Stolen Pen****************

Preliminary summary: 1. Giving a five-star review is because I don't want to affect the score of this book (the star rating will fluctuate). 2. Not malicious, not trolls, not keyboard warriors, not fans, you are right if you criticize me. 3. Treat things rationally, identify independently, evaluate objectively, and make careful decisions. Comment: It took me a few hours to read it, and the whole text feels like I am looking for a plot in an embarrassing society (the whole text has a lot of embarrassing plot points, and even through the early and late stages, most of them are unreasonable and forcibly shaping the characters). In the early stage, the author's writing skills were not very good, and the heroine he described was too single-minded but kind-hearted (some friends may think of the Virgin), but in the later stage, it was strengthened, and the characters gradually became fuller, which is gratifying. The system does not play a big role. It is mainly used for chatting and providing tasks that make people die, as well as rewards and punishments. The most profound foreshadowing at present is probably the "mind-reading" skill as a reward. According to the introduction, it can be inferred that the heroine is being read, and the scope should be quite wide. (Personally, I feel that it is called a reward but is actually a punishment. It feels like it deprives the heroine of her right to hide her selfish thoughts) Friends who want to read this book are advised to imagine it for themselves first: All your trump cards and secrets are known to people in this world without any obstacles; Your inner activities and conscious thoughts are openly observed by others without any reservation; Your body and privacy are intimately touched by all kinds of men in any way without any regard. Suggestions: If you are a friend who cannot accept any of the above points, I suggest you quit, as it will make you uncomfortable. If you are a friend who can accept all points, you are this [like].

The writing is not bad, but it's really Mary Sue-like. I'm not used to it. It feels like my brain has returned after being away from home for many years. Emmmʕ(ⓛ–ⓛ)ʔLet me give it a try a few more times·ࡇ· Seeing how bad I am makes me want to vomit╱/( ◕‿‿◕ )\╲

It's a good read and a good article, but I prefer the first half of the chapter where the heroine is in the Zhang family. I miss the arrogant and venomous Zhang Boqing and the conniving Zhang Bolin of the heroine, as well as Zhang Longyun, who is cold in appearance and gentle in heart, and the adoptive father Yao, who is cruel and cruel.

Oh my god, it's so beautiful. I like it from both the Zhang Family Boy Group and Lao Jiumen. The only flaw is why it's still being serialized [crying] [please update]

Looks good, forgive my words Although she is a savior and a holy mother, she is not a delicate one. Instead, she is a living heroine who dares to love and hate. All singles. Our baby girl is not enlightened, nor is she not enlightened at all. He clearly treats those things that are enlightened as brothers, older brothers, but those brothers are careful ~ hehehe As for the eldest heroine, she is brave and lively, and occasionally acts coquettishly, and even though she is a bit tricky, she can figure it out very quickly. It is not just a matter of words, but it is not like Luo Liba's long stories and short stories.

For me, I like him more. I like his lazy kitten-like state. He is portrayed like a real kitten, very delicate, and the tasks it has to do between it and the system, and the contact with the various male protagonists are also because of his unyielding desire and unwillingness to sink into the world. , And the delicate portrayal of each novel character, let me see a free picture. If you take it out, every character is invincible, but its existence makes the whole picture more beautiful and gorgeous, like a set of gorgeous rainbows appearing in the dark sky, everyone's eyes follow her, I think this is her [Sending Hearts] It can be said that I also like him. If (๑•.•๑) She chases me, I can't help it. I hope the author can never have a bottleneck to create his own beautiful style, and I also wish her happiness and peace*^_^*

[Understood] Alas! I've been reading this article for a long time, so I couldn't help but read it. As expected, the more I read, the better it looks! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Can the author decide who the younger brother is? I have actually read several heartthrob books where the guy eats the leftovers [face covering] and is obviously very pure and consistent with the heroine🌝🌝In the end, it ended up being miserable~ falling behind other men every time...

I really like it. From the looks of it, I think the heroine is very good. I like the part about the Zhang family the most. It puts the evil and good of the Zhang family on the bright side and makes them look like they have truly escaped their fate when they meet the heroine. The author is so awesome that I love it so much that I will post 100 chapters in one day. It's not enough. It's not enough.

There are many parts of my Guiya that are very touching and very cruel to me (it feels like a huge salvation)

Very pretty! ! ! Wandi's character is really super, super, super cute. She is a just and kind-hearted wooden cat who still has determination and courage! ! ! What a cute heroine who can meow! I really love the interaction between Adi and his brothers and Jiumen. It can be seen that my wife's writing style is very good! It's that kind of love that is hidden and yet visible, and it's amazing how animals pull each other between people! Especially the brothers who have such a sense of immorality! I was so excited that I crawled all over the bed. A Di is a candle in the endless darkness in this parallel world of stolen writing. He is capable but can't let go of his relatives and friends, so he is entangled and pulled into various events. The wife's article portrays Wan Di very well. She has seen many dark things and been in trouble many times. In whatever era she is in, she also works hard to make money, hoards goods and medicines, and does her best to change the original storyline. I feel that it is really a pity between A Di and her adoptive father, because they have always been awkward with each other, but her adoptive father has always protected her. The night she left the Zhang family was the last time they saw each other. It was really a pity. Looking at the extra world, the adoptive father is still alive. I wonder if there will be any surprises at the end. There is also the little mountain god who has not appeared since the heroine was marked after her dream of getting married. I still don't know what the heroine promised it? Wouldn't she be its wife? Thinking of it as a dream, it seems very possible. But I'm very grateful to the author's wife for being able to cook such delicious meals. The extras are so beautiful and touching, so sexy! I personally recommend turning off the comment section when reading. The first half of the novel is actually not as bad as what is said in the comment section, but reading the comment section will magnify some of the shortcomings of these novels, and the more you read, the less you want to read them. Personally, I think the heroine was indeed a bit impulsive in the early stages, and the bloodletting in the mid-stage was indeed a bit too kind. But these are all cool articles. The author's wife writes so well. What kind of bicycle do you want? There is also a group of people who say that the heroine is stupid in the comment area, and feel that she has exposed her differences at such a young age. They also scold the author and the heroine in the comment area. It really affects the perception. If you look at it carefully, you will actually find that she is not that bad. It's normal for a child to do certain things, and he was happy with them. Even if it is brought into real life, if a person behaves very strangely, ordinary people will not think that he has traveled through time. Moreover, the author is the heroine's mother. It is not easy to get a cheat, but there is no need to be so malicious when giving free meals.

