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It's still good, but the character of the protagonist is a bit silly. What's wrong with playing Magikarp in a gym match? Pokemon can't. Hit the gym. There is also something I want to see. The protagonist beats Mewtwo. Can you give the protagonist a shared elf ability? After all, the kaleidoscope is so handsome. I also want a dream. Ghost Dragon and. Rayquaza

If there are any bad points in the writing, you can comment on Xigua. I will think about whether they can be corrected, or if there are pitfalls to be piled up, you can also mention them. I have also changed the bad points mentioned by the previous readers. For example, the plot of giving away a daughter is not actually giving away a daughter. Mainly because the author had not yet considered whether to have a harem in the early stages, so this misunderstanding arose (deleted). It was only about 50 chapters later that he decided to open a harem. In Chapter 54, the succubus attribute appeared, and he could completely open a harem. We are considering changing the age. If you are not satisfied, please contact the author to discuss it. Xigua is very talkative and will basically change it if you see it. As for the previous negative review about Invincibility, in fact, the author was referring to the protagonist at the beginning, not Pokémon. Haha, I misunderstood. There are only so many poisonous points at present, and everything that can be changed has been changed.

Well written, not bad

The author's writing is wonderful, but I hope the author also has a Pikachu in the back

So wonderful, so beautiful

Good, very good, very good