I Cultivated Immortality for My Country

It's good-looking, I love watching it, and with Wangyu's status, it's also a treasure to come to Tomato. Moreover, it can be seen that Wangyu is seeking change and is no longer trapped in the mortal world. In fact, Wangyu really can become a mortal, but he is also a mortal. His debut is the peak, and subsequent works can never escape him. This time I write about a world where science fiction and fairy tales collide. I hope Wangyu can live out his second life! No matter what, as a loyal fan of Mortal, I will always support Wangyu!

Write well and follow me all the way. I hope you will never forget your readers and your original intention.

Wang Fatty's works are known for their slow-burning narratives. The new work has the charm of "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", and the settings are delicate and subtle, demonstrating the author's ingenuity. The system construction is logically rigorous, well-founded and convincing. The profound knowledge and careful polishing revealed between the lines make people look forward to it. Overall, this book is worth reading. Five-star review.

A master is a master. The book is now fast-paced. Although it is systematic, it does not feel abrupt. I think the most obvious advantage of Wangyu Master is that the fighting descriptions are wonderful and picturesque. Regardless of the appearance and personality of the characters, they are always affectionate and meaningful on the inside. I think Tomato's Peasant Son Imperial Examination and Palace Fighting are both good. Fantasy novels are Tomato's shortcomings. Now that Wang Yu has joined the family, Tomato's mortal stream has a bright future. Come on come on come on. [Like][Like][Like]

As expected of a great writer, there are many plots in the first three chapters. What is better than a purely time-traveling novel is that it explains why he traveled through time, rather than just the protagonist. There is a high probability that the story behind the starry sky will be inseparable, so that the world view will not be too small. I look forward to it.

I have finished reading "The Legend of the Devil" and "The Gate of the Mysterious World" completely, and now I have caught up with 1.2 Million words of "The Wizard of the Star Road". Let's talk about my true feelings. Continuing Wangyu's consistent creative characteristics, the overall framework is very neatly constructed, integrating modern technology, interstellar exploration and traditional cultivation of immortality. The system is naturally connected, the clues are coherent, the actions of the characters and the confrontation of forces are all logical, and there is no perfunctory plot. The book follows a step-by-step approach, and the update pace is not fast, but each chapter is full of useful information, and there is no need to fill in the word count. Different from the current mainstream fast-paced cool writing style, it is more suitable for calming down and reading slowly. At present, I have written 1.2 Million words, the story layout is completely spread out, and the volume of content is enough to get me into the trap. Book lovers who prefer rigorous narratives and solid plots of cultivating immortality may wish to give it a try, I believe you will not be disappointed. I also hope that this carefully crafted work can be seen by more people.

A good start. If you like the mortal flow, it is best not to have any golden fingers, space towers, palm-holding bottles, etc. There are treasures, but they have to be snatched with great effort. The writing style is simple, concise and not overly descriptive. After a few chapters, I felt that there was some foreshadowing. Of course, it may be that I am overthinking it. Overall looking forward to it

All kinds of suspense and reversal, as well as the combination of Wangyu style and Tomato style are so good, extraordinary performance Wangyu really lived a second life this time I feel like it's a masterpiece, probably second only to the human world chapter of Mortals

Wangyu Dadai is still as awesome as ever. Especially in terms of fighting, it is not inferior to Forgotten's works! The content is interesting and full of various reversals and foreshadowings. Many doubts were left, such as the master's smile, the senior brother's smile, etc.!

It can be concluded that this book will be the best novel about cultivating immortality in Tomato. It has a rigorous setting, a grand world view, rich imagination, ups and downs of the plot, and skillful use of routines while also having many small innovations. For example, some plots incorporate the weird style that has become popular in recent years, which can be said to have broken through Wangyu's comfort zone. Although it cannot be said that every plot has been carefully polished, some passages have slight flaws. However, this is an unavoidable situation for daily updates of online articles. In addition, characterization is Wangyu's weakness, and this article also suffers from this problem.