God-Slaying: Master the Soul King Palace and Create a Ten-Blade Team

It's not bad, but the part where the Zanpakuto cuts off the Star Blade is a bit poisonous. Zanpakutō is not strong or sharp at all. What is powerful is its various abilities. In anime, the sword often breaks. The Star Sword is said to have the characteristic of being non-god-like, and its cutting is a little hasty. The writing of Jinxu is too exaggerated, and the writing of Zanpakutō is too powerful. It's not integrated into the original system at all. What you wrote is just a fan. Rather than exceeding the standard, it would be better to just blow up the moon with Turtle Style Qigong. Seraph and Kexi are both dead.

Don't interrupt updates, Lao Deng, please update quickly, or I'll come to you with a knife and stab you in the butt.

Although it's a bit toxic, I think it's well written. The author quickly followed up and suggested some new plots, leading a special team alone. The original plot is perfect, so it's better to do some extensions. Personally, don't arm everyone in the early stage. Lin Qiye also owes it first, and then explode the troops in the mid-term.

I like the subject matter very much, and it's good to read, but the pace is a bit slow, and the inner thoughts and motivations in the early stage are a bit slow and confusing. I hope to work harder later, describe it well, and improve the progress a little (the other fan books have more than 100 chapters and the training camp is basically over [like]) I like the early setting very much, but after the Chinese New Year, not only did the writing become very messy, but the interruptions became more frequent. It felt like the author himself had not figured out how to write it. If the author can't continue writing, it's better to let him know earlier. If he still wants to write, I suggest he sort out the outline again and update it more stably, otherwise he really won't be able to keep up.

I feel like this book is okay, although the author may not know much about God-Slaying, so he wrote the article about the training camp in such a way that it doesn't make people want to read it, and it's a bit long-winded like a composition. However, it can be regarded as a relatively average article among some fan articles. To sum up, it's okay to watch, but don't take it too seriously with the setting of God of Destruction. I still hope not to change the original work too much, because each character has their own personality, please respect it.

The subject matter is good, but I still think The Blade Like Fire is handsome [laughing and crying]

The overall feeling is pretty good, I like both the God of Death and the God of Death, but there is a very serious problem! ! ! ! Updates are too slow! ! ! ! ! ! [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out]

It feels quite novel! The plot is okay~ but... Zhao Kongcheng's Zanpakutō is completely inconsistent with his character, and has no similarity except for his appearance... The swords given to others are very strong, but he keeps the one with the least practicality for himself... Let's take a look~

It's okay. Others don't know about it, but it suits my taste. It's good to watch and I love to watch it. Why don't I update it quickly [Punch Out] [Please update]

It's good to watch and the plot is very attractive

The writing is smooth and the reading is very interesting. As the plot slowly unfolds, more content will come out. The Arrancar Ten Blades are available. I look forward to the Death Captain.

Yes, it is already very good among the new books. If you keep writing, your results will not be any worse. Persistence is victory! [Taste it carefully] Also, don't pay attention to those little black guys, they can do it [hit hard] (you can tell them in advance when adding settings or changing settings, otherwise some people will be prone to emergency [eat melon])

It's pretty cool, but updates are too slow and it's hard to wait.

Have you ever watched Qi Huang Qi Ling? How awesome would it be if it were Qihuang Qi Ling?

I want to know if there is a female protagonist?

Full marks, must be full marks.

What should I write about? Isn't Shen Qingzhu Qi Min? Why did Zanpakuto win the championship twice for the second and fourth time? Isn't Li Yan immortal in Beijing-Tianjin Nanshan? Resurrected later

You should change the title of the book to I am a credit dealer in the world of God-killing😓 Pair jasmine with wild sun? Even Kenpachi's body can't withstand Ye Shao's power, but Jasmine can?

Come on, it looks great. The progress can be made faster. It is recommended to update it ten times a day. ૮₍♡♡₎ა

Not bad, not bad. This is my type.

At present, there is nothing wrong with the author except that he updates too little every day. I hope the author can focus on his career and write 10 chapters a day! ! !

There must be a female protagonist [laughing evilly]

A pretty good book

Flaws don't cover up the goodness, flaws don't cover up the goodness

Okay, I like this

Very beautiful, worth recommending

Author, if you don't hurry up, believe it or not, I will kneel down and beg you.

Is there a heroine? Is it a single heroine? Is it Hongying?

Are there any novels about the God of Death? I've been wanting to read the God of Death recently.

I quite like this type of book