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This book is quite good. I think the only criticism is that the author describes the protagonist as if he has Parkinson's disease and does not let the protagonist play with guns. Even with the protagonist's high physical fitness, pressing Barrett with one hand is like playing with a toy. Guns really have no technical content. Even if the most rubbish person practices thousands of bullets every day, his marksmanship will not be too bad. Even if you don't want the protagonist to play with guns and feel that hot weapons are difficult to write about, you should give a better reason. For example, the protagonist prefers to fight with cold weapons. The feeling of close combat is better than the protagonist you wrote in the book. The shooting skills within five meters are okay, but the gun shooting beyond five meters depends on luck. Isn't that pure? Don't let the protagonist play with guns. Don't forget about gun fighting in that time and space mall. It's the cheapest one so far. Every time I see gun fighting in the mall, it makes me laugh. Just my personal opinion, if you have different opinions, you can discuss it [face covering]

It's well written, but the protagonist doesn't know how to use resources. He can form a team to study the things brought out, and then grab an artificial intelligence to facilitate management, instead of wasting resources like now.

Luo Binghe has waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang has waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji has waited, Wei Wuxian has waited for 13 years, Ye Hua has waited, Bai Qian has waited for 300 years, Sun Wukong has waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo has waited, Ning Ke has waited for 500 years, Huacheng has waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue has waited, Wari Tusu has waited for 900 years, and Nightshade has waited. Longyang 1000 years, White Snake has waited for Xu Xian for 1000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited, Yu Shu has waited for 2000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3000 years, and Xiyao has waited. For thousands of years, Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, a man was lying weakly on the bed, his face couldn't hide his paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update 1..." Anyway, please update me soon! ! ! ! ! !

I just discovered that I have the same author as another book. The Bankai-ryu is very good, but the updates are not strong enough. It's considered first-class in tomatoes. The old book has too few words. The number of words in the early stage has almost reached the later plot. The pace is too fast. If I think about the outline carefully, I can increase the number of words by five or six times.

It's okay, but the update is not very powerful. I think the protagonist needs a fire source, or go to the world of Ben10 to get that little broken watch.

An underrated novel. To be precise, if you ignore some minor poisonous points, you can read it. If nothing else, I can read it. It is still very good as a short and refreshing novel about the quick travel of the world. Recommended by old bookworms.

Poison, strengthened is the same as not strengthened

The writing is good, the writing style is coherent, and although the plot is not ups and downs, it is not boring. There is nothing too buggy, and some minor flaws are acceptable. Make people want to listen to it. It's a good book.

Get some more men

It was okay up front, but suddenly extraordinary things appeared in the real world. I hope it won't collapse later.

Give a score and encourage! I understand everything 😏

Okay, ok, ok

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Yeah, yeah, okay

Very good, simple and smooth, the narrative is not confusing

Well written, it's my favorite style! !

I personally feel fine, but the update is a bit slow [Like] [Follow] This book was immediately raised and put into the cold palace. One chapter is updated every day. I don't even know if it has 100 words.

Okay, okay, pretty good

Things about excellent people

It's very beautifully written.

A very good novel

No brainer, just skip some chapters and read

Each world wears out a little quickly. It looks really good, and it gets more and more fierce later on.

The author wrote a lot of things himself and then forgot about them. I try my best to rewrite them for him.

T1000 can my 🉐T1000 robot disappear? The author returned my T1000 reward robot

I think this book is okay, I'll read it when I have free time.

It looks good, but I don't know what the point is? I just don't know what kind of article this is? Daily? Task? Cool article? I'll just ask [laughing and crying]

This is the third book I've read by the author, come on♥

This book is quite well written. It may be a new book, but as a bookworm of 20 years, I can honestly say that it is really good and can be read. I recommend it.

The content is actually great. It's about combat power. The skills are very high according to the author's description of IQ, but when used very low, the skills will be forgotten to use. If the combat power theory is clear, this book will be five stars.