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It is rare to find a Sri Lankan CP novel that is not heavy. The main plot progresses quickly, especially the emotional line in the middle and late stages. [Like] There are too many foreshadowings at the beginning, which is a bit confusing. Basically, I read it with questions in my mind. But as the story progresses and the foreshadowing begins to be revealed, it becomes more interesting. The plot design of the main line and the emotional line is very good, the characters are not OOC, and the language style is relatively mature, which has surpassed most of the fans [laughing] However, there is a small drawback, that is, the author likes to use long difficult sentences or super long clauses, especially in the middle of the plot, some sentences have to be read twice to understand [face covering]

It's so sweet! I like sweet love. After reading other books, I almost gave up on the Sri Lankan one! This film is recommended for readers who like sweet articles. The resolution of Lao Fu was not sloppy at all, and there were no messy misunderstandings. Maybe the author didn't pay attention when writing the article. Many of the articles are in long paragraphs and can be cut appropriately. Otherwise, people like me who read articles quickly will easily read the wrong lines [shy] The extra chapter is also very sweet, it's Si Jiao chasing Xuerong, it's a bit short, it's really not enough to watch!

Full marks, this is the first time I have seen such a delicate and non-ooc Si ​​Jiao text, which vividly expresses Si Jiao's forbearance and restraint. This is a two-way redemption. Si Jiao gives Xue Rong a sense of belonging in this world, and Xue Rong allows Si Jiao to know preference and the firmness of first choice for the first time. Moreover, the two people's view of love is extremely healthy. There is no bloodshed, no heartbreak, no misunderstanding, no contradiction between Bai Yueguang and Cinnabar Moles, only I understand you, and I firmly choose you. I really like Xue Rong's words "I love you, it has nothing to do with you." These are probably the words that most touch upon Si Jiao's lifelong guilt and responsibility.

Good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, no OOC, the mutual redemption of Si Jiao and Xue Rong [sending heart], and Harry and the others are living a very stable life in school, solving problems quickly, the progress bar pulls in quickly, the heroine knows everything about Mr. Si in time, but still unswervingly chooses him [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]! Also very friendly to little dragons! The extra chapter is even better and can be read as a story on its own. Everyone is safe and sound, including Lily and James. Harry grows up happily. He has a daughter. He is always on the lookout for little Potter to mislead his daughter. The daughter also has a little brother (Draco). It is really super sweet and not abusive. Forgive my lack of language, but it's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡! Come and see!

Very nice! The plot is well written, with two-way redemption and the heroine traveling through time. The snowmelt was like a handful of light snow, which would disappear into the world when the wind blew. She drifted away and looked at this new world, until Severus became the only anchor she was willing to stay in this world. For Severus, "She really reached out to him so firmly after knowing everything." This was the first time in his life that someone chose him without hesitation. Even though he felt that he was guilty and his soul had long been plunged into darkness, there were still people who were running towards him firmly. After the snow melts comes spring, the rebirth of all things, and their vibrant, brilliant and free future! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This book really describes the low self-esteem of the Sri Lankan teacher, the feeling that he is not worthy, the self-loathing and self-abandonment. I feel that it is very consistent with the character. I think there is basically no OOC. The pull between the Sri Lankan teacher and the heroine made me scream.

I really like this kind of warm and healing little sweet story. The plot is refreshing and not procrastinating. The heroine is calm and rational. Everyone has a long talk and did not misunderstand the heart-wrenching plot. The exiled soul in another world has a psychological resonance with the Sri Lankan religion. The strong force of the old man is rubbed and crushed. It is very refreshing. The extra is another timeline, I look forward to more chapters to follow.

A very, very good HP fanfic. The length is not long, but the author did not forcefully insert some plots into the original work, and the choices and details of many plots are very well written. From the perspective of writing, the writing is very smooth and vivid, completely immersive. At first glance, the character of the heroine seems very classic, a strong person with a somewhat tragic past, but in fact, the author does not see this character being written to follow the crowd. At least on the surface, the balance of strength between the two parties is not tilted very seriously. Although in a sense, it does make the subsequent plot smoother. On the other hand, the setting of the heroine's recovery is also slightly balanced, which can facilitate the development of the early plot. For the male protagonist Snape, the complete lack of OOC is the most surprising thing. It's well worth watching, and the plot is not heavy at all. It's perfect for relaxing!

This book is really good to read. Although it is short, it is very delicate and well-organized. It is much better than many stinky, long and dragging out books. The plot is very complete, and the emotional line is even better! Five stars must be five stars!

For me, this is a novel worth slowing down and reading. The writing is delicate and smooth, and the emotional changes are very natural. At the same time, there is no OOC (for fandom, this is really a plus!!!), And it does not feel tired like some HP fans who are too involved in the main line. On the contrary, the relationship between the plot development and the main line of the novel is handled well, and the ending is so beautiful. To be honest, I rarely read the CP novels taught by Jones, because the heroines in them will more or less incorporate Lily's shadow or experience. But the portrayal of the heroine in this article is very different, very charming, and has her own story line. I like it ~ The novel can be regarded as a two-way redemption. For Xue Rong, Xifu is her anchor point; for Xi Fu, Xue Rong is an existence that still wants to run towards him after understanding all the gloomy past. He is also firmly chosen. Anyway, thank you madam for this nice story!

Ahhhhhh! I finished reading it late at night. I don't know why, but I always come across Sri Lanka's videos. I cry every time I watch it. I'm really looking for fanfics all over the Internet to soothe my injured little heart. This one should be the best one I've ever seen. The relationship between the teaching assistant and the Sri Lankan teacher is written very delicately, and the changes in the middle are not blunt. Especially the heroine, who is capable and has a firm heart. It's really nice to see Si Jiao get happiness in the fanfic!

