Maid, Don't Run Away, Prince Qing Leng Is Going to Break His Legs.

It looked okay from the beginning, but after the heroine escaped, it became very messy. There are some problems with the writing. Each paragraph is very long, and some of them are in the first person. I have read so many books with this way of writing. This is the first time I have seen it. There are many places where I want to know what happened after the funeral. It feels like a story telling. The story is good, but the way of writing is awkward and I can't stand it [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

Keep up the good work!