HP Fansoul Joy

The author's writing style and writing style are quite good, and the description of emotions is not too abrupt. With the author's ability, he can write fictional characters, but now, I personally feel that the creation of Sri Lanka is not very successful (of course, it is not that the author is not good, it just feels a bit OOC, these are personal opinions and let's discuss it with everyone) 🥲🥲🥲🥲 1. Slytherin should be an indifferent or even cold-blooded person. Slytherin may be a bit cold-blooded. This can be seen from the fact that he never helps others, is not close to anyone, and is even a bit gloomy. Moreover, he does not have the tall and upright outlook of Wei Guangzheng. 2. He has a relatively high desire for power, including following Voldemort when he was a non-pure blood. His own strength as a potion master was enough for him to prove himself, but he was not satisfied and has been following Voldemort. I guess the ultimate goal is to follow capable people to gain higher rights and status. It can also be seen here that he is very cold. He is indifferent to the death of other wizards, as long as he can reach the top. He can be said to be a very classic desire-based villain, but in the end Rowling added a love halo to him, making him bound to "normal morality". His tragedy also lies in his "love". Rather than saying that he "loves" Lily, it is better to say that he "loves" the innocent past that was not bullied and suppressed and gradually became darker. In addition, Lily died because of him, and he felt very sad and guilty. 3. Although he is full of emotions, he is not good at expressing them. You can tell from his attitude towards Lily that he didn't even express a trace of love from beginning to end, because he was dark, selfish, cold-blooded and sensitive. He could feel the change in Lily's attitude towards him, so he didn't even say "like", so after Lily died, his patronus became a doe. Dumbledore asked him when he became like this, and he answered "always". The above points are just the most prominent points. As well as his spicy language, winter-like momentum, and his mentality, I think the author's description is a bit off. (I'm not disparaging, I just want the author to refer to it.) Let's analyze some slightly OOC issues in the article: he should be more disgusted with being coerced and even have murderous intentions, so when the male protagonist threatens him with Potter, he should use verbal taunts and personal attacks to protect himself, and even say "What does the savior have to do with me?" Because Harry is a combination of people he loves and hates, he is contradictory. He hates James' "brave, straightforward, and passionate" qualities in Harry, because he himself has nothing to do with such words, and Lily fell in love with James because of these. In the eyes of Sri Lanka, these words represent "impulsiveness, stupidity, and overestimation." It can be seen from his behavior of describing those lower-grade students as "trolls" that he himself is arrogant and arrogant. He has a cold-looking sarcasm and belittlement of ordinary people, and is more hostile and malicious toward talented people, because he has never worshiped anyone, including Voldemort. He is self-centered and dark. Snape is very aggressive, he can even taunt Dumbledore, so he will not show mercy to the male protagonist. If the male protagonist is really hanging in the bathroom and remains motionless, he will only add a real thing that cannot be untied and petrify him. There will be no shame like dragging him out or feeling embarrassed, because he does not care about the eyes of these "trolls". As an extremely self-centered and power-hungry villain, the reason why he is restrained is only Lily, not Potter. I wrote a lot, but in fact many paragraphs should be integrated together, it is a bit illogical, but since it is a literary review, it was written in a hurry, so let's make do with it. In fact, I like the protagonist's character very much, and some of the author's settings are also very interesting (I have only read episode 23 so far, and I really can't help but comment on it. If it is different in the future, you can also discuss it. On the topic, gentle spray 🥹), the treatment of some subtle details can make people feel the loose love bubble, which makes people feel heart-beating. However, Si Jiao's reaction when he met Si Jiao was a bit wrong. If he could write about Si Jiao, who is dark and damp, proud of his talents, duplicitous, and constantly deconstructing himself in the struggle, it should be more touching. I look forward to the author's performance. 😙😘🥰 Another: My child is in a literature shortage. Can anyone recommend novels? Any genre is acceptable. I have reached the point where I am not averse to men and women. I'm adding a five-star review. I just joined Tomatoes before. I didn't know that it's better to give five stars to book reviews here. I'm sorry for lowering the author's rating. Overall, it's readable. The logic online is good and the writing is good. You can check it out😙😙😙. I haven't finished this one. I just remembered it recently. Although the characters are not to my taste and I haven't finished it, the content is pretty good. Otherwise, I wouldn't write a book review. Take a look, kids.🤓

Super pretty! ! ! A straight-ball puppy with a lot of love × an awkward little bat who craves a lot of love, a perfect match! ! ! My wife perfectly interpreted the characters of the two people, which is great! Zhou Tiao pressed forward step by step. Snape resisted intellectually, but emotionally could not resist, until he finally sank soberly. The emotional pull between the two people is simply amazing. They seem to be in love, but in fact they are both in love! ! ! Moreover, Gong's outlook on life was extremely upright, and the days of living together made Harry become a better and happier person.

