Harry Potter Fanfiction: Soulful Pleasure

The author's writing style and writing style are quite good, and the description of emotions is not too abrupt. With the author's ability, he can write fictional characters, but now, I personally feel that the creation of Sri Lanka is not very successful (of course, it is not that the author is not good, it just feels a bit OOC, these are personal opinions and let's discuss it with everyone) 🥲🥲🥲🥲 1. Slytherin should be an indifferent or even cold-blooded person. Slytherin may be a bit cold-blooded. This can be seen from the fact that he never helps others, is not close to anyone, and is even a bit gloomy. Moreover, he does not have the tall and upright outlook of Wei Guangzheng. 2. He has a relatively high desire for power, including following Voldemort when he was a non-pure blood. His own strength as a potion master was enough for him to prove himself, but he was not satisfied and has been following Voldemort. I guess the ultimate goal is to follow capable people to gain higher rights and status. It can also be seen here that he is very cold. He is indifferent to the death of other wizards, as long as he can reach the top. He can be said to be a very classic desire-based villain, but in the end Rowling added a love halo to him, making him bound to "normal morality". His tragedy also lies in his "love". Rather than saying that he "loves" Lily, it is better to say that he "loves" the innocent past that was not bullied and suppressed and gradually became darker. In addition, Lily died because of him, and he felt very sad and guilty. 3. Although he is full of emotions, he is not good at expressing them. You can tell from his attitude towards Lily that he didn't even express a trace of love from beginning to end, because he was dark, selfish, cold-blooded and sensitive. He could feel the change in Lily's attitude towards him, so he didn't even say "like", so after Lily died, his patronus became a doe. Dumbledore asked him when he became like this, and he answered "always". The above points are just the most prominent points. As well as his spicy language, winter-like momentum, and his mentality, I think the author's description is a bit off. (I'm not disparaging, I just want the author to refer to it.) Let's analyze some slightly OOC issues in the article: he should be more disgusted with being coerced and even have murderous intentions, so when the male protagonist threatens him with Potter, he should use verbal taunts and personal attacks to protect himself, and even say "What does the savior have to do with me?" Because Harry is a combination of people he loves and hates, he is contradictory. He hates James' "brave, straightforward, and passionate" qualities in Harry, because he himself has nothing to do with such words, and Lily fell in love with James because of these. In the eyes of Sri Lanka, these words represent "impulsiveness, stupidity, and overestimation." It can be seen from his behavior of describing those lower-grade students as "trolls" that he himself is arrogant and arrogant. He has a cold-looking sarcasm and belittlement of ordinary people, and is more hostile and malicious toward talented people, because he has never worshiped anyone, including Voldemort. He is self-centered and dark. Snape is very aggressive, he can even taunt Dumbledore, so he will not show mercy to the male protagonist. If the male protagonist is really hanging in the bathroom and remains motionless, he will only add a real thing that cannot be untied and petrify him. There will be no shame like dragging him out or feeling embarrassed, because he does not care about the eyes of these "trolls". As an extremely self-centered and power-hungry villain, the reason why he is restrained is only Lily, not Potter. I wrote a lot, but in fact many paragraphs should be integrated together, it is a bit illogical, but since it is a literary review, it was written in a hurry, so let's make do with it. In fact, I like the protagonist's character very much, and some of the author's settings are also very interesting (I have only read episode 23 so far, and I really can't help but comment on it. If it is different in the future, you can also discuss it. On the topic, gentle spray 🥹), the treatment of some subtle details can make people feel the loose love bubble, which makes people feel heart-beating. However, Si Jiao's reaction when he met Si Jiao was a bit wrong. If he could write about Si Jiao, who is dark and damp, proud of his talents, duplicitous, and constantly deconstructing himself in the struggle, it should be more touching. I look forward to the author's performance. 😙😘🥰 Another: My child is in a literature shortage. Can anyone recommend novels? Any genre is acceptable. I have reached the point where I am not averse to men and women. I'm adding a five-star review. I just joined Tomatoes before. I didn't know that it's better to give five stars to book reviews here. I'm sorry for lowering the author's rating. Overall, it's readable. The logic online is good and the writing is good. You can check it out😙😙😙. I haven't finished this one. I just remembered it recently. Although the characters are not to my taste and I haven't finished it, the content is pretty good. Otherwise, I wouldn't write a book review. Take a look, kids.🤓

Super pretty! ! ! A straight-ball puppy with a lot of love × an awkward little bat who craves a lot of love, a perfect match! ! ! My wife perfectly interpreted the characters of the two people, which is great! Zhou Tiao pressed forward step by step. Snape resisted intellectually, but emotionally could not resist, until he finally sank soberly. The emotional pull between the two people is simply amazing. They seem to be in love, but in fact they are both in love! ! ! Moreover, Gong's outlook on life was extremely upright, and the days of living together made Harry become a better and happier person.