WC, she is so damn good-looking. She can't express her good-lookingness without saying some dirty words. It makes me feel like I'm in a certain city (especially the recent special issue). She's really, really, really super good-looking. Currently, the Zhang family's boyband is the dominant one. Let's Flirt with Nine Doors. There should be more young people in the future. The relationship between the protagonists is also very loving, and the interaction is also very loving. It's really super good-looking!!!!

It looks good^ω^, but the only shortcoming is that the update speed is too slow. I don't ask the author to update dozens of pictures a day, but can he update one chapter every day?

It's good to watch, I want to see the heroine and the Zhang family reunite soon [shy]

After reading it for so long, I haven't found any major flaws so far. It's a pretty good fanfic. There is a sense of humor from time to time throughout the book, so it can be considered an otome harem novel! It can relax you. I personally like it. The heroine is not a virgin type. She has her own rules. The male characters are not particularly OOC, so she can be fooled!

[Laughs] [Laughs] The writing is very good. Very nice. The update speed is also very fast. But Kavin got me stuck. Heart itches. I really want to know how it develops next. For myself. I consider myself a picky person, but this book gave me a completely different feeling. It was fascinating. Like this book very much. That's all my language skills are. I hope this author's book becomes popular. I also hope that the author will have a good development. Come on! Come on and update. I really want to know. I also watched it once on another platform, and I watched it again on this platform. [Love][love][love]

I read it for a day, even though I just listened to it, but I felt that it was well written and not verbose. The story was very coherent without any discomfort. It felt like I was watching a movie. There were various delicate subplots, and some parts were very touching. I dropped some gold beans before I was good enough. Haha, I hope the author will continue to write more and not stop. I love you more.

It's great, Zhang Wandi. I and many Zhang family members have cps. Some of the descriptions are really interesting and it's best to read it alone. Unfortunately, the author has stopped updating it a lot, and I can't even search for this novel. Why (╥ω╥`)

So pretty! ! ! Maybe you won't be able to read the first few chapters, but you'll get better and better after reading it! Especially the Zhang family boy group, I have a lot of fun [shy][shy][shy]

I want to follow my teacher for the rest of my life. The two books he wrote are both very good. The Zhang Family Boy Group is so good that fans over the years are ecstatic. I hope the teacher will have time to finish this book. Don't be tired, but don't rest either. Not a noob, the writing is very good, not OOC, and it's so good.

Great watch, girls, I finished it in one go. I personally felt a little embarrassed about the heroine's behavior in the early stage, but it got better later on. She is a very cute cat baby. I really love the original Zhang family🥹. I rarely see all the Zhang family. Damn it, please update more, just like feeding the chickens, don't be idle, don't be tired, I can't even see some of the comments section of that 🚗, I really want to read it, scratching my head to see it, come on, hold on (●°u°●) "

Waiting is a silent torture. During this long time, my soul is gnawed by longing. Maybe you have long forgotten the promise you made (May Day update), maybe our story (no story) is destined to be just a short-lived fireworks. But I still stand here stubbornly, waiting for the wind, waiting for you to renew, even if hope is as fragile as bubbles

The writing is very good, the characters have distinct personalities, and the emotional lines are very delicate. I like it very much. PS: I would like it even more if DaDa could update hundreds of chapters every day. Da Da, you have to believe that if you suffer only, millions of people will be happy. To sum up, I hope you can continue writing and don't give up. It's hard to find good food.

It's so beautiful! I watched them all in one go today and it was really not enough! This one has a completely different feeling from the other one! But the same thing is that they are all attractive. I really love the heroine. She is so cute! Fishing without knowing it. The pull between the little Zhangs and the heroine is also very interesting! Irresistible and exciting, super top! Not enough to watch! When can I get more updates? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] It's so beautiful that it's not enough [Love] [Love] [Love] Are you still updating this book [crying][crying][crying][crying]

I like it so much🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰Thank you so much for the author! ! ! Update update [love] [love] [love]

How can I put it this way? It was really embarrassing in the early stage. I couldn't help but dig my toes on the ground and almost gave up. But it was fine after a while. It looked really good later on, and it was already tied. It wasn't good enough (><)

Super pretty! The plot and writing are all online! The first in the Pirates fanfic! It's just that there are too few chapters and it's not enough to read [cry][cry][cry]

Fried Chicken written in large letters is beautiful, each person's image is very three-dimensional and not too obtrusive, the heroine's character is also very good, the plot is not draggy, it is already considered to be of high quality.

A super, super nice book! ! The heroine really looks like a cat, and her interactions with the Zhang family are so exciting! ! Blow up the wife! ! And the emotions are described very delicately! ! I like both the writing style and writing style! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

It's good to read, love to read and write more @BUZhu. I beg the author to please update it.

Super pretty! ! But the author really wants to see the heroine reunite with the Zhang family!