I Have the Strongest Mecha, So Why Do I Have to Work for a Living?

Come on, the beginning is much better and already attractive, but there is still a problem with the introduction. The introduction is the second most important thing in a book. Readers read the title first, and the second thing they read is the introduction, and then the title and text. Therefore, the introduction should present the most attractive things in the book in the shortest possible way to attract readers. It does not explain everything in the book clearly at once. The author is a storyteller rather than a commentator. He does not need to summarize the plot. He only needs to think about how the novel can be more attractive and how to tell the story in his heart well. How to write an introduction? For this, you can look at those really successful works such as "Lord of the Mysterious", "The Other Side of Deep Space", and "The Watcher". The core is to do one thing, that is, the reader has the idea of ​​​​reading at least the first few chapters, and then the beginning and the plot will firmly attract the reader. The introduction is too long and lacks appeal, making it easy for people to click in and then leave. I wish Shuchai can become a god. In fact, just delete the part at the beginning that pleases the readers. As a storyteller, you don't have to be inferior to others. The important thing is to communicate on an equal footing.

Since I stopped reading this book on the radio, my child has asked me to tell him the stories in it every day. I have also always asked me to buy her a robot similar to Gu. She said that this kind of robot is her favorite. She even ignored her favorite Shark Tooth Cloth and kept clamoring for Gu. Shark Tooth Bu has been depressed every day these past few days, and can only make traps out of boredom. Now there are frozen traps everywhere on the ground, which makes Lucy and I get angry every day. My child also asked me where brother Li Lei lived and said that she liked such a big brother very much. Very anxious! I just want to ask, where can I buy it? How much? Is it produced by Mather Group? Is there a store in Guangying Plaza? Discount? Where does this kid Li Lei live now? Can I let him come over and play with my kids for a day? I can ask someone to pick him up. By the way, Tiger King and Tiger Brother, do they also live in the outer ring? My eldest son said he wanted to fight King Tiger. Just to ask about another personal matter, which Jade College has a good teaching quality? Is the teacher good? How much is the tuition fee per year? See if you can answer these questions? Let's not talk about it for now, I have to solve some problems. Someone just challenged me! That's right! If you want to come to the outer ring, I can pick you up on my motorcycle. Don't worry! I'll take my best rope maker with me so I don't have to worry about getting lost in the hollow. I also want to have a fight with Li Lei and that robot Gu to see who is more powerful!

