Contract with the Sentinels

The author obviously felt very painful when writing the second half. It's not that the writing is not good, but it feels like it's a bit beyond the author's writing ability. But he worked very hard to write, so it's a bit painful. This whistleblower is very rare. It is rare because it is the first sentence of many whistleblower articles, "The dark moment of the guide, until the dark moment when some control guides and even dark guides appeared." I have always felt that the center of Xiang Shao's articles has always been the conflict between Xiang Shao. The difference is that some articles are written with a lighter emphasis, some are more flattering and one-sided, and some are straightforward but not in-depth. They mainly focus on how to serve the theme of their articles. No matter how serious the conflict is, it will end in "becoming a god", similar to becoming the Queen of the Zerg or remaking the rules and becoming a spiritual leader. The theme of this article is growth, and it is the growth of ordinary guides who have no golden fingers in the dark period and need to shed all their flesh and blood. The growth of ordinary guides who are not enough brains but work hard. As a time traveler, the heroine only sowed seeds, but she got stuck in the mud, and eventually her spirit and body were torn apart in various ways. Finally, she was pulled out of the ground by her friends and sprouted. The author did not write down the details of whether the sapling grew into a big tree or withered, leaving an open ending. Very good In many aspects of the content, I personally feel that the writing is cruel but not cruel enough, and the heroine's character is really twisted. I don't mean to hate it, but the writing is very good, but such a character is not lovable in Tomato and may lack some readers. This is not the intention of asking the author to change the character! (Strengthen your armor!) I really like the heroine, but this article is not suitable for the market. It's a pity that it didn't get the results it deserved. The writing in the second half of the article is a bit lacking, and some aspects are not handled very well, but overall the flaws do not hide the good points. It is a good article! Recommend! Complaining more is also a reminder. If you read this article and then read other Xiangshao articles, you may become a little picky. Because in some sentry articles, the guides were on the wrong side because the guides did not respect the sentries enough, which deepened the conflicts between each other. Moreover, many guides rejected purification and chose to become control guides. However, the heroine did not understand other guides' dislike of the sentries because the gold finger was painless and even stroking all kinds of fur was very enjoyable. After reading this article, if you look at this setting, you will easily feel that the female protagonist is a loser, and that the other guides have become the female comparison group. If you like Mary Sue Wizard-themed articles, read this article carefully, otherwise the filter used to read the article will easily break.

This is a pseudo-heartthrob story. All love and flattery are poison wrapped in honey, but it is a good story worth reading. The guide's resistance in the face of unfair circumstances, the friendship between the Su family sisters, and the heroine's own growth and transformation shine like gems in the dark and desperate background.

I thought of that sentence again. If they are enemies, it is a blood feud. Just look at history. How many guides have been destroyed. Even if they seem to be given some freedom now, it is just a pet like a bird in a cage in the palm of their hand. To be honest, the male protagonist here is not an ordinary romance novel. He has created a perfect male protagonist image. To be honest, there are really not many qualified male protagonists here. I think this should be a non-CP novel. I hope that the heroine and her sisters can finally work hard to support the guide and fight for freedom and liberation, instead of just another love interest? Some of the problems and realities in it are sometimes similar, but they are just sharper and more concrete, embodying some invisible values. For example, the value of purification to sentinels

It turns out that I don't hate abuse, I just hate irrational abuse. This book is very good. Although the heroine seems to be taken advantage of by everyone at the moment, she doesn't rely on emotions to live. When she is hurt, she can simply get away if she sees people clearly. To put it bluntly, I don't hate being surrounded by villains, I just don't like that most heroines forget their pain easily and choose to make do with it. The heroine of this book is very good, she can be moved, has a long memory, and has her own safety in mind, not just feelings.

