Operation Delta: Kidnapping a Wheat Mouse Home

At present, there are 18 chapters. The only bad point is the protagonist in the early stage. He is too shameful. No normal person would be like this. This may be the abstraction in the introduction. Anyway, a normal person would not be like this. It is not about the impact of the war on him, but his behavior is purely giant and has slipped through the net for a long time. All the highlights are based on the physical experience and muscle memory of the Veyron. The soul of a dead man can penetrate the Veyron, which is an insult to the image of the Z country soldiers. However, the behavioral habits of the Claw are better described. Other than that, this is the best one among the few Operation Delta books currently available. November 6, 2024

The main character in the early stages made my blood pressure soar, but it got better as I grew up. The author gave me a lot of sweets, which are so sweet that I need to take insulin. The combat descriptions are also perfect, and the sweets and the plot are interspersed just right. Although some settings have been slightly modified, I mainly went for the sweets [learned]. It is very high-quality among Delta fandoms. In the blink of an eye, more than half a year has passed, and Delta has also become popular, which has led to an unusually large number of fanfics being written. At this time, as the first batch of Delta fanfics, it is inevitable for the author to stand out as the popularity is good and the quality is high, not to mention that it is still being updated. Seeing that now I have almost forgotten what the protagonist was like in the early stage. Tang is a real Tang, he can survive it, haha. Anyway, if you have raised the poison resistance, you can rest assured and read. The author also has considerable writing skills, come on!

How can I put it, the author does have writing skills, and aside from the fact that the protagonist Tang does not look like a living person, the writing is indeed very good. Although the latest chapter has a big poisonous point, which is the identity of the time traveler, and a small poisonous point is that the system misuses the protagonist's points and is disobedient. There are also small poisonous points such as equipment falling into the sea, which can easily make readers run away. However, in recent years, the poison resistance has been full, and indeed there are almost no articles about delta, so it is acceptable. I still hope that the author can write better and better, with less poison and less Tang, come on!

The writing style is okay compared to current Delta fan fiction, but the main character design is a bit weak. I think the author wants to portray an ordinary person to become a G I T step by step. The story of the returning beauty who was embraced by the combatants at the end is old-fashioned, but it still has room for development. However, the growth of the protagonist is a bit slow. Although I want to expand the story, your update speed is not very consistent with your ideas. I have also written a novel of 1,000 words in less than 30 minutes, but after all, the delta plot mode has not yet been opened, so the author can only touch the stone. He, it's understandable that the update is slow, but after all, it took two and a half days to polish a chapter of more than 3,000 words. This may be a bit too slow, but I have to say that your seriousness and careful polishing of the article are still worthy of admiration, because I can clearly feel that the awkwardness of this new chapter has disappeared compared to the previous chapters. I hope you can continue writing and bring us better articles. (Personal experience: The protagonist of the story urgently needs a test of blood and fire to transform him)

It's good to watch, but it's a little bit toxic in the early stages. To be honest, the character of the male protagonist in the early stage is really not worthy of a beating, but the portrayal of the female protagonist is still very good, and the emotional line is also quite clear, but the author is a bit slow to update, and there seems to be a slight problem with the timeline, but after all, it is a fanfic, and the private setting is normal. The overall plot is sweet, and the middle stage is more eye-catching, which is quite interesting.

It's pretty good. The emotions are well written, and it's not too watery. It's just that the time is a bit slow. There are more than 100 pictures, and it took less than half a month at most. The author typed out all the words of the characters in the past two days, verbatim, but I like it.

This is the best Delta fan I have seen so far. I hope the author can complete it and not be a eunuch. It is very uncomfortable. I will always support you, author, come on! [Blow a kiss][Please update] Finally, I want to ask, is there a love line? For example, the male protagonist and Horrible Claw [Thinking] So can the author answer my question? Will the male protagonist and Horrible Claw be a couple?

