
At the Beginning, the Protagonist's Master Was Taken Down, and the Heroine Regretted It!
开局拿下主角师尊,女主悔断肠!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 184k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
5.8Score
84Chapters





The writing is smooth and the world view is grand. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, and the character portrayal gradually becomes fuller as the plot progresses. The dramatic conflicts of some small climax plots can be strengthened! Opening: ✪✪✪ Settings: ✪✪✪ Character: ✪✪✪ Writing style: ✪✪✪ Plot: ✪✪✪ Ingenuity: ✪✪✪✪ Orgasm: ✪✪✪ There are still many things that can be improved, so keep up the good work! (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑
I really want to applaud the author for this novel. It is a model of fantasy and cool writing in my heart. It allows me to find a passionate pure land in my tired life, so that I can release my stress to my heart's content!
It's super beautiful, I recommend you check it out 😁
The transformation of Haha Hongqianyu is very realistic and very funny
A classic fantasy novel. It's so good. I mean I was hooked from the beginning. It completely saved the book shortage. The author's writing style is really good and he is good at telling stories. He wrote the ups and downs of Qin Feng's experience in a very exciting way. I really like this book [Sending my heart to you]
The male protagonist is witty and calm, with an above-average IQ. He is not the kind of mindless and cool novel. The emotional scene with Su Qinghan is well written, and it is not a mindless love story.
It is a serious cross-referral article. There are thousands of tomato articles of the same type, so the comparison is about writing style and plot. The plot of this book is good, and there are also the author's own innovations in it. It's worth reading.
The fiancée is so funny, why did you go there earlier? The male protagonist has risen and is quite handsome, and his strength level is full.
The emotional tug-of-war between Qin Feng and the heroine is quite interesting, and the relationship between Qin Feng and the heroine is quite interesting.
Fortunately, the male protagonist turned out to be a ruthless and decisive character in the later stage, so I didn't apologize for being so low-key to him in the early stage.
Not bad ~ Warm reminder for reading this book: No matter how uncomfortable it is in the early stage, it will be so exciting in the later stage!
Although Qin Feng's pretense of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger in the early stage is very long, it is very satisfying to see the slap in the face later.
It's a very interesting fantasy work, the author will continue to make more, and there must be no knives [I understand][I understand]
It is still a good-looking villain series, with many highlights and high-energy plot. Overall, it is very good to watch [making faces]
It's awesome. It's awesome. The male protagonist is so handsome after activating the system. He also meets the beautiful master. Look!
The fantasy world in the book has a grand structure. The protagonist wanders between good and evil, goes through thousands of sails, and returns to his true heart, which touches the reader's soul and leaves a long aftertaste.
I think it's quite normal to have a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage. This book is about the protagonist growing up slowly. The author's writing is quite good.
It's quite good-looking. It's a relaxed and humorous way of writing in the face, and the system settings are very interesting. Please keep writing, the author.
I was expecting Qin Feng to slap Ye Chen in the face... After all, I see that Ye Chen really owes him now.
Li Bai's teaching quality
Big cheers for the author
Maru La, why did you enter the dark room? !
Unexpectedly, Qin Lan has a 10,000-fold return system. Haha, slapping his fiancée in the face looked so exciting. The most important thing is that he also got a beautiful master. Qin Lan is the son of luck, right? 😄!
The male protagonist is also a ruthless character, so handsome [Adored]
A very good time-travel drama, very enjoyable to watch
Not bad, not bad, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, the system cheat is also very powerful, very good, the author's writing style is very good
This book is going to be a hit. It's so good. The male protagonist is strong and handsome.
This work is a fantasy novel worth reading. With its distinctive features and unique charm, it brings a wonderful reading experience to fantasy lovers. Don't miss it!
The world view is grand, the protagonist comes from time-travel, and there is also a system. The various slaps in the face later are very exciting and have a sense of immersion.
The content is good-looking and exciting, worth watching