On the Eve of the Founding of Konoha, I Asked Madara for a Fight

The characters are well-established, the plot is convincing, and the writing is great [like it]. The male protagonist has a very principled character, and he is vigorous and resolute at home and against his enemies. The skill set is so comprehensive that it feels like cheating, but it's still acceptable if you think about the limitations. The depiction of Madara from another angle is also very fresh. The light shaping is lovely. The details of how the trio get along are very interesting. Although the plot has undergone major changes, the key characters are all within the logic of their actions, so that the plot of setting up a new village is logical. Some of the puzzles arranged in the text are surprising, the actions of characters in other positions are interspersed smoothly, the daily laughter is real, and the battles are refreshing. After being tortured by many (dark harem transformed into a novice and brainless cheater OOC), I found a long-lost treasure. Please give me a rare safe haven. Please be sure to maintain your standards and finish it smoothly. ✿✿Send flowers_(:3 ⌒ﾞ)_

The novel is quite good, but I just couldn't follow it at all. There are so many shikigami that my son might not be able to finish even when he goes to school.

It's very exciting. The strength of Madara and Hashirama, the calculations of Tobirama, Yagami, and Dark Night are all changed one after another. The combat performance and fighting scenes are very well described, and the life of Kakuzu is rich and in place, and the daily life of the three protagonists is also very good. The author's imagination is really great, the setting of each eye technique is novel and imaginative, and there are many depictions of the other four shadows that were not shown in the original work. All in all, it's a very good fanfic. If it hadn't been for the author's family misfortune, perhaps a very good work would have been produced.

In fact, this book is quite well written. It can be seen from the fact that many of the supporting characters that are not in the original work have names and complete abilities that the author has put a lot of thought into it! The plots are all original and very interesting! Maybe everyone dislikes this book because they like the timeline of anime and interact with the characters in the anime! But I think both the writing and the ideas are pretty good [smile][smile][smile]

Very beautiful, very detailed, I like it! ! ! ! The pace is neither too fast nor too slow. Recent novels are either too fast or too slow. This novel was written according to my point of view. [Blows a kiss] Come on! ~

Why is such a beautiful book rated so low?

It's okay, maybe I've eaten too much, but it's quite to my liking, especially the part about Madara's shadow, which is something Madara can do.

It's really good-looking, with a lot of fighting details. The descriptions of the first-generation movies are in line with the strength that a ruthless man who came out of the Warring States Period should have.

Chapter 67: It was good before I couldn't understand chapters 68 and 69. I said that I had a miscarriage, but the result was poison for no apparent reason. It's not that I'm being poisonous. My comments are too arbitrary. These are relatively exciting contents. This book is very interesting. Boring routines began to occur frequently. It's a pity. You should write this book on a leading website, and the results may be better. It's a pity. The finished version will definitely be a masterpiece, and it might even be a masterpiece by a fan.

Whether it's the strategy and thinking during battle or daily life, it's worth watching. When you see the protagonist about to lose, the protagonist relies on his fighting thinking to turn defeat into victory~ It's very beautiful. I really want to laugh when I see the old squad leader like that~ [makes a face]

You can watch it and keep it together

Dot

Whatever the key is, hello

Okay, okay, okay, say important things three times

2025.2.5 (End) Sad! No, it's just gone [crying] The idea is still very novel, I can only say it's a pity, it's very thoughtful [almost crying]

The author continues to write, and when he reaches 125 pictures, he will give you another update to spread the flowers. He will continue to write [angry][angry][angry][please ask for more explosive updates]

I haven't read it so seriously in a long time. This book is so good.

Come on, author! The book is very nice [Send heartfelt message]

Among the books I've read, this is pretty good.

In such a situation, it would be best to take Yagami Yue's eyes and open the Eternal Eye in one step. If you have Hashirama's flesh and blood tissue, you can also consider slowly opening the Samsara Eye for Madara.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, and it's well written [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Okay, okay, I strongly recommend haha

Okay, I hope there will be more plot later

It still feels pretty good

Nice, but too short

I think it's well written

Very good but also short

I beg the author to come back and finish the novel! ! !

Madara was pressed, but still one. . . . . . . Why

Okay, it's all said and done