There should be no OOC, and although there are not many chapters, among the dozens of HP books I have read, this one by CP Sri Lanka can definitely be ranked in the top five. The author's writing is good, and the finale is a reunion, and Lao Fu didn't even have time to see the sun the next day. In addition, the heroine is very strong (although uninterrupted), and the heroine has a unique preference for Sri Lanka. I love you, and it has nothing to do with you, so don't be burdened, because loving you makes me happy.

It's really good-looking, and there are many details. Xue Rong's feelings for Si Jiao really need to be slowed down and seen. It can be seen from many details. The sour and bitter feelings. Even if she knows that Si Jiao has someone in her heart, she will help him. Xue Rong has no one in that world. Only Si Jiao is the one she wants to save.

☆Brief review ☞BG Xiang & HE is a short story about a Chinese female monk who was killed by someone else, and then traveled to the magical world to fall in love with Severus, her savior and special contact. ☞High-intelligence, cold-blooded and weak beauty × arrogant and poisonous tongue-in-cheek professor ☞The writing is crisp and timeless, the plot is timely, and the characters are exquisitely created. ☆Second brush ☞Short in length, focusing on the writing of the main characters, with a well-proportioned number of words in each chapter ☞Delicate inner analysis and emotional expression of stream of consciousness

There is no age difference. While redeeming each other, the emotional line is very smooth. I think there is no OOC, and there are many echoes back and forth. If you feel a little confused in the first 5 chapters, they will be explained soon, so don't be dissuaded. Highly recommended, I will give it a second try.

It's rare to see the ending of HP. The heroine is very strong and has a firm goal. The professor can also feel warm and willing to accept the arrival of spring. It's quite heartwarming to watch it [Sending Hearts]

It's nice to watch, sweet, straight-shooting, and it's great to have a smart heroine who can talk. Her very sober view of love is also very touching. I have always firmly chosen Sri Lanka and I respect Sri Lanka's choice. Voldemort has been solved in advance, both in the main story and in the extras. It's really cool. Everyone's IQ is online. No one is blackmailed, and the characters are not occ.

I like it very much. The emotions are delicate. No kidding. This book is the best Sectarian fanfic I have ever read. I can feel the changes in Severus little by little and feel the process of him being warmed. This makes me really touched.

Extreme pulling, sisters, really, I have read so many books. This is my first recommendation to leave a message. Don't be fooled by the previous chapters. Read on! Read on! Read on!

I feel that Si Jiao is a bit OOC, but it seems that fan fiction is a bit too. To be honest, I think this novel is quite interesting. It focuses more on the description of the emotional line, but there are not many ups and downs. There is no passionate feeling after reading the whole novel.

It's so good. It's the first time I've seen this kind of setting of aliens. And this is a love story between two people with always strong souls and firm wills. It's so well written! It's also very interesting to write the extra story starting from the parents' generation! Excellent product! Highly recommended!

This is my favorite Snape fanfic that I have ever read ~ It's really beautiful ~ The heroine has such a lovely personality, she is mature, calm and steady. Super strong. Emotions are also gradual and not abrupt. The heroine and Snape are redeemed in both directions. However, it is said that fanfics cannot be given 5 stars, and I don't know if that's true. So give 4 stars. It also gives the author a great motivation to continue working hard!

There is nothing very surprising or attractive to me, but it is not boring or outrageous at all. It can be said that it can be read well even when there is no shortage of literature. It is really surprising. It can be done without merit, but I can't stand it. This one is great. It can't be called mediocre, but it can't be said to be exciting, but as long as it's not ugly, it's fine. And this one is not boring either. As long as it's not ugly, I like the main character Snape. Not to mention that this one is more than mediocre. I'm really surprised.

Oh~ The author has never disappointed me, but this book is even better. I finished reading it very smoothly. The professor in the extra chapter is more enlightened than the professor in the main text. This one's daughter Vivina, and the other's son Alan I have to admit, it's much better if there are no casualties ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

Not bad, adding a game-breaker is equivalent to a cheat. It feels like when facing Snape, his CPs have to be patient and tolerant, and they have to be proactive and open-minded, haha. Snape is really a very typical sullen type. There is a volcano in his heart, but there is a thick ice cap outside.

Super pretty! ! ! It was actually a bit confusing at the beginning, but it got much better later on. The characters stand out completely, which is really rare. The only flaw is that it's really too short, and I'm asking for a longer story~~

Well, although the author's long and difficult sentences in the first ten chapters made me want to vomit, the emotions are really described very delicately, especially the change of Si Jiao's feelings is very natural. My heart is in my hometown. It's great. The male and female protagonists have given each other a home. In this parallel world, Si Jiao is very happy. This book scores more than 7.7 Points, the emotional description is delicate and not OOC, it scores 9.5, And the plot logic is self-consistent, it scores 9 points. The whole text, especially the first ten chapters, is full of long and difficult sentences, which naturally deducts 1 point for the author. So overall, it definitely has a strength of above 8.5. As long as you can endure reading the long and difficult sentences, then this is a sweet and sweet article.

There is no misunderstanding in this novel, it is sweet and reassuring, the heroine is vividly portrayed, and the whole text is coherent without any lag!

This book is very beautifully written. I think it was the sincere, kind and brave Xue Rong who moved Si Jiao and wrote about the emotional pull between them. This is a sweet story in total, and there are even sweeter ones in the extras. In short, everyone in it has a happy ending.

Full marks must be given. It's so good. The plot progresses very quickly and doesn't drag on. I like to read Hansi's educational articles. It's sweet and reassuring. Everyone, go for it. You won't lose money if you invest in it. Great support for the author.