Li Xiang, an ordinary modern migrant worker, accidentally traveled to a small coastal county in Qingzhou in 184 AD at the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty on a strange overtime night. This is the time of the Yellow Turban Rebellion. The county town is surrounded by the Yellow Turban Army and the situation is critical.
Reader comments
Your opening setting is a bit awkward. Didn't you find that there is a bit of a logical conflict? How come? Can you still go back? No ad hoc? There's no good in that. Wouldn't it be over if you just kill yourself?
Secondly, I listened to nine chapters of the book... Your mission made me feel like a lump in my throat and a light on my back.
The progress of the plot is true. I don't know what I heard. It's a waste of time.
The first-person perspective is a bit immature in terms of writing...
If you hadn't made a long-winded point at the beginning, you would have changed history.
Otherwise, I have no idea what you wrote.
And the historical background is a bit low...
I don't know if you are writing the Romance of the Three Kingdoms or the History of the Three Kingdoms...
In the history of the Three Kingdoms, the key point is that the Yellow Turban Rebellion was a righteous man. The remaining Liu Bei and Jiangdong Rats are all bad guys. Except for Cao Cao, who is considered a character, none of them after that are good people...
Your book is a bit long and verbose, and the listener will have no patience. I guess I can read it if I read it.
Really, your mission is a bit embarrassing, it would be better to have no mission at all...
Your opening setting is a bit awkward. Didn't you find that there is a bit of a logical conflict? How come? Can you still go back? No ad hoc? There's no good in that. Wouldn't it be over if you just kill yourself? Secondly, I listened to nine chapters of the book... Your mission made me feel like a lump in my throat and a light on my back. The progress of the plot is true. I don't know what I heard. It's a waste of time. The first-person perspective is a bit immature in terms of writing... If you hadn't made a long-winded point at the beginning, you would have changed history. Otherwise, I have no idea what you wrote. And the historical background is a bit low... I don't know if you are writing the Romance of the Three Kingdoms or the History of the Three Kingdoms... In the history of the Three Kingdoms, the key point is that the Yellow Turban Rebellion was a righteous man. The remaining Liu Bei and Jiangdong Rats are all bad guys. Except for Cao Cao, who is considered a character, none of them after that are good people... Your book is a bit long and verbose, and the listener will have no patience. I guess I can read it if I read it. Really, your mission is a bit embarrassing, it would be better to have no mission at all...