It is a book that I like very much so far. The heroine travels through time, but there is no golden finger (but it will change from a D-level guide to a B-level guide for unknown reasons). It has the memory of modern society and hopes to live a stable life. The plot is also very good, with exciting pulls and direct conflicts between the guide and the sentry. No one is perfect, and each sentry is like a "noble man" in real society (sarcastic meaning, some well-educated men can pretend to be gentlemen, and I am talking about those LJs who have no strength but are trustworthy). Every sentinel will make me firmly believe in the author's strength. I am currently looking forward to the next arrangement of Da Da Da [Please update] [I haven't seen enough]

The writing is good. The world in the book is perverted, but very realistic. I felt depressing after reading it. The whole society is in a vicious cycle, not only due to external factors, but also internal struggles. The world is unequal, but it is extremely unequal and does not even have superficial equality. Class solidification is obvious...

After thinking about it, I decided to give it five stars to encourage the author. It is really inspiring. I hope you will create more stories in the future [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Then I don't know if the author will review the story. I can definitely see that there is no outline. The subsequent plot is written wherever I think of it, making it unclear what the main plot is. A heartthrob? But none of the male guests have love. Is it revenge? But the heroine has no intention of revenge. To become stronger? But the heroine has not become stronger. Are you changing the world with your sisters? But the author didn't write about it. From the first chapter to the last chapter, the shortcomings are actually very obvious, that is, the heroine has not changed, or the various characters have not changed significantly, the male sentries have no regrets, the guides and supporting characters are not awake, the alien fusion has no sequel, and the ending will be the same regardless of the sisters appearing, including Su Tian, ​​who ended up as a rebel. Not to mention that there was an amnesia in the middle that caused the progress to be cleared. Sometimes I feel that the author loves the heroine very much and is willing to describe her various emotions and struggles. But sometimes I feel that the author doesn't love the heroine and insists on using the heroine's mistakes to advance the plot, leaving the heroine to suffer the consequences. But I am still willing to give it five stars. How to write a good story can be learned, but writing a good story requires talent. The author is really talented in writing multiple settings and complex world views. Come on, come on, come on.

The plot is particularly majestic and grand, written from a novel perspective. It's hard to say, it sucked.

The angle of this article is very novel. The guides I read before were very relaxed in soothing their spirits. I didn't understand why many guides were grumpy, but now I understand. I really wish all the sentinels didn't like me and wouldn't come to me for purification [face covering]

The writing is realistic. I have also read other guides' articles and I think they are too otome-oriented. If it were in reality, it might not be so beautiful. The author has written about the conflicts that may occur between the guide and the sentinel.

The heroine is well portrayed. She is indecisive at first and seeks advantages and avoids disadvantages. She is a little girl domesticated by the world. She is not smart enough but will break through the bottom line and fight for the people she cares about. She is very lively and vivid. Sometimes the behavior of the heroine will make people speechless, but I am really happy to see her live out her life. It depicts a good dark side, shortcomings and struggle. An ordinary strong little girl, it would be better if it did not end badly.

This is considered normal. If the heroine doesn't change faster, the only person who can "save" her is the author. The following is my understanding of the book (contains spoilers) I don't know if the author wanted to write a novel similar to "The Mist", but after reading the author's writing of this book, I felt the same. Borrowing B station up master Zhou Zhouguai's evaluation of the movie "The Mist", "This is a psychological horror film that depicts people's hair standing on end in an extreme environment." Although the heroine was reborn, due to the influence of the novel about the world of guides and sentries in her previous life, even after she was reborn into this new world, she only realized this shitty world after guiding several sentries. Finally forced to change...... I don't know whether it was because the heroine died prematurely in the previous life or because the author deliberately created her. The character of the heroine is hard to fathom, and she is "a salted fish being carried forward." However, in the heroine's memories, we can easily find that the heroine has ideals and ambitions, but she thinks too much and does not dare to realize them. In this case, it may be that the heroine's failure experience in her previous life has affected her; or it may be that she is just a simple utopian. People's assumptions about the future are based on their own known knowledge. When Liu Yun (the rebellious A-level guide) took her to "make a big fuss" in the central area, she did not leave, offending many high-status guides. However, when Liu Yun (the rebellious A-level guide) asked her if she would go together, the heroine refused. The heroine can see the outcome brought about by the former, but she cannot see the outcome brought about by rebellion. She is rational and irrational, which is especially in line with people in real society. Everyone is not a completely rational person. This is reflected in the fact that after losing the ability, he went to live an ordinary life and considered whether to go back. And the author's entry point is also very interesting, it happened on the eve of the storm. As a heroine who has an ordinary mind but has not-so-ordinary friends and abilities, she can only work hard to force herself to change. Until the end, Liu Yun (the rebellious A-level guide) asked her for the second time if we were together, and she agreed, and the story ended here. We don't know who will win this war or whether the heroine can survive to the end... Finally, I would like to praise the heroine. Without training, it is not easy to maintain herself in such emergencies. We should be calm in any situation, only when we are calm can we think of things The idea is very good and the story is well told. The only flaw is that individual details are not handled properly. Ps: I feel so frustrated that I want to punch you a few times

