As a Machine Soul, I Just Want to Retire Early

When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is paid more attention to When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you are on the tenth watch, the great Confucian's management is deafening, and his tolerant attitude is deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you, that is Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problem all comes from insufficient updates.

It's very interesting, and the author has a good grasp of the scale. For example, although the appearance of the protagonist is controlled by the heroine, the protagonist has the highest control over the mecha, so he won't feel aggrieved [Thoughts]

It's beautiful, especially the one that returns to the protagonist's hometown. The picture shows the romance of soldiers and human beings' desire for the stars.

Well enough. The protagonist is a mecha soul with higher control authority than the pilot. The world view is to fight in the "abyss" to capture the world as a copy. There are some poisonous points, such as mocking the pilot's talent at the beginning, and the character of his family is written as not caring about her at all, treating him as an outsider who can be used. Later, when I was upgrading, I went back to the protagonist's world and played a dungeon.

Why does it smell like Grammer's Cavalry? Locust plague across the world!

It looks good and suits my taste. I hope the author can continue writing it and also make the mecha bigger. I want to see Gundam

It's pretty good, but the author tends to forget the rewards and things he got, and he doesn't get them back, but he doesn't care if these leaves can be seen [eating melon] [eating melon]

It's okay, but the author likes to create unnecessary conflicts with unclear meanings.

No more... Although I expected it, it's still quite heartbreaking. The follow-up I was looking forward to is gone. At that time, it was too little and I couldn't bear to watch it. Now I don't know if I can watch it. I regret not finishing it in time.

Not updated yet? It's been a few days since I stopped writing. Is it because I can't afford to leave? [Cry]

Why did you suddenly plan it😭😭😭😭

In my personal opinion, this book is very good, especially the blue section at the end, which impressed me deeply. I hope the author can continue writing and maintain the current quality.

Is this a new style of mecha type? It actually looks pretty good.

It's a little flawed but very good. Good luck to the author [like][like][like]

A very nice mecha story with a single female protagonist. Good luck to the author [like][like][like]

Well written by Azure Federation

Very well written! Come on, author

Overall it's okay, Haokan [like]

Got it! The protagonist is BT and the heroine is Kubo.

Continuous progress can cure all frustrations and low self-esteem

It's okay. The supporting role in the front is not very good. The back part is sweet and kills randomly.

Very good. This kind of subject matter is very rare in Tomato. I hope I can stick to it.

I have read more than thirty chapters and it is very well written. Good review!

It's good-looking, nothing too sinister, and the plot is smooth.

The title of the book is very interesting, and the writing is also very good. It has a very organic feel.

Very good, come on author

It looks very good so far. Good luck to the author. There is a setting that is so unreasonable. You can use money to buy things with unlimited attributes. It is so unreasonable.

Is there no love line?

It's pretty, not bad

Come on author, take good care of you