Naruto: the Vortex of Evil

Your illusion world might as well be called a parallel world. The illusion world is something that you need to understand. Obito, how can a technique that you have never known be irradiated into the illusion?

So good, it's my favorite menma

It feels okay, but it doesn't mean I have to be a bad person to become Menma.

Good, good, good, three good, other words cannot express my love for this book. This is a fairy tale in the world, but the author updates it too slowly, which is a fly in the ointment. I suggest you read the reviews. Only when you see it yourself can you discover its beauty.

Overall it's pretty good, the emotional line is the best, there's no sense of dissonance, it's very natural, unlike other fandoms where Hinata is too negative or very unrealistic, the characters are quite rich, when writing the plot, there's no soiling, the author's views are pretty upright, and he has a certain writing style. Recommended to raise a book 1 is because the preparation time is too long. 2. The main plot is just about to start but it hasn't started yet. 3. Less content in each chapter The plot has finally made progress. To be honest, the writing has been pretty good recently, but the protagonist's role is a bit less, and it lacks a bit of excitement. However, based on the character of the protagonist, it really has to be written like this. However, the shortcomings are also obvious, and the rating is quite low. This book should be good in the end.

It looks good. I hope I don't write about other power systems. Naruto's power system is enough.

Another Mian Ma book can go to the original world, I must support it, it's good to read

I like this kind of article very much

Not bad~very good-looking~[Like]

Looks good, feels good

New book warm genius

This book does it.

Come on, enrich the plot

Well written, keep it up

Pretty good. There isn't much original plot. The protagonist goes his own way.

It's a very interesting Naruto fanfic. It's the first time I've seen a Naruto fanfic written from Menma's perspective. It's very good. I hope it can be maintained [smirk]

It feels pretty good.

It's okay. I feel like it's progressing very quickly. I don't have anything to write about later.

If Kaguya's infinite Tsukuyomi can generate the world, then Naruto's combat power will be even higher!

Waiting for the follow-up, I can only give 4 stars now. I always feel that there are some shortcomings, right! It's a fight

If you like it very much, be sure to write it down.

Nothing to say, come on Forget it, let's wait until Kaguya's problem is solved. It would have been good.

What I wrote at the beginning was pretty good, but the style of writing changed later.

It's good to watch, I love watching it, I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot, I must catch up to the end! [Top post] [Please update]