The Long Road to Immortality in the Apocalypse

Four stars to myself haha. The first book did have a lot of shortcomings. If this book is compared to a game, it must be a game with a large map and many monsters, but not enough challenge and excitement; The most fatal thing is the connection of the plot, the characterization of the characters and the refreshing design. Regarding these three points, frankly speaking, even after writing the third book, Lao Qing still hasn't found the trick. I really don't understand how those great Internet writers can be so proficient in the first book? Maybe I have to write the 67th, 890th online article before I can achieve the success of the great gods? 😏 Maybe the AI writer will be mature enough before I can develop, and a Level 2 writer like me will have no motivation to continue writing. Four stars does not mean how beautiful the book is, but it is an encouragement to myself. Even if the data in the past ten months has been bleak, I did not choose to end it hastily and always worked hard to write it. Thanks for your efforts!

I feel pretty good after reading Chapter 16. I have read some bad novels for more than ten years. Those with higher scores may not necessarily be better than this one. Some places are a bit verbose. This is probably my problem. I hope the score can go up.

It's pretty good. Why is there no one here? Are they all reading the mindless and cool articles?

Four stars. Judging from the name, it seems to be my favorite type. Unfortunately, I have read about twenty chapters, and I don't have a strong sense of personal involvement. Not enough characterization