I have been following this book for a long time. This is the one I have read that uses Severus' potions to their full potential. Every Severus is loved well in the fanfic, I think, this is the point of the fanfic. I wish Theo's Severus Snape happiness in this world and Theo.

Super delicious, it would be better if you could see the details of their "happy" life after marriage In addition to being a love brain when facing SS, the rest of the time is a dual-business online politics. Rule. Born. The protagonist of the thing. I'm attracted to him unconsciously, but I can't trust the professor who has a pessimistic attitude towards everything. This tug-of-war between the two sides is full of tension, and it is not primarily a tug on the professor's reason and emotion. The protagonist is a straight-shooting and awkward player who captures the professor step by step.

It was a book that I clicked on and read because it had been recommended more than ten times because of its ridiculous title. I read it in two days and it was really exciting. Not counting OOC, I understand that Snape is also a very strong, motivated and ambitious person who will give up his own interests for the ones he loves. He doesn't care about the boundaries of justice and only recognizes the things or people he cares about, so it is difficult to refuse when he is treated wholeheartedly. I understand. The whole story is a relatively complete story, and the characters are really lovable. It is rare to find a cp article that does not contradict the positions of the snake and the lion. No one is blackmailed. Dumbledore has given his trust, Lily is beautiful alone, Irene is redeemed, and even Voldemort is written in a silly and dull way, not too evil. (After reading it in one sitting, I couldn't tell the details of the extra chapter. The extra chapter is also very interesting!) The only regret is Harry's love affair... I can eat any cp. I hope the author will write more about Deha in the next book.

It's a good read. I was hooked in the first chapter. The author wrote about the subtle feeling of the professor seeing Tiao again after so many years (something must have happened between them). Theo is very sensitive to the professor's emotions and can always detect the professor's emotions in time and solve them neatly. I like their various intimate names and kisses, as well as the friendly interactions between them. They are a sticky little couple😘. The author writes superbly, and I wish them more and more happiness!

I very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very much like the teacher's writing. I like sweet young lovers living a happy life. This is how SS's talent should shine. I have always hoped to see SS's abilities being fully utilized in fan fiction. The field that I am really interested in. A capable person should be seen by more people (Snape is definitely a bot). I like the teacher's Tiao very much. The image of Tiao has been quite successfully created in many original OC-type articles. He is neither awkward nor obtrusive, and his personality characteristics are very distinctive. Looking forward to the teacher's next novel [Blowing Kiss]

The setting is very novel and feels like something we can do. There are no stereotypes. The various little characters in the book also have their own backgrounds and are not pure tool people. The strategy for the Professor is also super interesting and reasonable. If you want the professor to be attracted, you must have something to offer. The person who can be a double agent to coax Laud is absolutely strong in heart, and he must constantly have novel things to attract attention. The author also has a lot of jokes, but they are not random and they are all very appropriate. If you like sweet articles, please rush.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. The protagonist is fighting and fighting like this. Our ss needs love like a home invasion. He is more passive, forbearing and restrained. He is like a cute mouse who needs to be pushed away. And he is not OOC at all. The character of the protagonist is also very natural. Hey, who knows the sense of fate that the author said "I insist on him falling in love again". Who knows the calmness and confidence with which the protagonist says "Severus, I'm trying to please you" and "I found myself a dog leash". . . Holy shit it's so cute and delicious. . . Wow, ok, ok, ok, it's really good, and the country of China is not obtrusive in this world view, and has a real sense of presence. It's a very good and cute world view. . . There was a lot of interaction, so he broke into SS's world without caring about the life and death of others and took him as his own.

