The road is full of competition, if you don't advance, you will retreat!
Lin Minglu, ranked 117,526th among the outer disciples of the Shangqing Dao, brought a game panel to this great world of Xuanhuang where the Immortal Dao flourished.
A true immortal who has achieved enlightenment under one person, a giant of demons from outside the world, a peerless genius and tens of thousands of people are fighting to become immortals. You just finish singing and I will appear on the stage. The vast white land is really clean.
What a glorious and splendid immortal world with countless graves!
Reader comments
I don't understand why the rating is so low. There is nothing to say about the writing and plot, but there are also some ideas.
To be honest, it's just a little bit of poison. I think it's something that can be ignored once you realize it.
I like this book, it has unlimited potential
The protagonist is not arrogant but has pride. He is a cultivator rather than a villain.
This is worthy of the carefree appearance of traveling across the sea.
It really looks like an ancient immortal, instead of pretending to be a novel about cultivating immortals now, it is actually a novel about people rather than immortals.
Absolutely magical grass
Tomato is one of those rare articles where the characters in the narrative are clear and normal.
The highlight is that Shangqing and Shen Kyoto are well written
However, many places make people feel that they are superficial, but the flaws do not hide the advantages.
Well, looking at it so far, it's still very good. I feel that this worldview is relatively perfectly constructed, and the character of the protagonist. I feel that there is no fairy-like feeling in the writing. It gives me the feeling that they have changed again, and his character really feels like you did not write it. Anyway, this is the worldview, and I feel that you wrote it very well.
Ups and downs, wonderful plot.
That's awesome. I thought I was watching "The Road Goes Alone". Tomato still has such a big world view.
Author, you are finally back [crying] I am waiting to pursue your book
It's okay, but there won't be any ups and downs later on. Also, don't revise the book all the time, or you won't be able to finish revising the book and then post it, one thing a day.
This book gives me the feeling that if it is really possible to become an immortal, this might be what the world in which you practice should look like.
It's so good. It's rare to find a novel on Tomato that I can read slowly without skipping a beat. The writing is very good, the plot is very novel, and the world view is grand. It's so beautiful!
It's good to read, it's good to read, I've never seen a book like this on Tomato [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
Well written. It really writes a great world of cultivating immortals. That kind of immortal noble being. In the real world of immortality, come on, I hope it will get better and better and not collapse.
Pretty good to be honest
Food and grass, but the pace is relatively gentle
Looks good, come on, support
Okay, the best on tomatoes
I actually found a book of grain and grass in Tomato.
It's pretty (♥∀♥), but it's a bit sparse, so I need to keep it up.
This book is similar to one I've read before, and it's pretty good.
It's beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] The author really wrote about a great world
I found a novel worth pursuing.
Good looking! !
The protagonist has a good personality, very calm, but also proud.
And the plot development is also very smooth and unconventional.
I hope the author will update every day! !
Okay, it expresses the feeling of cultivating immortality and is not conventional.
It's my first time watching this world view of Xianpin. It's very comfortable to watch.
It's nice to watch. [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] The writing is very good, and the characters and world view are very good. Come on [love][love][love][love]
It's pretty, but a little lacking.
I don't know what to say but I quite like it. Come on, author.
It's good, but there are too many "black eyes"...
It's very big and feels like a cultivator. The world is big
I don't understand why the rating is so low. There is nothing to say about the writing and plot, but there are also some ideas. To be honest, it's just a little bit of poison. I think it's something that can be ignored once you realize it. I like this book, it has unlimited potential
The protagonist is not arrogant but has pride. He is a cultivator rather than a villain. This is worthy of the carefree appearance of traveling across the sea. It really looks like an ancient immortal, instead of pretending to be a novel about cultivating immortals now, it is actually a novel about people rather than immortals.
Absolutely magical grass Tomato is one of those rare articles where the characters in the narrative are clear and normal. The highlight is that Shangqing and Shen Kyoto are well written However, many places make people feel that they are superficial, but the flaws do not hide the advantages.
Well, looking at it so far, it's still very good. I feel that this worldview is relatively perfectly constructed, and the character of the protagonist. I feel that there is no fairy-like feeling in the writing. It gives me the feeling that they have changed again, and his character really feels like you did not write it. Anyway, this is the worldview, and I feel that you wrote it very well.
Ups and downs, wonderful plot.
That's awesome. I thought I was watching "The Road Goes Alone". Tomato still has such a big world view.
Author, you are finally back [crying] I am waiting to pursue your book
It's okay, but there won't be any ups and downs later on. Also, don't revise the book all the time, or you won't be able to finish revising the book and then post it, one thing a day.
This book gives me the feeling that if it is really possible to become an immortal, this might be what the world in which you practice should look like.
It's so good. It's rare to find a novel on Tomato that I can read slowly without skipping a beat. The writing is very good, the plot is very novel, and the world view is grand. It's so beautiful!
It's good to read, it's good to read, I've never seen a book like this on Tomato [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
Well written. It really writes a great world of cultivating immortals. That kind of immortal noble being. In the real world of immortality, come on, I hope it will get better and better and not collapse.
Pretty good to be honest
Food and grass, but the pace is relatively gentle
Looks good, come on, support
Okay, the best on tomatoes
I actually found a book of grain and grass in Tomato.
It's pretty (♥∀♥), but it's a bit sparse, so I need to keep it up.
This book is similar to one I've read before, and it's pretty good.
It's beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] The author really wrote about a great world
I found a novel worth pursuing.
Good looking! ! The protagonist has a good personality, very calm, but also proud. And the plot development is also very smooth and unconventional. I hope the author will update every day! !
Okay, it expresses the feeling of cultivating immortality and is not conventional.
It's my first time watching this world view of Xianpin. It's very comfortable to watch.
It's nice to watch. [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] The writing is very good, and the characters and world view are very good. Come on [love][love][love][love]
It's pretty, but a little lacking.
I don't know what to say but I quite like it. Come on, author.
It's good, but there are too many "black eyes"...
It's very big and feels like a cultivator. The world is big
One of the few good writings by Tomato