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Hahaha, is this a self-guided strategy? I don't know if it will break my defense if I find out later that Shou is a straight man hahahahaha If Xiao Xue doesn't show up again, I'll almost make my brother laugh, hahaha
I really like my wife's articles and I read every one of them. Every emotional drama is very well written, fresh and refreshing, and very appealing to my taste. The emotional scenes in this book are also very well written. The male protagonist is really cool, and the interaction between him and his roommates is simply amazing! ! If you stick to it until the later stages, it'll be really beautiful! ! I really hope that my wife's article will be welcomed by more people, but I am also worried that if too few people read it, my wife will not be able to persevere, so I would like to make some small suggestions for this book (sorry if it offends): If it weren't for my love for my wife, I probably wouldn't have clicked on this book or read it. Because the cover, copywriting, and golden first three chapters are all too good. Needless to say, the cover is a bit too plain. The same goes for the copywriting. Although the emotional drama between the main text and the roommate is so well written, the copywriting feels vague and does not reflect the highlight of the article at all. Also, the first three chapters of Legendary Gold are even more of a mess. In a rebirth article, it is taboo to spend a lot of time describing the story before rebirth at the beginning. What's more, the story before rebirth is not attractive. Who would have thought that Mary Suwen came here because the male protagonist was cheated by his ex-girlfriend, and she described it in such detail. It made my blood pressure soar, and I was really a little discouraged. If it hadn't been for my wife's writing, I might not have been able to keep going. But the emotional scene with my roommate later was indeed very interesting, so I felt that it wasn't done well in the earlier part, which is really a pity. I still hope that my wife's writing will get better and better. There are really not many authors who are so comfortable with Mary Susu. This is just my humble opinion, and my wife will accept it critically. I wish my wife's writing will get better and better!
Help, the eldest brother's character is really lovable. This combination of maturity and youth is the best, right? [I'm about to cry] I'm going to kill my family O(≧∇≦)O
It's okay, but it might be a little rough. The protagonist was killed by Xiao Xiao in his previous life and his reputation was ruined. Although it was later clarified, the description of "Resurrection" does not feel like he has any hatred for Xiao Xiao. Then the protagonist and his cousin, the protagonist and Xue Lingyuan, both pairs are described in quite ambiguous ways. Some people may not be able to stand it. Overall it's okay, more realistic, everyone is not so one-sided or flat, it's worth recommending! But it's too short, the author will update it soon!
Well written. Regardless of the eldest brother, I just think Gong is pretty good. In the past life, even if the two of them had conflicts because of villains, it would not affect the initial love between Gong and Shou. After rebirth, Shou only changed slightly, and the two of them had more intersections and took different branches. The only regret is that this Shou should not have given this Xiao Xiao a good look (even though those people have received their due retribution in previous lives), but this does not affect the viewing. The author's writing is quite peaceful and did not make me angry. Finally, I just want to say, please try harder! Slowly speaking, my eyes closed Has the author been stimulated by something? [Pauses face] It's too disconnected. It feels different before and after (starting from the part of being together), but today I suddenly saw it (the end). Is this a turning point, or is it really just a side story?
No, why do you feel so close to your elder brother? Can I have them all? I like them so much, big brother. 😭 I'm so damn convinced, I've been following him for so long and I've been tricked by the author [smile]
When I saw the relationship with my cousin later, I felt that the plot was much smoother. I really like Shou's character. The mature and steady cousin seems to be more compatible with Shou.
It's so good. I like both Big Brother and Xue very much. They have two completely different feelings when they get along with Wang Yi, but I like them both so much. Let's make a separate episode for Big Brother. I really feel sorry for him. Why can't Wang Yi clone himself and give all men a home? . . . . . . . . (Epilepsy)
I'm writing this. Isn't this an article about buying stocks? (Sweating all over) (Sweating all over) It's a stock buying article, so I'll keep it until it's finished... My heart is so bad that I can't stand it. A serious review: The writing is very good, the characters and characteristics are very clear, but I don't know why there are so many typos and missing words in places. This straight man has the strongest sense of straightness I have ever seen, especially when he promised to be Xue's boyfriend before he lost his memory, he said he would be responsible. He is very chauvinistic. 2333 Is a very straight man, with a very funny character. He has a cute face and is super strong. He is also very cute. The only thing that scares me is that this seems to be a stock buying article (wipe away sweat). It can't really be about buying stocks. I read the details of the book three times and it seems to be a bit ambiguous (wipe away sweat) . . It's so messed up. Now it's not even about buying stocks, it's all open. I'm torn apart.
In the introduction, if he can do it, why can't I? Is he the eldest brother? [Admiration]
I have to say, this is an extremely wonderful novel. The author's writing skills are profound, and his brushwork is delicate and vivid. Whether it is the description of the environment or the portrayal of the characters' psychology, they are all delicate and immersive. The story structure is grand and rigorous, and every clue is intertwined with each other to form a complete and fascinating story network. The reading process is full of the joy of exploration. But the most important thing is that this book is unfinished and the remaining 2/3 depends on imagination.
How should I put it? It's a typical girl's article, and of course it's normal. After all, Shuang Nan writes more articles written by women, so naturally more women read them. But as a boy, the sense of violation is still quite strong, and some parts are quite toxic. It can be felt that the author does not know much about the male body and psychology. However, for novels, it is acceptable for artistic processing for the plot. My comments are readable and need to be improved
It's pretty good. The writing is smooth, the characters are vivid, and the plot is well designed. All in all, it's a good novel. You won't feel bored watching emotional dramas, the descriptions are quite delicate and always make people laugh or cry. It's a sweet little article. It's very pleasant to read. It's very leisurely and relaxing. It's great to read in your spare time😁😄
If Xue doesn't come over, his eldest brother will really have his house stolen! ! !
I saw that you felt relieved and came in to watch it after it was finished..., [Crying]
[Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] Can big brothers be together? They are not possible. Although I know, these two are really touching.
It's an absolute potential stock, but I don't know why so few people read it. I hope the author will keep updating it! ! [Send heart][Send heart]
Come on, author, this is a book with great potential. The misunderstandings and conflicts between the protagonists are so well written. I just hope that the misunderstanding about hiding clothes can be explained later.
The plot is really good, but why is the protagonist's personality so reversed? He was still a big boss in the early stage, but how did he become a little puppy in the later stage? But everything else is pretty good. (≧∇≦*)
Are there any articles similar to those written by Cousin and Wang Yi? I hate this setting so much Can't the protagonist be called cousin? The character of Yummy Cousin [I'm about to cry]
(┯_┯) I really like the protagonist and his brother, I'm sorry I'm sick (┯_┯)
Damn it, why is such a beautiful book serialized [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
Why is it over here (dark and twisted crawling, please follow up the plot, ahhhhhhhhhhhh)
It's good to read, I like it big brother, please update it soon, the author is great [love][love][love][love][love]
I caught up to 3:13 in one breath. I'll figure out the value myself. I'll go to sleep first.
I can't tell what's weird about it, but it's still pretty [shy]
It's pretty good. I think both eldest brother and Jiang are very good at the moment. I plan to quit reading novels, otherwise I have to finish them all~ Everyone in the comment section said that the ending was sudden, so it might be a good thing that I abandoned the article midway, but I really couldn't stand the hasty ending.
I endured my own disappointments and continued reading because the main character is really good-looking [thoughts]
Straight and curved and fake and real are my favorites ~ I really like this style.
The feeling of the main plot is much better than the industrial saccharine novel