Transformation: Vampire Girl

When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will cause illness later. When you watch the second watch, a little patience is born. The progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are at the third watch, Wei Mo praises began to flow, and the number of dead harvests began to decrease. When you are five o'clock When , readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder bright. When you were at the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates were deafening and tolerant. The attitude is implemented internally and externally. When you were twenty, the bookworm's memories There is a place for you, even in this long life, your name will always be there It will leave a dazzling mark. Update. Might not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

(A thousand people have a thousand hakimi, don't complain if you don't like it) 1. The author's introduction and title of the book may be more novel or include content that the book's audience wants to read. In modern fast-food online literature, most readers do not have enough time to read, so it is very important whether the introduction and title are attractive. I clicked on this book three or four times but did not read it. Of course, true gold is not afraid of fire, and a good book is unlikely to be eliminated because the introduction and title are not attractive, but the author's writing skills should not be that good? 2. Is the slow heating in the label too slow? Reading it now feels like reading a Boruto biography (bushi, I didn't notice the growth of the protagonist, and I even felt a little useless, and I felt sulky in my heart after reading it (Okay, this violent comment is a bit excessive, I apologize on my knees (ಥ_ಥ) 3. The author doesn't seem to be good at writing fight scenes, so when I saw the fights, I felt no Polishness at all, and the emotional scenes were a bit weird. For example, did Ono fall in love with the protagonist a little too quickly? I think the author needs to learn from others when it comes to stickers. I've read that stickers in other books are about to take off, but this book has no ripples. (If the author doesn't like it, I will delete it(´;;`)

New books are on the shelves, come and see her, come and see her [shy][shy][shy]

It's okay, you can see it. Or can I change my name? The life of an innocent boy in another world? It's quite speechless just to change back and forth. I'm female by gender, male at heart, and I like women. That's fine. To be honest, it was really uncomfortable to watch the back and forth, and then Bai Lingxi and Bai Di reminded me of the second personality next door. I came here to see the back and forth between posts and posts. It didn't take long and it was outrageous.

It's pretty good. Except for changing it here and there, it would be perfect if it was finalized earlier.

It's so embarrassing🤓👍, all the protagonist's girlfriends are cute, the protagonist himself, Angel and Pink Hair are my favorites, it's embarrassing! It's just that it's too slow. If you do it faster, there will be great scholars who can debate the scriptures for you.

It suits my taste quite well

It's quite good. At least so far, it's pretty good as a casual article.

My evaluation is no evaluation

Very good book but no one

It's okay, but in some places it feels like the protagonist looks like a rogue [Thinking][Thinking] It would be better for the author to change it [Thinking][Thinking]

I'm here to add praise, the author is alive! He also liked my comments several times! [Laugh]

The content is relatively new and better than the traditional ones. Anyway, it's very good. Anyway, I don't know how to put it. I don't want to say it's systematic. Anyway, I feel very good.

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

When will you become an angel?

It's beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?

It's very good, the plot is coherent, the characters are rich in emotions, and the plot is interesting and funny. It's really a masterpiece, I believe it will be a hit! What a great and intriguing story.

That's good, but author, have you forgotten that the protagonist can learn other people's abilities three times?

It has dug a big hole for the protagonist, who knows if the author will run away [face covering]

It looks good, but I just wanted to ask when the male lead will be offline [laughing evilly]

@Cai Will the gender of the protagonist change again in the future? I'm going to find my parents! Haha, have a good trip, Liang Yechen!

I like it, it's that simple

Looks good, give it a good review

I think it's really good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Used to kill boring time

Look! Come on, support!

Super invincible and beautiful

Not bad, but it ended hastily

Happy, I don't know why, just happy