After reading the whole book, my first feeling was that it was so warm. Although the description of the protagonist's oriental setting is a bit too much, but! Seeing that little Harry has many friends and hobbies in the Muggle world, Severus has his own professional research laboratory, the protagonist, Sev and Harry get together every day during family time, Harry has his own room to entertain his friends (whether from the magical world or the Muggle world), and Severus can completely immerse himself in his favorite potions, I feel sincerely happy and happy for them! In fact, in terms of content, I only want to give it about four stars, but the author seems to be very good at describing this very plain and warm feeling. For Severus and Harry who are happier, I give it five stars!

I'm convinced, the author's writing style is so good, the plot is so fresh, the three views are so on point, and Harry is raised so well. What a rare and good article, it is worth randomly replacing a foreign persimmon with a 9.6, Why is it only an 8.1? Is this the pain of not being a hit? Come and see everyone! This article does not ruin the character at all, the pacing is very well controlled, and it eliminates silly misunderstandings and overly lengthy emotional lines. I strongly recommend it 👍, and you will not lose money if you invest in it! ! !

It's great. I actually don't have much patience for slow-burning novels, but this one is just fine. It's a warm and steady love story. Although it is bland, the ambiguity and interludes between the two are still very interesting. There is also the stage when Xiver puts aside his heart when proposing and secretly persuades himself to let go, which is very heartbreaking. He deserves it. No matter what the protagonist does for him, everything is considered by the Lord for him. From the perspective of Seaver, someone who truly loves him and only gives him preference really likes this feeling of being the only one to be pampered. In addition, love cannot be said to be fast or slow, everything happened at the right time. I only saw one thing after the successful proposal. These two people must give me great happiness.

The main plot is now complete after following the update, and the score is really low. The online score should be higher based solely on the smoothness and logic of the writing. Even higher are the emotional lines for Zhou and Si and the "mother-child" line between Zhou and Harry. Zhou Renjian Youwu is cute and proactive. Although he has a "ruthless" setting, he provides the most emotions to the people around him, and even Si Jiao cannot refuse. Appropriately hilarious. The original supporting characters are also great, such as Ms. Lian's tolerance and firmness, and her very Chinese maternal feelings. And the ending is even better than he. Not only did the protagonists live together happily, but they also brought the Sri Lankan teacher back to build the motherland together. Zhou Yu, you are really [like] I want to see how long I have read ~ I would like to add my thoughts by the way. After reading this book and the extras, I feel like I am enjoying the entire fan story through the author's love for the magical world and growing flowers. All are good and all are present.

I have only read a few chapters, but I feel that the logic is quite smooth. When I wrote the Chinese male protagonist, I took into account the national conditions of Laos and China at the time, as well as some political matters. The article was not written just to play a certain joke or to write Sri Lankan fan fiction. I haven't read it yet, but I feel that such a logical author can't write badly.

Ugh, oh, oh, oh~ It is indeed a text that I have been waiting for and counting the days to finish. It really lives up to my expectations~ The main plot is Longlong's pursuit of his wife after he becomes an adult, which fully demonstrates what the proper attitude should be when pursuing a wife! Straight ball dragon dragon yyds! The death of Xiao Ha and Lao Deng is just incidental~ The prequel line is still the same, Sisi's sinister dragon is boiled in warm water, the sunny and happy pink dragon in the if senior line, the green tea loving husband dragon in the if bamboo horse line... But no matter which line it is, let's fight hard~~~ The emotional line is directly stunned, and the other lines are not overly generous. The patriotism is really soft and there is nothing wrong with it. In the 1970s and 1980s, how could someone have the ability but not work hard for national construction? ! There's no problem with a big background setting! Super logical! Very practical! It really gives me a sense of immersion~ Especially at the end, all the details of the magic school in China are written in great detail. Ah~ I have the material for tonight's dream~ I really love it! There are also all kinds of shining female characters among them, wow wow, I really love the souls that have been given to them. They are gradually moving towards a brighter and more dazzling stage to show themselves, instead of changing jobs and joining the family as soon as they graduate. It is really wonderful ~ awesome! ! ! Wow~ The emotional line is crazy, the awakening of the patriotic girls, etc. Are all watching~ I strongly recommend it! ! !

This is simply a masterpiece, so delicious. Teacher, you are really a doujin god. Among all the sev fanfics that are extremely OOC, you are the only ss fanfic that asked me to find three meal replacements in one chapter and then laugh like a baby who was just born by sev. I will always follow you, teacher...

