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How should I put it? It's a bit sloppy, but I can read it. Good luck to the author [eating melon] There are so many mistakes that I can't bear it [face covering]

I have to use all my strength to get that spike ball, so I don't need to use it anymore. I can't hold it anymore. If it hangs up, I'll leave it for the enemy, right?

Except that the world of cultivating immortals is relatively chaotic, it is very suitable in all aspects. There is no golden finger. The protagonist's IQ is normal, his cultivation speed matches his qualifications (he broke through to the 8th level of Qi training in four years), and he makes good use of skills. The abilities that should be eliminated are eliminated, and the useful abilities can be promoted. It feels very satisfying. The protagonist's combat power will not suddenly become the same as that of a monk in the same realm. The combat power value has been steadily advancing (the eighth level of Qi Condensation cultivation can directly comprehend the artistic conception of the golden elixir in advance, and can directly fight with the first level of Zhuyuan cultivation).

It looks good, and the protagonist is interesting. Goldfinger only has one panel, unlike other systems that talk and issue tasks. I hope the author will continue to keep up the good work [eating melon]

Really good! The writing is also good! Come on! !

It's really good, guys.

It's still a pretty good fast-food novel, but some details have been removed. Unlike other novels, the pace of the novel is fast and the battles are fun. However, the guidance after becoming a disciple is slow. Before becoming a disciple, it's a bit weird for people from your own sect to kill your own people.

The antidote to the book shortage, thank you

Very good book

Very beautiful, very exciting

It's pretty good-looking, better than most tomatoes

The writing is pretty good, and the plot is quite interesting, so I'll keep reading. This direction is correct. If you improve your writing style, data and logic, you will be a great internet writer.

Not bad, you can read it in Shuhuang!

It's new and not bad.

Not bad,? ? . . Shuhuang is worth reading

Excellent tomato products, don't deceive me!

Personally I think it's good

It's so beautiful. I love reading it. How do you manage to sleep at such a young age? [Smile][Smile][Smile] Update soon!

The writing is quite good, at least the story sequence is clear and not confusing. The perspective and logic of the scene are clear, which is pretty good.

It's still good, the sofa decisive entry is about cultivating immortals

Beautiful, worth watching

Hohohohohoho

Okay, very tweety

Give the author some motivation [Thinking]

Red and fiery, in a trance

Good books worth reading

The entry is just a gimmick, no more than 10, just ignore it. At the beginning of the entry, kill the cultivator and then start cultivating the immortal.

The rating is low, but the overall plot is still good.

Don't say it. Don't say it. It's quite enjoyable to watch.

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