I am good at writing book reviews for others, and it is my first time to write my own book review. Don't brag or boast. The prototypes of Li Lei and Gu are basically easy for everyone to see. In fact, it is quite shameful to write them. After all, I am still addicted to writing such mentally retarded plots at such an old age, but I still feel that some of the content I wrote is worth watching. Li Lei's name comes from the English textbook. Li Lei and Han Meimei accompanied the author's painful childhood experience. I once naively thought that if I learned a foreign language well, I could earn a lot of money. But when I grew up, I realized that I didn't need it at all in my work and life... Moreover, when chatting with foreigners and discussing business, they were not so dogmatic. They spoke very casually, and there was no such thing as HOW ARE YOU. Just say HI like we say hello. Talking back to the plot, the wind power possessed by Li Lei is the author's own hobby. Wind is invisible and stylish. It accompanies us every day but is full of mystery. The wind element represents the Xun hexagram in the Book of Changes. Its original meaning is auxiliary, and its symbol is three, which means humility and obedience; it corresponds to "xun". Li Lei's character and some of his ways of dealing with things are written in accordance with this aspect. He has a big personality, decisive but full of virginity, humble but neither humble nor arrogant. His life experience is also the abbreviation of all living beings in the public, and it is also a portrayal of the author's character. The wind power is considered a powerful power here, but when compared in the entire universe, it is nothing. The various powers originally set behind it, such as magic, mechas, spaceships, Star Destroyers, etc., Are much stronger than the wind power. But he is the protagonist of this book after all, so I won't make his life too difficult. I don't have a habit of abusing the protagonist (slip of the tongue...) As for whether there is a relationship between Li Lei and KOF's Lao Gao, the answer is yes or no. Some of Li Lei's moves and fighting methods are similar to Lao Gao's, but they are definitely not Lao Gao's. Li Lei's moves are derived from the ancient system, which is one of the oldest inheritances of Alpha Star, but Li Lei himself modified it and incorporated many game moves. His identity also corresponds to a super popular character in the machine war, Lao Bai. It's just that not many people know him now, but in my time he was extremely popular. As for the other protagonist, Super Mecha Gu, his prototype is one of the most handsome bosses in mecha warfare. He is also a very popular boss on our side. He has his own BGM and is also Lao Bai's car. I like Gu Lansen very much, not really Gu, but Lao Gu. Lao Bai's righteous and evil character combined with Gu Lansen's powerful machine makes him worthy of being our BOSS. What is the relationship between Gu in the novel and Gu Lansen? Does it matter or not? I won't tell you the answer. If you are interested, you can read it slowly. After all, both of them use black holes to fight. The difference is that my Gu Ke is wise! He can play games with Li Lei, do tasks, chat, take care of Li Lei's daily life, and can earn and spend money together. I set it to be more powerful than Gu Lansen. As for why they want to explore the Dark Star, I will also reveal the answer bit by bit. Due to the limited skill of the author, the plot of the novel can only be written one short story after another. In the words of a friend, it is a different copy. The first volume is single play, the second volume is group play, the third volume is battlefield and summoning canyon, the fourth volume is plot battle, and there are regional battles, space battles and so on. I talked for a long time, but in fact it was all my own words. The novel I wrote was indeed able to be written within the limited time, and I felt satisfied with it. If that person is lucky enough to read this novel, I hope you can at least read the chapter of Emerald Academy in the second volume. The first part is relatively easy, but the second part I think is okay, and I think it's not bad from a reader's perspective. Of course, I'm not bragging. I asked the AI ​​to score it, and the score was quite high. I wrote so many words eloquently that I was verbose for a long time. In fact, I sincerely hope that someone will like what I wrote. There are thousands of tomato novels. If you are lucky enough to click on one of my novels, see my book reviews, add this book to your bookshelf, click on it every day to remind you, and you will be very happy to make a few comments from time to time. The author does not write books for a living, but he writes books for fun. He was so obsessed with it before that he originally planned to stop writing novels, but he couldn't help it. As I said in my self-comments, I can't stop writing stories... Whether you write good or bad, you write your own story. Later I am also considering making an animated novel with audio. In fact, the subject matter I wrote is more suitable for that mode, but I am still a bit new. I will do that when the research is done. It may seem more intuitive. Before that, I still hope that everyone can give me more supportฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅ

The author is too lazy, please hurry up and give it a five-star rating

It can be seen that the author wrote with great care, and I read with equal care. This short text conveys a lot of uneasy feelings and a lot of expectations. Looking forward to the follow-up plot... Keep waiting for more exciting stories. Will there really be robots in the future?

There are stories, technology, and all kinds of hard work put together. Every chapter is a story, I like this kind of work. It will be even better if it is updated.

Six words floated from the sky: Is this a thing? Uh, it doesn't sound right to me, I'm not a big deal, don't think too much about it!

Little brother, I finally followed your novel to the latest chapter. It's not easy! To tell you the truth, I am nearly 70 years old this year, and it was Sun Tzu who recommended your novel to me. I started to want to listen to your book, but I'm deaf and couldn't hear it. I can only read with reading glasses, but I can't read ten lines at a glance like you young people. In the time it took me to read one chapter, my wife finished watching the Xinwen Network. Our whole family, young and old, is reading your book, but I am the only one who has left you a review. My grandson told me: This is a die-hard fan, this is true love!