I have been following this book for a long time. This is the one I have read that uses Severus' potions to their full potential. Every Severus is loved well in the fanfic, I think, this is the point of the fanfic. I wish Theo's Severus Snape happiness in this world and Theo.

Super delicious, it would be better if you could see the details of their "happy" life after marriage In addition to being a love brain when facing SS, the rest of the time is a dual-business online politics. Rule. Born. The protagonist of the thing. I'm attracted to him unconsciously, but I can't trust the professor who has a pessimistic attitude towards everything. This tug-of-war between the two sides is full of tension, and it is not primarily a tug on the professor's reason and emotion. The protagonist is a straight-shooting and awkward player who captures the professor step by step.

It was a book that I clicked on and read because it had been recommended more than ten times because of its ridiculous title. I read it in two days and it was really exciting. Not counting OOC, I understand that Snape is also a very strong, motivated and ambitious person who will give up his own interests for the ones he loves. He doesn't care about the boundaries of justice and only recognizes the things or people he cares about, so it is difficult to refuse when he is treated wholeheartedly. I understand. The whole story is a relatively complete story, and the characters are really lovable. It is rare to find a cp article that does not contradict the positions of the snake and the lion. No one is blackmailed. Dumbledore has given his trust, Lily is beautiful alone, Irene is redeemed, and even Voldemort is written in a silly and dull way, not too evil. (After reading it in one sitting, I couldn't tell the details of the extra chapter. The extra chapter is also very interesting!) The only regret is Harry's love affair... I can eat any cp. I hope the author will write more about Deha in the next book.

I very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very much like the teacher's writing. I like sweet young lovers living a happy life. This is how SS's talent should shine. I have always hoped to see SS's abilities being fully utilized in fan fiction. The field that I am really interested in. A capable person should be seen by more people (Snape is definitely a bot). I like the teacher's Tiao very much. The image of Tiao has been quite successfully created in many original OC-type articles. He is neither awkward nor obtrusive, and his personality characteristics are very distinctive. Looking forward to the teacher's next novel [Blowing Kiss]

It's a good read. I was hooked in the first chapter. The author wrote about the subtle feeling of the professor seeing Tiao again after so many years (something must have happened between them). Theo is very sensitive to the professor's emotions and can always detect the professor's emotions in time and solve them neatly. I like their various intimate names and kisses, as well as the friendly interactions between them. They are a sticky little couple😘. The author writes superbly, and I wish them more and more happiness!

The setting is very novel and feels like something we can do. There are no stereotypes. The various little characters in the book also have their own backgrounds and are not pure tool people. The strategy for the Professor is also super interesting and reasonable. If you want the professor to be attracted, you must have something to offer. The person who can be a double agent to coax Laud is absolutely strong in heart, and he must constantly have novel things to attract attention. The author also has a lot of jokes, but they are not random and they are all very appropriate. If you like sweet articles, please rush.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. The protagonist is fighting and fighting like this. Our ss needs love like a home invasion. He is more passive, forbearing and restrained. He is like a cute mouse who needs to be pushed away. And he is not OOC at all. The character of the protagonist is also very natural. Hey, who knows the sense of fate that the author said "I insist on him falling in love again". Who knows the calmness and confidence with which the protagonist says "Severus, I'm trying to please you" and "I found myself a dog leash". . . Holy shit it's so cute and delicious. . . Wow, ok, ok, ok, it's really good, and the country of China is not obtrusive in this world view, and has a real sense of presence. It's a very good and cute world view. . . There was a lot of interaction, so he broke into SS's world without caring about the life and death of others and took him as his own.

After reading the whole book, my first feeling was that it was so warm. Although the description of the protagonist's oriental setting is a bit too much, but! Seeing that little Harry has many friends and hobbies in the Muggle world, Severus has his own professional research laboratory, the protagonist, Sev and Harry get together every day during family time, Harry has his own room to entertain his friends (whether from the magical world or the Muggle world), and Severus can completely immerse himself in his favorite potions, I feel sincerely happy and happy for them! In fact, in terms of content, I only want to give it about four stars, but the author seems to be very good at describing this very plain and warm feeling. For Severus and Harry who are happier, I give it five stars!