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah it's so sweet and beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. Zhi Qiu Zhou used actions and words to defeat the awkward Sifu and successfully fall in love. Help🆘The language and logic in it are simply the essence, not even an OOC point! ! ! The words felt like they were coming out of their mouths! I really love it! ! ! ! Get more!

It's an excellent book. The writing is smooth and the plot is warm. The male protagonist and SS have the feeling of an old married couple. When I read the book review, I mentioned a little bit about issues like SS having few appearances or being bored in the early stages, but after reading it myself, I didn't feel that it was the case! It's a really gentle article. It's the kind of comfort. I like it very much.

Beautiful writing, madam! ! ! Don't stop updating! I like the character very much😍

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It's good-looking, because there are many detailed behavioral and psychological descriptions, as well as some interesting ideas. The relationship between the new forces is also well balanced. The characters all seem to be flesh-and-blood and have their own distinct personalities, which is rare. Maybe I don't read the book carefully, and I really want to know Zhou Yu (, how it feels to come all the way to meet you, but on the other hand, I am really inferior to you, even the name is so cute). His hair color is dark chestnut, soft and fluffy, his body is strong, but what is his eye color and eye shape?

Ahhhhh, who knows? ! ! ! I really like this fanfic! ! ! After reading dozens of them, I looked at others. It really felt like there was no meal replacement in the entire internet. [Crying] [Crying] It's so beautiful! ! ! ! (I hope the author can write more, I really like it so much [crying]) To be honest, after reading it again, I feel that it is not worth the score, and I have never been able to find it before. If I hadn't found it accidentally, I would have almost missed it! ! ! ! The whole text has very clear ideas. There is no bloody plot. What needs to be said is straight forward and there is no misunderstanding. I felt really comfortable reading it! [Cry]

This article is really sweet. The character of the male protagonist is very interesting and very powerful. I feel that the character design of Snape is also well grasped. Basically, it doesn't feel OOC, and Harry is also raised very well [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I would like to add that the writing is good and the scenes described are vivid and smooth. For example, some cute character interactions, as well as action descriptions, emotional descriptions, etc.

It doesn't sound like a drama at all. Whether it's Chinese identity or national stance, it's well balanced. The emotional line is also very natural. Harry is also really attentive. It's good.

I have always said I wanted to comment, but I have always forgotten. Today I finally thought of commenting. The writing is very cute and cute. Everyone is very happy. All in all, highly recommended. The plot is very warm and cute, and everyone feels happy, but what impressed me most was not the protagonist's love and Harry's happy growth. What impressed me most was actually Rita Skeeter. This is the cutest Rita Skeeter I have ever seen. The author's writing is so cute. The plot that impressed me the most was when Severus went to find the protagonist, the protagonist was spraying Rita. After spraying, the scene where a beetle flew out dejectedly was really graphic and very cute. Because I'm reading two of the author's works at the same time, I sometimes get confused about some of the plots, but both books written by the author are very cute. I hope the author will work hard and update another work. There are no weird points. As long as you can accept that Severus has a partner and that he is a subordinate, anyone who accepts OCS can basically accept the feeling of this book. The arrangements for everyone are also in place.

Yum, yum, yum! The main character is full of sugar and has no knife. He is super funny and his relationship with Sri Lanka is also very smooth [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Superb writing! The porridge is really Aisijiao (ok, it goes both ways), and it's a straight shot without any bloody links! No misunderstanding, great. After reading this, I can no longer look at other fanfics. The writing is so natural!

The content is great and the pace of the article is appropriate. The plot is very happy and light-hearted. It is really rare for Si to teach such a happy teacher. This is also a very important reason why I can persist in reading Harry Potter fanfics. It's awesome [like] [like] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss], please continue to update [send heart] [send heart]

I think it's very interesting, the plot is smooth and not retarded, and the descriptions are very good. Love is real, the description is beautiful, unobtrusive and expressive Finally, there are normal Chinese people, find the embassy! Giving a thought report [face covering] and interspersed with the plot of China's rise, the light of Sifu, the potion master, can really shine. Harry is also loved and has relatives. Hermione got married right after graduation and has a broader perspective. Even the anti-slavery struggle of the house elves was mentioned. According to our national conditions [laughing][laughing]

I have to say that this is one of my favorite Sri Lankan CP books. It's rare. I didn't skip any chapter in the middle and read the full text. I really can't write a book review. I closed my eyes when I finished the article.