It's very nice to see, and it's quite real. As a small number of guides, who account for the needs of the majority of sentries, and are more capable than guides, this really makes sense. I have also read other Shao Xiang articles, which are different from this one and are also very interesting. However, I have doubts about how the guide can maintain its current status with such a weak guide. Maybe it is because the guide is accustomed to not knowing the world and having limited knowledge. Knowledge determines a person's vision. A guide raised in a greenhouse cannot shake a sentinel who has experienced the blood of war. Both kinds of whistle text are very beautiful [note][note][note][you taste carefully][you taste carefully][you taste carefully] Just choose what you like and watch it [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It is true that there are few whistle-blowing themes. Nowadays, most interstellar whistle-blowing themes are in a relatively mature social stage. There are relatively clear and reasonable laws and regulations regarding the use of abilities, whistle-blowing and the relationship between ordinary people. But before that, there must have been a long period of exploration and experimentation, and even a dark period. Either the east prevailed over the west wind or the other side suppressed it in reverse. To find the fulcrum of balance and harmony between the two, we must go a long way. The heroine is an ordinary person who was born in the interstellar period when guides were oppressed. Even if they don't agree with it, the interstellar life will eventually leave its mark on the soul. Without the halo of the heroine, there is no system to save her. Being assimilated and integrated is an inevitable and longing for life. After all, aliens are always easy to die along the way. In a turbulent period of oppression and resistance, reality is oppressed and the way forward is unclear. Being swept away by the torrent of the times, should we choose a stable but fearful life, or should we choose an unknown future? Or was it pushed to one side by fate? In times of turmoil, no one can be trusted, but strangers who have never met can also become entities that entrust trust and convey faith.

Nine stars and a thumbs up! It was quite depressing when I saw the later stage. The heroine's situation reminded me of a picture. A person is standing on the tip of a tall knife. There are blazing flames everywhere on the ground. The sky is covered with a layer of electric grid. If you make a wrong step, you will be shattered into pieces. I can only bear the pain and walk on the tip of the knife, seeking such a pitiful life. 😭Death has become a salvation. If this article made me realize the cruel and indifferent rules of society at the beginning, then the next step is to make me face the darkness of human nature. The reason why I feel so deeply is that I clearly realize that this is the world we live in, but it is just a different way of expressing it. The sentinels keep the guides in captivity, use the guides as tools, and fight endlessly for rights. Everything is so suffocating, but what is even more despairing is their own insignificance. The more times like this, the more I look forward to the emergence of personal heroism. I believe that many people are looking forward to the heroine becoming stronger like me, using her own power to break the shackles, remove dirt and obstacles, and smooth out all injustices in her eyes. However, in reality we can only persuade ourselves to go to bed! The novel comes from life, and the author sincerely does not deceive me!

It's a wonderful story, but it's a pity that it ended so hastily. But understandable. There was basically no feedback in the later period, which was a pity. It's really rare to see a story that exposes the true relationship between Shao and Xiang. There are too many stereotyped novels, and this one is better than those even if it ends in a hurry.

The subject matter is very novel. It is not a whistle-stop relationship in the traditional sense. There are many new expansions. The content is a bit messy and the logic is jumpy. Overall, it is good, but there are still details that I hope can be adjusted.

