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In other villain stories, the female protagonist is better than the male protagonist; in this villain story, the male protagonist is better than the female protagonist. When I think of the original heroine who made up her mind to become stronger, and then came back many years later to see her brother Mu Yun become sister Mu Yun, and she was still in the arms of the villain with a shy look on her face, I couldn't help but feel heartbroken, and the plot was too exciting. I hope the author will keep updating it and update it to this paragraph.

It's still very interesting at the moment, and the subject matter is quite new. It's not uncommon for men to change into women, and it's not uncommon for men to change marriages, but it's rare to see a female protagonist change her marriage from the perspective of the male protagonist. Although I know that the male protagonist is a villain, the male protagonist should be nicer to the female protagonist, otherwise I'm afraid the author won't be able to come back [Chigua]

To be honest, this is the first time I have seen a genre where the male protagonist travels through time, turns the original protagonist into a female and then gets married. This is considered a new track and new genre. In the past, the male protagonist transferred his sex to another person after traveling through time (i. E., Changed marriage type), but what kind of type is this type of transformation of the original male protagonist into a female and then getting married? Let's talk about this book again: Although the plot is relatively clichéd and similar to Dou Po (or almost exactly the same as Dou Po), it wins because of its novel theme, full marks!

That's so right, bro, what could make our lips curl up more than a transgender little wife? That's so right. To be honest, there is a little water in the back, which is worse than when I paddle in class.

Wonderful, really wonderful! Hahahaha, grab the original male protagonist and refine it instantly! The heroine is here! This feeling of provocation is really fun. I can barely hold my mouth shut.

It's good-looking, although a bit classic, but the content is good. The Son of Destiny is reduced to a female bit by bit, and more protagonists are needed to train the Son of Destiny. It seems that not many people have read such a good book.

The book is good, and the subject matter is quite interesting. The early and early articles are very interesting, but in the middle and later stages, it feels like a story about a domineering president from a female channel. The male protagonist is forced to love, and the female protagonist is desolate and crazy to escape. But overall, the look and feel is okay and quite interesting. Compared with other domineering president stories, the difference lies in one The novel is written from the perspective of the female protagonist, while this novel is written from the perspective of the male protagonist. However, the later novels seem a little too inhuman, more like a human machine using a template, so the plot in the middle and later stages seems a bit too cliché. I still prefer the previous plot, even though it is based on a legend. It is presented based on the outline of the president's novel, but the early plot remains innovative and fun without being too separated from the traditional novel subject matter. It incorporates the thinking of today's young people and transitions into today's online novel, so that readers can read it without being embarrassed by the ancient overbearing president's novel (so the author, I beg you, can you please In future plots, let the male and female protagonists show their own personalities without completely breaking away from the template. Personally, it will be more beautiful): (Handsome guys and beauties, please don't criticize me when you see this. I am just a bad reader of novels. I really like the previous plots so I came to the comment area to comment [crying]).

Hahahahahahahaha, it's so interesting. It's the first time I've seen a male protagonist be directly transformed into a female protagonist. I must continue to do more!

Full marks, must be full marks. The plot of Niutou is so exciting, the character creation is perfect, and the hatred is full. As long as the male protagonist is not replaced by destiny, he is also the female protagonist. It is a forced kiss and a love potion to detoxify. The female protagonist is still a man with a heart who hates and especially resists. She has a beautiful body and an infatuated object, or the suffering master. The feeling of conquest and gain is actually very satisfying. Chapter 244 is still the vixen part, it's really fun to watch.

This is the first time I have seen this kind of subject. The most important thing is that the author describes the psychology of the original protagonist's gender change very well. I have read many articles on marriage change, and I thought that I would directly transform into a woman, but this one is about a slow transformation, which is very interesting to watch. The most important thing about sexual transition is the process of psychological change

The character image is very prominent Su Qing is domineering yet gentle Mu Yun resisted at first, then surrendered, and now he has slowly begun to accept Su Qing. Really sweet But the author should know that three updates a day is not enough for people to read it!

