has written the stories of many people in more than 100,000 words, including the gentle and sweet little junior sister, the affectionate and reliable second senior brother, and the pitiable Tan Qiu... Looking at them, I feel like I have watched their lives as a witness. 2. Have solid writing skills and a certain sense of humor in the writing style. I originally wanted to read a story of more than 100,000 words to relax my mind before going to bed, but ended up rolling around happily in bed all night. The author's writing is humorous and harmonious. Even in the more serious battle scenes, you can feel the protagonist's cheerful soul. 3. The plot lines and emotional lines are reasonably integrated, and the plot of the whole book progresses step by step. This book tells the story of Lin Yichen, a reader who accidentally traveled into the novel and was bound to a system that captures the protagonist's luck. He met the protagonist Ju Chiyuan who was injured under a cliff. One person is cheerful and optimistic, while the other person is loyal and observant of etiquette. Logically speaking, one mountain cannot accommodate two tigers, and one leaf cannot accommodate two kinds of people. However, in the world of immortality where friction is constant, the two of them shoulder heavy responsibilities and share the rise and fall of the world. They laugh, cry and be happy, and they create a vast world that belongs to them. Their feelings for each other first turned into hazy blue smoke, then turned into blue river water. Despite friction, they finally turned into snowflakes, melting and becoming part of their true feelings. He is cheerful and flirtatious, but he unknowingly captures the heart of the protagonist Ju Chiyuan; he is serious and lighthearted, but he captures the heart of the reader Lin Yichen in his daily companionship. The lives of the two people are intertwined and can no longer be separated. The original protagonist worked hard on himself and was full of affection; the later protagonist realized it later and returned the favor with great sincerity. They are a perfect match and no one can separate them!!! In my opinion, this novel is really good. As a reader, I spent half an hour compiling this review. I think this can already explain how good this novel is (￣y▽￣)~* Cover your mouth and snicker. (Maybe due to different tastes, some readers will question my book review, but this is normal. There will be 1,000 Hamlets for 1,000 people. As a small one among thousands of readers, I can only give some small recommendations to people who can't find any benefits, so people with opposite opinions don't need to go out of their way to refute ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧)

How to say it. I recommend everyone to read Teacher Feng Ting's comments. I finished this book in less than a week and it's worth reading. (But actually I also think it's weird. How can I blame Teacher Feng Ting specifically?) It doesn't have the ups and downs like other novels about cultivating immortals. When I read it, I felt that it was relatively calm. This can't be said to be a direct blow, it can only be said that Shou has never felt his own feelings, and he only vaguely felt them when he pierced the window paper. Although Shou said he wanted to take away his luck, he didn't necessarily want to return to reality. It would be better to say that he had nothing to worry about in reality except his parents' tombstones and some good friends. Staying with Gong was actually the best thing for him. After all, no one came out to stop it very fiercely after the end. No one kept stopping the relationship between the two, and it basically went smoothly. The characters of the two protagonists are actually well developed, and the deputy CP is also very good. The stray cat is really cute, help me. I hope we can see Xiaotuanzi's extras in the future, even if they have no CP. Tan Qiu is a character that I find rather regretful. He was an unloved child from beginning to end, and he died full of resentment. This is still a pity. This book is very calming, but I still found it sad. But the book has an end and the story is not over. It should be Teacher Feng Sheng! I misremembered Orz for a moment (crawl away)

Tan Qiu's writing was so good that he burst into tears. It was so miserable. I hope he will be safe and healthy in the next life! ! ! ! Always carefree, so distressed, so distressed [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's a really good novel. Although it's not long, it's very sweet. How can I put it? I've been following it for a long time and finally finished it. Even though I still didn't get enough of it in the end, I still liked it very much. This is also one of the few novels that I can finish reading. Thank you to the author for writing it well. It is sweet and not abusive at all. There is almost no abuse at all. They are all very good and there is nothing imprisoning. I like [love] [love] [love] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Reading this book is a blessing for me. The plot of My Mom is not sloppy at all, sweet and good-looking, and it also has a little bit of fun. Oh my God, I kept jumping on the bed when I read it. It was so sweet that I was overwhelmed. When will I read such a sweet article again? And it's not industrial saccharin, and the vice cp is also very sweet, I can't do it anymore...🤤🤤🤤🤤

