Master, I'm Sorry. the Women Outside Are so Beautiful.

It's okay. I don't want to criticize the book. I hope the author can make the protagonist more passive. Currently, the protagonist's behavior is more active and appears to be more carefree and frivolous. It is not advisable to have a lewd and hungry ghost protagonist. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Okay, for now Style: Daily, with less fighting and adventure. I feel that the realm is a bit low. Currently, the top sects are transformed into gods, and there should be more in the future. The two senior sisters should be the heroines. The plot of the senior sister can be completed, and the second senior sister should be related to the empress. In addition to idle cultivation, the system should have some other uses. After all, you need to be enlightened in subsequent cultivation, otherwise you will not be able to advance to the next level. You can also give the protagonist a dual cultivation physique or something, either by chance or the system. It can also give the heroine the opportunity to improve her realm, or rely on dual cultivation of physique to complement each other.

Han Qingshuang, Yun Qianyue, Ao Ling'er, Bai Wan'er, Hu Mei'er, Xueyao, Wang Shiyun, Qin Jingyun, Luo Wanyi (there are some that haven't been eaten yet) Liu Xuanxuan, Chen Yurou, Chu Qingqing, Mu Yunxi, Mu Yunxi was later forgotten by the author. It's a bit of a miss. The protagonist's combat power is so low that he didn't build his foundation until the finale. He relied on Ao Ling'er throughout the whole process.

If you have a system, you should take your woman with you to become stronger, okay?

It ended too quickly, I didn't enjoy it

Looking forward to the next plot

It's the same as not having fingers.

Seeing how pitiful the author is, give him a five-star review

Where should this book be placed? Can you guys tell me?

Must five stars come on

I originally wanted to save it and watch it, but it ended as soon as I finished it [face covering]

Since you asked me, I will definitely give it to you

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

The score of 5.7 Is too low. There are just too many women. Overall, there is no problem.

I thought I would just pick a book when I was short of books, but I was fascinated by it. Now that I have seen it, I haven't found any flaws. It can be said that it is a good book among many women's books.

Very well written and interesting

It's so beautiful, I watch it every day.

It's well written, but there are a little few people.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Very good, nice details

Come on, I hope I can continue to finish writing [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It still looks very good. If you like harems, you can watch it.

Yes, the pace is moderate and gradual. I have no complaints. I just hope it can be updated a little faster🤏🏻