I have read a few chapters so far. Based on my understanding of games like Delta, the world view is incomplete and the relationships between the characters are confusing. I am lucky to have a fanfic. And I don't think there's anything wrong with growth-type protagonists. As long as the author's writing skills are good, the look and feel is much better than that of a cool novel, and it's like a business simulation that gradually accumulates. In fact, the main reason is that I have watched Dragon Clan, and I am very resistant to this category. For me, it is good to be able to grow and have results, rather than feeling like I can't poop like the Dragon Clan.

The advantages of this book are obvious. The writing is very real. It can be seen that the author has a solid foundation and the logic is online. This is the reaction of a normal person after time travel. The characters must have a growth arc, instead of becoming a soldier king like Long Aotian. The shortcomings are actually quite obvious. For those who like Weilong in the game plot Readers, this book is not suitable for you, because it essentially means changing a character and growing up from scratch. In fact, this is logical and in line with the logic of ordinary people. However, many people may not be able to accept this setting. For such readers, this is obviously a shortcoming. This book is still remarkable. [Praise]

Maybe I have been poisoned by other novels. I have read almost 400 chapters of this book and skipped the first half. To be honest, the part where Weilong just traveled through time was really not well written. I think even if the author gave the character in advance, it would look very distorted. The author's writing is very good and he is good at character description. The main thing is the plot. It is very rich but it is a bit too complicated for me. He did not handle the plot well. The development of time, and the simultaneous development of several plots at the same time aroused the appetite, but the priority of plot development was not well handled, especially on the basis of a lot of original work on the original plot. Even though each character was given a rich character image, it made readers have different expectations for the operators. For example, Luna, I often see people complaining in the comment area. At the same time, in terms of plot , the relationship progresses very quickly, but the description of time is quite vague, and although the emotional description is rich but too single, it is easy for people to feel tired and withdraw the book. First of all, I like the author's writing style very much. I just describe the problems without challenging the meaning. The most unacceptable thing about this book is that the premature spoilers of the villain give readers a God's perspective, but the protagonist is kept in the dark. Even though It's reasonable, but it's also uncomfortable to read. Maybe this is my personal problem. It reflects a kind of villain who is completely controlling the protagonist. It is a completely unequal struggle. This book can be said to vividly describe the weakness of human nature and evil. To be honest, I don't like it, so I don't plan to continue reading. I repeat that I really like the author's writing style and hope he does better and better!

This book has a very detailed description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Except for a little bit of poison at the beginning, the poison resistance helped me carry it through. At the end, I just like it, like it, like it. I think this is my favorite Delta fanfic so far, so @ Insasi must have more than 2000 chapters, otherwise I will be sorry for being so good. Chapter 2000, Chapter 2000, Chapter 2000.

A very good book, with well-drawn characters, story backgrounds, and friendship and love on the battlefield. Nor has the cruelty of war fallen behind. At the same time, some secondary characters are also used to reflect the distortion and greed of human nature. The ups and downs of the plot perfectly put readers into the character's psychology and are thought-provoking. Although it is a bit toxic, it does not affect the fact that this is a good book. I hope the author will work hard!

I personally think that the character creation is quite successful. This book has transformed a person from a fat nerd who talks a lot, has little actual combat experience, and can only rely on the body memory of a Veyron, into a GTI special operations operator who still talks a lot, but can already take charge of his own role. Although the character image in the early stage is indeed not very likable, in the later stage, after the protagonist grows up, the writing is still good, and it is worth reading.

The fact that the protagonist is a diaosi is also very vivid, and it perfectly fits my understanding of diaosi on the Internet.

This book is very well written. I just want to change the name Veyron calls Mai Xiaowen. It feels a bit uncomfortable to keep screaming. It just feels a little awkward. Everything else is pretty good.

The protagonist is a bit abstract at the beginning, but becomes more and more interesting later on. The world view is very interesting, and the character descriptions are very vivid, especially the bee doctor and the claws.

A very good book. What I wrote earlier made me not want to play Delta anymore.