In fact, it is very well written. If it continues, it should be in the top ten in Xiang Shao Wen. Whether it is the setting or plot design, it is generally logical and plotted. Maybe the author did not have a good ending. This book should be read by all love brains. This is the world of clarity and reality. The title of the book can be called "A Must-Read Handbook for Love Brains". Except that it is not finished, it is very good.

The setting is very exciting. Although the ending is sudden and open, it is still good overall. Come on, madam! [Sending Hearts] Reading the whole article, the heroine is miserable. She obviously wants to be an idle fish, but because of the madness in this world, she has to sit up. Her strength and strategy are not good enough, and she needs to be stronger. In one word - miserable. I wish the heroine and her three sisters will get better and better and be able to realize their ideals. I wish this crazy world will end soon. I wish all the sentinels who are like lunatics in it will soon embark on the path of learning. I wish the White Tower, the high-level officials in power, and the rebels who are not good things will become ashes soon. Epilepsy, epilepsy is good. [Eat melon]

It's so real. Normally, most female protagonists are either S or S+, but this is not the case at all. Because it is real, I feel a little heartbroken when I read it. If you like reality, you can go for it [Blow Kiss]. There are many differences between this book and most guide books. If it is like a heartthrob, it feels like a pseudo-heartthrob in my heart. It is different from the normal kind of heartthrob that the male protagonists fall in love with no matter what the heroine does. Then the guide is like, because you can bring me benefits, so I kind of like you, but this is only based on you being useful to me, like a bubble. Furthermore, the rights of guides are not as great as those in other books. I feel that neither guide nor sentinel has an easy life in this book. However, there are no good things about Sentinel in this book, like. . . Realistic. . Same [face covering] (I feel like I'm about to get scolded, scold me back [face covering]) It's really not easy for a heroine. If you put yourself in the role, you'd feel like you're going crazy [face covering]. It's different from Shuangwen. It's not Shuangwen, it's not Shuangwen. Finally, the writing is very good, come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

In the early stage, the heroine will be brutally beaten by the environment she is in, but as time goes by, the heroine will definitely become more and more successful as her strength improves, letting those sentinels who were unreasonable to the heroine know what it means to repent and become a real heartthrob!

It's still good to watch, but the writing falls apart later on. There really isn't a good Sentinel. In fact, I could continue by writing about joining the rebels, overthrowing the current empire, and taking over the world with Su Liuyun, haha

Overall it's actually pretty good. It can be seen that the world view set is very large. However, since it is always written from the perspective of the protagonist, there is no in-depth introduction. The protagonist is lucky enough to "escape" every time he steps into a trap, which is really an ordinary person's character and wisdom. In the end, I found an excuse for my sudden personality change, so it was okay. The Wizard vs. Sentinel rivalry is interesting. But it's a pity not to get rid of the setting of all female players serving as male whistles (maybe the background is also there but I just didn't write it down), and it's a bit conservative in this regard. If the future author is interested, he can continue writing on this worldview.

This article has a very gloomy and sticky feeling. The style and intention are rare in Tomato. I think it will be popular. Please give me more encouragement.

It's great to watch, and the setting world is wonderful and innovative. Although it's dangerous, it's wonderful. 🍅It's easy to get a low rating from the beginning. But this book is very nice. Although the heroine is a bit frustrated. The author is awesome! [Laugh]

The writing style is good and the heroine has a very distinct personality. The plot is very unpleasant, and the author and my heartthrob seem to be different. Don't think that if you are sad in the front, I will expect it to be stronger in the back. I will just click ❌.

It's good-looking, really good-looking, and the characters are well integrated. The current plight of women is logically normal. Finally, she is no longer a silly and sweet heroine. The heroine just loves and dares to hate. It is a setting that I have never seen before. The different settings in Xiang Shao's article are very novel. I read it in one go. Looking forward to it.

Good as seen. But some sentries are too indebted. The heroine, please get up.

The heroine's growth arc is obvious, the world view is cruel and reasonable, and the plot is attractive. I haven't encountered such an appetizing heroine in a long time [Like]

Woohoo🥹I just saw the climax, can you continue to update? It will definitely be exciting to continue. The author can take a few days off to sort out the outline, but don't give up on this book [crying]