Inexplicably traveled to the supernatural world of Zongman, expelling spirits? That's for making money, falling in love is the real thing! The youthful abnormality between the pure love warrior Nan Gongchuan and the defeated dog heroine Nanami is serialized! Ps: A new author, met by my wife Yana, and writing a book for the first time.
Reader comments
To be honest, the writing of this book is okay, but the plot is a bit awkward, and many plot developments feel like they are drifting with the flow. The biggest flaw is that I think the protagonist is seriously ill. . . I simply don't see why the protagonist has a crush on Yanami? ? ? Want to chase others inexplicably, similar to a "mass effect"? The protagonist only knows these animes. There is a love-crazed dog. The protagonist posted it inexplicably. Can you explain why you chase her? She obviously has golden fingers and strength, but what kind of woman doesn't, but ends up chasing someone else inexplicably? It seems that she is not even Bai Yueguang, right? The relationship stage has caught up so inexplicably? The protagonist also goes to the service department to make a bet with Yukino. . . I really thought that the protagonist was seriously ill, so he was rejected from joining the club. Anyway, he had good conditions, but the protagonist got angry and insisted on asking for answers. Why did you reject him? . . Yukino must change her impression of him. . . Oh my gosh, you're not chasing after me. Why do you think you are a great hero in Yukino's heart? You are so awesome that the protagonist is comfortable, right? As a second generation person, I say throughout the article that I am already a mature adult, but in the end, I behave no differently than a child. Can the protagonist not be so humble, otherwise I just feel that the protagonist does not deserve to have a golden finger. [Laughing awkwardly]
The portrayal of the protagonist is not good at all. I have been thinking about being a youthful male protagonist, and I am still dealing with a loser.
To be honest, the writing of this book is okay, but the plot is a bit awkward, and many plot developments feel like they are drifting with the flow. The biggest flaw is that I think the protagonist is seriously ill. . . I simply don't see why the protagonist has a crush on Yanami? ? ? Want to chase others inexplicably, similar to a "mass effect"? The protagonist only knows these animes. There is a love-crazed dog. The protagonist posted it inexplicably. Can you explain why you chase her? She obviously has golden fingers and strength, but what kind of woman doesn't, but ends up chasing someone else inexplicably? It seems that she is not even Bai Yueguang, right? The relationship stage has caught up so inexplicably? The protagonist also goes to the service department to make a bet with Yukino. . . I really thought that the protagonist was seriously ill, so he was rejected from joining the club. Anyway, he had good conditions, but the protagonist got angry and insisted on asking for answers. Why did you reject him? . . Yukino must change her impression of him. . . Oh my gosh, you're not chasing after me. Why do you think you are a great hero in Yukino's heart? You are so awesome that the protagonist is comfortable, right? As a second generation person, I say throughout the article that I am already a mature adult, but in the end, I behave no differently than a child. Can the protagonist not be so humble, otherwise I just feel that the protagonist does not deserve to have a golden finger. [Laughing awkwardly]
The portrayal of the protagonist is not good at all. I have been thinking about being a youthful male protagonist, and I am still dealing with a loser.
Detective novel?
Hope I can stick to it
Good looking, not bad
Feeling pretty good
I really like Lao Ba