It's funny and clichéd, but not clichéd at the same time. I particularly like this feeling. You can watch it as a single female protagonist, or you can watch it as a double male protagonist. It was simply the process of training Long Aotian. And it's great. Don't feel aggrieved. Very crazy. Tell something new in a clichéd story. Good looking. Fall in love and kill each other. Destined enemy. He is also the destined lover. Although he has been bullying Long Aotian. But Long Aotian has also grown and progressed. It would be much more comfortable if the protagonist was brought into a tsundere persona.

I have never seen a novel of this type. This novel has also opened up a new track. It is published by a luxury magazine [face covering]

The author's writing of the love line is very strange, very novel, and even a bit curious [thinking], but it is unexpectedly addictive [shy] It's beautiful, I love reading it, come more, I just love to see this kind of new stuff [admiration] I hope the author can continue to come up with such imaginative things! !

Yes, from another perspective, it is a classic story about a female pornographic woman who is deeply in love and a domineering president who is both sadistic and loving [laughing] Su Qing chases, Mu Yun escapes, and Mu Yun is unable to fly. Mu Yun: It's so annoying. Why does he keep following me and bullying me? Su Qing: I will rely on you in this life (who calls me a villain system)

It's ten or even nine percent perverted, and it's toxic to many people. But I like this one, it can be regarded as a special taste in Bianwei. It's just that Mu Yun changed his name, and it seems to have lost some flavor. From the current point of view, I think the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very difficult to reconcile. Not to mention the beastly things the male protagonist did to Mu Yun before, even if he treats Mu Yun like that now, the current Su Qing is just a pure shudder, torture, special emotions, and mutated into a landmine yandere If you want to say that Mu Yun has a crush on Su Qing, the only explanation is that BYD's living father arranged for her to go to Stockholm. Maybe someone will talk about how Su Qing also helped Mu Yun. Well, if you step into Mu Yun's perspective and see what Su Qing looks like from Mu Yun's perspective, you will know why Mu Yun still wants to kill Su Qing. As for the hundreds of scenes of chasing my wife, it's enough to make my stomach hurt, and readers will definitely find it boring after writing it. Now I just want to think about how to consummate this relationship. The most basic thing is to give Su Qing the punishment he deserves and the compensation he deserves to Mu Yun. Otherwise, what would it be like, a psychopathic sweetheart, Di Lei Chaoxiong, forced to have sex? Bush Gomen, this is even more outrageous than a domineering president.

I was so happy after reading 5 chapters. The abstract writing by the author brought me 30% happiness. Gangjing readers brought me 70. I don't know that such a conversation came to my mind when I looked at their comments. Author: Brother, stop turning it over. This is a piece of cake. Gangjing: I know, I'm looking for something to eat After a while, the author came again and said, Brother, please stop looking for this! ! Gang Jing: Of course I know this is a pile, so I'm looking for something to eat. I'm already very annoyed that I can't find anything to eat. Don't bother me! After a while, the author came again. Brother, why are you still looking? This is just a lump. Why don't you believe it? Gangjing: Do you understand? Didn't I know it was a lump? I'm just looking for something to eat inside. If you don't understand, just stop talking and go further away. After hearing this, the author shook his head and left. After a long time, the clever reader slammed the shit stirrer in his hand to the ground, and then walked forward with a red face and curses. Only a vague sentence came from the breeze: "It's a waste of time, it's just a piece of shit, you can't eat it at all!" The breeze is gentle and the sun is shining. Only the mangled mess and the stick used to turn it were left, watching the goblin go away. The above is just the fun in my mind. It does not mean that this book is really a piece of shit. As a fun and crazy article, I think it is very interesting. If you are bored and want to read it, I highly recommend it. But if you want to find orthodox fantasy, there is no need to click on it. It will become a slut [smile][smile][smile][smile]

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It's so good-looking, so tough, crazy, and I like it. Su Qing gives me a feeling of love without knowing it. I will be honest when my wife is gone [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]

