When Xie Mujin entered the novel about cultivating immortals and became a little cannon fodder who was jealous of the male protagonist, led people to bully the male protagonist every day, colluded with the demons, framed the male protagonist, and finally died tragically in a few episodes, Xie Mujin was left speechless. He vowed never to call God God again, because he did not regard himself as a grandson at all.
So he decided to stay away from the male and female protagonists until the finale, but why did the male protagonist keep following him? It was a bit ambiguous~
Reader comments
It looks good, but it's a little too fast [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]
The emotional line and the story line develop too fast. The storyline is ingenious and interesting, but the author can write it more deeply and delicately. For example, the protagonist's emotional line can add more misunderstandings to resolve misunderstandings and stimulate big conflicts to make the two people's hearts struggle more, because Mujin is originally in the state of the bully and Muqi is the bullied. But after a close contact, he fell in love with you and fell in love with Mujin? If the hibiscus who originally bullied him found out, it would definitely make him happy. So I think the author can think more deeply when describing.
It looks good, but it's a little too fast [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]
The emotional line and the story line develop too fast. The storyline is ingenious and interesting, but the author can write it more deeply and delicately. For example, the protagonist's emotional line can add more misunderstandings to resolve misunderstandings and stimulate big conflicts to make the two people's hearts struggle more, because Mujin is originally in the state of the bully and Muqi is the bullied. But after a close contact, he fell in love with you and fell in love with Mujin? If the hibiscus who originally bullied him found out, it would definitely make him happy. So I think the author can think more deeply when describing.