The protagonist in the early stage is too sweet, but later on, Luna and Red Wolf, the writing of these two is annoying, and Luna is a bit scheming. However, I think the writing of Horrible Claw is good, and it is indeed very enjoyable to watch. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, holy shit. Can't we update 50,000 a day? So many chapters, I read them in one morning

I have only read a few chapters of this book. I am just talking about my personal feelings. There is no need to refer to my review. I am just saying it. Personally, I want to see a more mature protagonist. I don't have much experience with a growth-oriented protagonist. The process of growing up is very painful. Anyone who has been an experienced person must know that the process of growing up is particularly painful. This book is really well written, really good. For male videos, everyone should be able to put themselves into it, so what I would like to see is a more mature protagonist. This protagonist is too tame, but he is a growth-oriented protagonist. The author's description of the character is very good, very three-dimensional, the emotions are in place, the content and details are also very real, and the handling is very good. However, because it is too real, the protagonist who is so tangential in the early stage can't do anything and can't help much. It's hard to read, but the book is definitely a good book, and it's particularly relevant now.

I have a relatively good impression of this book. If this book is normal, it will definitely be rated 9.3 Or above. However, it is different from many other books of the same type. The performance of the protagonist in the early stage is a bit difficult to overdo. Many book friends who are in a book shortage will definitely not be able to accept it. But in general, the description of the battlefield in the early writing and pictures is very good, and it is also mixed with very humorous jokes [like], this The setting of the system is also quite unique, which adds a lot of fun. It can be said that it makes people laugh to death. In the middle period, the heroine fights together with the emotional double line, which is very sweet. The various battles and the emotional descriptions of the characters in the middle period are very good. The most unique and special thing about this book is his character image. He is not like the usual version of Long Aotian, where the male and female protagonists are independent. The character description of each supporting role in the team The writing is very lively. Without the protagonist, there is no sense of fun. Without the protagonist, you are invincible. There is only constant teamwork. In the mid-term, it is very good. However, there are still some shortcomings in the mid-term. The system effect is much lower. The combat skills of merit point redemption seem to have disappeared. There is no special description of what this enhancement brings. But overall, the writing in the mid-term is definitely very good, regardless of the early stage. If so, this book definitely deserves a rating of 9.0 Or above, but it dissuaded many people at the beginning [almost crying]. The author's writing style is also very good, and the male protagonist is very humorous, very humorous [Admiration]. My evaluation can be summed up in one sentence: This book is enough for me to read all night long. The plot is very compact, there is no boring place, and I won't fall asleep like other books, and I will laugh wildly from time to time [laughs]

Very nice\(//∇//)\, well-founded and not mindless

It is a relatively good and realistic depiction of the otaku protagonist who travels to the battlefield. I wonder whether the protagonist will remain as decadent as ever or gradually become stronger. Some brothers who want to see justice delivered from the Dragon King through time may be disappointed.

It was a little uncomfortable in the early stage, but it became very satisfying in the later stage. Especially after Mai Xiaowen's attitude towards buying Mai Xiaowen changed, the progress of the story was also very interesting [laughing evilly] [crying with laughter]

I have been following it since Chapter 100, which is a long time. Generally speaking, the characters are very fleshed out, the plot is remarkable, the battles are tense, and there are daily laughs.

It's pretty, although it's a bit sweet, but not too tacky

Although I haven't played much of Delta, the author has also included a lot of plots in this book to facilitate readers' viewing; the characters and plots are very well created, and I really like the pairing of Weilong and Mai Xiaowen [smile][smile][smile]

So far it's pretty good, you can rest assured and take a look, the storyline between Dragon and Mai Xiaowen is pretty good [laughing]

The best delta novel I have ever read \(//∇//)\ and it is very to my liking

It's okay. The protagonist in the early stage is quite a loser, and the reaction to the first kill and the first live ammunition is quite realistic. However, there are too many long paragraphs and some dialogue content is repeated (it may be that I want to express it in a film and television dialogue style, but I personally feel that it is not necessary). It is recommended that subsequent updates be divided into sections.