Absolute food and grass, there is nothing to say about this. First of all, the routine of Fighting to Break the Sphere was used in the early stage. The female protagonist is Xiao Yan, while the male protagonist has a villain system and targets the protagonist every day. After an accident, Xiao Yan gradually becomes the female protagonist. The overall plot is compact and the ideas are relatively innovative. The character creation is also very good. The male protagonist kills decisively, like a demon cultivator, and the changes in the heroine's mental journey are also written more reasonably and delicately. There are many scenes between the male and female protagonists, which is a bit heart-wrenching. The only flaw in this book now is that there is not enough content. I look forward to seeing a happy ending where lovers finally get married [blowing kiss] (In the end, I hope to see the crystallization of love and give birth to me fiercely [laughing] [laughing] [laughing])

It's nice to look at, but it gets to home plate too quickly. [Face covering] The female protagonist (original male protagonist) is really miserable. I believe that if it were everyone here (including me), they would have gone into nothingness and self-destructed long before they transformed into women. (Having no father or mother + being bullied all the time) I hope the current male protagonist's mentality can also change. After all, it is indeed thanks to you that she has become like this. (I want to see the Chasing Wife Crematorium).

Gave the male channel a little shock to the female channel

The subject matter of the novel is very interesting. I really want to see the original male protagonist being dragged into the abyss bit by bit in the process of female degeneration. Under the constant collision between reality and heart, he begins to resist and hate the feminization of his body. The original male protagonist surrendered and compromised after discovering that reality could not be changed, and the collapse and pain of the original male protagonist after realizing that she could no longer turn back after her complete female abortion. At the end, the current female protagonist holding the forearm of the current male protagonist said to the original female protagonists with a smile with traces of tears of reluctance to let go of the past and compromise with the current situation: I'm sorry, there is no possibility between us anymore, my body and mind completely belong to him. " My composition is very poor, this is all I can write. Anyway, no one knows me online, so I can generate electricity however I want. :-P I think as long as she smells like a girl, looks like a girl, and sounds like a girl, then she's a girl.

The first hundred chapters are really good, and I naturally fell in love with Mu Yun. There are no inexplicable criticisms in the behavior of other fantasy male protagonists. He really has three views and is independent and perseverant. He has a heart but can act decisively. People really feel that this is the protagonist. If you are convinced, it is his turn to rise to the top. It is like going back to the time when you first watched fantasy and was moved by the protagonist and felt the charm of his personality. Watching the others, I just felt that it was not a realistic and reasonable routine, and suddenly the plot was over. Watching Mu Yun, I realized that there are really traces to follow, why I am liked, and why I can save the day from danger many times. Why you can reach the top can be found out from the character's behavior. He is loyal to his friends, respectful to women, decisive to his enemies, repays his kindness, flexible and flexible, courageous, tenacious and hard-working, brave and resourceful, young and energetic, determined and persistent, and his actions are clean, beautiful and dignified. It has a very peaceful feeling, pure and clear.

It's super interesting. The transformation stories I've read before were all about the transformation of the protagonist. This is so fresh [laughing]

It's so beautiful. The subject matter is really attractive, but the male protagonist's character is a bit extreme. The original male protagonist's character is very normal, and the transformation is also normal. But I still want to say, the male protagonist's character is so extreme. Oh my god, luckily I can accept it [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

There are currently over 100 chapters. How should I put it? The subject matter is quite innovative, but the male protagonist is a little bit difficult to bear after giving birth. I really want to see this kind of theme, but forget about this kind of male protagonist. This guy is quite suitable to be the original male protagonist of the kind of female channel who is reincarnated. His true appearance belongs to From a time-killing point of view, it deserves four stars. Personally speaking, it's about the same as two stars. My outlook and education cannot allow me to like this kind of male protagonist. At least I personally hate male protagonists like Su, just like the short sadistic novels in ancient times, but it was a bit of a misunderstanding or accident, and this child is simply mentally deformed. Understandable, but not supported.