A very nice book. Although there are not many chapters, it does not affect the progress of the plot at all. Xiaoju and Xiaolin are very sweet, a very warm and beautiful thing. No matter how good the author's writing style is, he explains everything in less than seventy chapters, and there is always a feeling that there is still more to explore. (I want to knock myself out and watch it again hahaha)

I'm a little upset about Tan Qiu, [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Oh my gosh, I've finished reading it. I actually don't like reading this kind of book with a small number of words because I'll be very reluctant to leave it after reading it. But I like this setting so much. Although the number of words is not that many, I have all the emotional ups and downs that I should have. Suddenly I found that there are advantages to not having many words. It won't make me feel uncomfortable [shy]

It's very good, there are no pitfalls. I kind of hope there will be a sequel to Tan Qiu.

It's so good to read. The only drawback is that it's too short. The writing is obviously better than some high-scoring books. I don't understand why the score is so low [What][Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

I like Tanahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (ﾟДﾟ)w

So sweet. The corpse suddenly became warm

To be honest, although Tan Qiu is a villain, I really like him and feel sorry for him. In the end, don't kill the only light in my heart [I'm about to cry]

It's pretty good to watch, but I was a little bit hard on Tan Qiu at the end.

Xiaoju's feelings change very naturally. His affection for Xiaolin is based on telling him secrets, just like a child sharing with whomever he likes. He looks mature on the outside, but he is still childish. Xiaoming will recognize his feelings and face them head-on, and he will be obsessed with this young love. To be honest, I didn't expect Xiaoju to realize that he likes Xiaolin so quickly and to say it directly. Such a boy has no scheming [shy]

Generally speaking, it's okay, but there are still some shortcomings. The ending feels a bit rushed, but overall it's still very interesting to watch. There's nothing cruel about it. The writing style and language description are a little bit not close to the background story. Yeah, but it's still watchable. It's okay to be a snack.

Super nice book! ! ! 99 For young lovers! ! But I still feel that Tan Qiu is very upset. Although poor people must be hateful, he was also a good and good child at the beginning. He became sensitive and vicious because of the malicious treatment by others. Later, he met Xiao Lin and was warmed by him. However, he was later killed by Xiao Lin himself. What he saw before his death was still Xiao Lin's eyes full of hatred. I feel so sad just thinking about it [crying] Finally, the young couple 999999999! ! ! ! !

It's great. After reading it, I looked back at the table of contents. It's just 67 chapters. The story line is complete and clear, and it's not rushed at all. It has more than 100,000 words to cover it all. It can be seen that the author really loves writing and treats his works like a child. The fact that it is the final article after it is published is also very touching. I cherish my work very much and the article is also very loving. There is absolutely no problem with the writing style, there are no logical flaws, and the connection is smooth. I am also very grateful to Tomato's current recommendation mechanism for allowing me to read this book. I was really lucky to meet the author.

Good-looking, Tan Qiu is really pitiful. People must be hateful, and hateful people must be pitiful. Ju Chiyuan and Yichen are also sweet.

Nice! It's just a bit short (♡>𖥦<)/♥

Nice looking! Soft sweetness and subtle knife, I haven't read such a bland article for a long time =ω= If you have read too many big knife and big sugar and want to change your taste, you can read it! But please pay attention to the plot of giving birth to a child in the last extra episode. If you don't mind, don't watch the extra episode! Fortunately, the author didn't describe too much, so it's barely acceptable, okay? ... If you don't like the last chapter of having a child, you only need to read the second half. I won't spoil the specific details, it is throughout the whole text^^. Anyway, overall, it's really good, but Tan Qiu's feelings for Xiao Linzi were not clearly stated in the end. Maybe it was left open to let readers think for themselves? This book's rating of just over seven points is indeed a bit low.

Damn good looking. Very plain love. It's just that Tan Qiu is a bit pitiful [crying]

The plot is pretty good. I was shocked when a child suddenly appeared in this episode [face covering] [OK]

Not bad, I finished reading it in one go. 😊Suitable to watch when you are bored Finished reading on 2024.11.14

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. But I feel quite sour, woo woo woo And the writing is super, super good. The author's writing is really good.

The emotions in this novel are quite delicate and very interesting.

The writing is pretty good and the plot is good too

Cute cute