Rebirth: the Sickly Beauty Who Doted on Him

Cheer up for your first book [face covering]

After reading about half of it, let me comment first. Gong Li Jingyan was reborn. In his previous life, he fell in love with Xia Yan at first sight and was immediately imprisoned at home. He died young because of a servant's instigation and deliberate frame-up. He also suffered a lot. After rebirth, I thought It was Tianwen, at least to make up for the suffering he suffered in the previous life and protect him. Unexpectedly, he was so cruel after his rebirth. It was not the reason for Gong, but some bad people with evil intentions. They were jealous of Xia Yanyu's good looks and bullied him. His physical condition was really poor. I want to no longer suffer after being reborn.

It can be seen that the author's writing is very delicate and he is trying his best to shape the characters. Some adjectives are not well written and the sentences are not smooth. The plot part is okay. However, I suggest that it is better to write sweet articles smoothly. The writing is a bit bumpy. The length of the chapter names can also be shortened. For example, "xxx is admitted to the hospital for stomach bleeding" instead of "xxx is admitted to the hospital". Otherwise, if you have already said it in the chapter, it will not attract readers. I suggest that it is better to have a little mystery. Shorter chapter names can attract readers to read and find the answers. You, the reader, don't even need to read to know. There are fewer people who read naturally. Because some people like to skip chapters when reading novels, you don't have the reading capacity yourself. People may finish reading in a few minutes and will not understand the details in depth. Then there is the aspect of shaping the character of Eucalyptus. If you want to highlight the sweetness of the protagonist before, you don't have to describe it as often hugging. I think it is a bit feminine. Those who are hugged here and there every day think it is a giant baby (the author describes it very well) For reference only) I think it can be highlighted from some examples. For example, Li Zi used love to influence Eucalyptus, making him less inferior and bravely dealing with the things he encountered in life. Only in this way can he have his own character instead of just relying on Li Zi's "parasite". The author is honest and writes an article like this for the first time. Come on, I look forward to your second masterpiece [Blow Kiss]

I asked you to be a good boy. This book will be better. It's very, very, very, very beautiful. You must read it. There are a lot of CPs in it.

I want to see the follow-up of Jing Yichen and Jing Yicheng

Not bad, every couple has a sweet love in the end. Recommended!

Come on, good-looking

It looks great. Everyone has a good ending. It's worth buying.

It's really good-looking. The characters are all very talkative. If you have something to say, you can speak directly. If you have a problem, you can solve it directly. I really love it. I just rush into it without thinking.

This book is really nice, and the author is also very good at writing. There is only a little bit of abuse in it, so don't worry.