When You Meet a Better Male (Zerg)

The author has some ideas, but his writing skills are not strong enough, and his language construction and narrative skills are somewhat lacking. Fortunately, the exposure at the front is more obvious in the middle and later stages. Although it doesn't feel perfect, the story is indeed interesting. Maybe it was a plot that was created by letting oneself go. (In addition, the emotional line of Narcissus is really as timid as walking a tightrope. Although he is a he, they are not he in the traditional sense.) I quite like the character of the protagonist.

The author is thoughtful, and the lives of small characters reflect the changes in the big background; the writing is good, and it feels like it is slow literature. I think the author has great potential. I still want to say something more, that is, it is a pity that this work appears on this fast-food reading platform. If it does not spill blood and has no routine, it may not get a lot of recognition and comments. But as far as this book is concerned, the main lines and backgrounds of the characters are very smooth, small words tell big stories, each character is very individual, and the most important thing is that each person is very three-dimensional. The protagonist does not need to be a good person or an upright person. People are complex enough, and their behaviors and thoughts are very consistent. This makes it more lively and popular than many works. In addition, the background is actually very big. The changes of the times are either responsibilities or disasters that fall on everyone. People's choices will lead to corresponding consequences, which is sad. The ending is not he in the traditional sense. You can see the selfishness and possible negative emotions of the two people. This is more real than happy forever and ever. Literature sometimes does not need gorgeous words. This kind of plain and precise wording is really a breath of fresh air. So I personally think that the author's writing skills are very good. You must continue to write, and more people will see your ability.

Although there are only a few dozen chapters, it made me feel true love and happiness. Mo Lin is like a cage that no one can enter, and Zhou Yi is a key, opening his heart and illuminating him with his own light. Everyone is happy, like a bird, fly, let your voice penetrate the world and penetrate the heart.

It's quite good. I don't know how to evaluate it. After watching the extra chapter, I felt happy and a little bit melancholy. The main text was finished so quickly. I also want to see Tian Tian and Zai in the future. Of course, it doesn't matter, as long as they are happy.

It's a bland article that can pass the time, but I still want to ask whether the main character's name is Zhou Yi or Zhou Yi.

After reading it for a few days, I finally finished it. I seemed to understand it, but I didn't seem to understand it. It was too blurry. I still couldn't remember who was who after halfway through. Anyway, it was a good read.

I finished it quickly, the ending was a bit rushed, but I can see the author's potential. Looking forward to the next work! [Salute]

It's pretty cool, but I just don't understand it.

People who write serious articles write running novels, I admire them [like]!

It's nice, but it shouldn't end like this. I could write more.

Very, very beautiful and very happy young couple

Come on ^ O ^ ~! Looking forward to new works!

He is free, we are not.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's pretty, it's pretty

Okay, but it's too short

It was written very hastily, but it's quite beautiful.

It's sweet, but it doesn't explain how the protagonist travels through time, and the pit is not filled in yet [laughing and crying]

Although I didn't understand some of them, the angle is very interesting. Come on.

It's very interesting. It's my first time to read Zerg. I just didn't understand some parts. Some things were not explained clearly and it ended in a muddle. I feel that the author's writing style can be better. Come on.

When I read this novel, I felt like there was a layer of fog hanging in my eyes, and the ending made me feel lost. You can give it a try.