I have now read Chapter 127, and I really can't watch the rest of it. Just comment briefly and you can just take a look. A bit: To be honest, if the separation wasn't a bit serious here, I think the relevant plot is still well written. At the beginning, it was obviously borrowed from a famous novel, and the big themes, backgrounds, etc. Can be found to correspond, but based on this reference, the author wrote his story, which is humorous and interesting, which is considered superior. It made me laugh until all I saw was the main character becoming a woman, which was really good. Disadvantages: Next, I will talk about why I can't stand it anymore. I am not a professional reviewer, nor am I a writer or expert. My opinions are just my views as an ordinary reader, or my own discomfort, and are for reference only. 1. In terms of plot, it is too fragmented. The relaxed and witty humor in the early stages will make people addicted, and the feeling of fragmentation will become more severe after a hundred chapters. Foreshadowing or something... Maybe my thinking or ideas couldn't keep up with the author's rhythm. I felt that by about a hundred chapters, the separation from the previous text was obvious, which made me feel a little... Uncomfortable. My personal habit is that I will look at the book in this way if the author's work sets the tone. Of course, it doesn't mean that I can't accept the twist, but I need plot and emotional foreshadowing. For example, the famous Thirteen Yingjie's Knife in Bengsan makes people feel very distressed and even want to cut the roast chicken immediately, but it is also impressive and difficult to forget about the characters. We may even suppress the anger in our hearts towards the screenwriters and admit from the bottom of our hearts that this is a very good plot and feel that they are worthy of the name of Yingjie. I'm going too far. The purpose of the example is to emphasize that for me, the change in the emotional tone of the plot requires related plot and emotional foreshadowing. Around the 100th chapter... I don't know whether it was the poor performance of the book at that time that made the author eager to release the plot that readers wanted to improve the performance. I just felt... It was too hasty, and the plot was too abrupt... Of course, this is my idea, maybe I am not suitable for this method. 2. Writing and conversational skills, etc. In the first hundred chapters, I didn't feel disconnected while reading the book. Even the protagonist's emotions towards the heroine were understandable to me. However, in the last few chapters of Chapter 100, I felt a very... Uncomfortable feeling while watching it. If you take a closer look, it turns out that it is a conversation between the male and female protagonists. They often joked in the past, using a humorous speaking style like white prose (not in a derogatory sense). About a hundred chapters in, the male and female protagonists suddenly started to speak in white prose (not sure if it is called this, but the way we speak is different from the way we speak now, similar to the ancient times during the Republic of China). The kind that is ancient and modern but not modern, yes, it is similar to the way of speaking in Water Margin Journey to the West, but more modern) and then uses modern grammar, a mixture of the two, which makes me feel... Very strange. There is a feeling that the author wants to show a certain writing style, just writes to a high level, and then comes back to his senses and changes it, and then gets high again. I find it really... Very... Um... Difficult to comment. It really feels like the author was a different person during that time, and the two styles were mixed, which I personally find difficult to accept. 3. Emotional changes... A little flawed, but also for reasonable reasons. At least I can convince myself that it probably makes sense... 4. The way of description gives me the feeling that the author has changed from a half-male style of writing to a female style of domineering CEO. From the arrogance and arrogance of the male channel, to the... Slightly... Um... Look of the domineering president, and the previous article was mainly described from the perspective of the male protagonist. From the chapter I read, or starting from the hundredth chapter, the perspective changed to the perspective of the female protagonist, and the description style also changed. There is a clear sense of the female channel's text and video (not that I have an objection to the female channel, but I am really not used to the switch between male and female channels, as mentioned before). Still, I can't accept it. That's about it. As for why the male protagonist's feelings are so passionate, I can suddenly give myself a reasonable explanation and explanation to convince myself. Then the female protagonist's emotions are also convincing. The only thing is that the shortcomings listed above are difficult for me to accept. General comments: You can also read it to kill time or something. I suggest you read about a hundred chapters and see if you feel as uncomfortable as me. Die Jia: The above thoughts are my own. They do not represent the thoughts of all readers or the thoughts of others. The reason I cannot accept it is that my ideas and thoughts are different, and it does not mean that I believe that the author is wrong. If you have other opinions, you are right, because I have also said that this is my own opinion. I give five stars so that others can see my comments, and also to avoid being criticized (I have already given five stars, please don't criticize me, otherwise I will cry for you)

It's a magical book. I really like it.

I think this book is particularly suitable for people like me who like to read dual male protagonists and have a little bit of bt in their hearts. Besides, I feel like this book will probably have a bit of a knife edge at the end. I recommend it to those who like to read tsundere novels. Control reviews, understand, don't give all good reviews