I Can Cash In My Kills [Esports]

When I was in a book shortage, I met an underage book reader. Overall, it's good. I prefer watching this type of movie. Although games take up a larger proportion, I can still understand it.

Hahaha 😁 I'm still short on game writing after reading this. But if you like games, you can check it out. It's quite interesting. It's mostly plot-heavy. I haven't developed my career yet. When will the sweet romance come out?

The author just dug out the resistance and I jumped in 😢

The writing is good, a rare author like Tomato. The male and female protagonists have full personalities and lovable characters. The supporting characters also have their own characteristics, and everyone is very cute (ps: except for the foul-mouthed Heizi). The current plot is not bloody, routine, or templated. It is very well written. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will continue to follow it until the finale!!

If female players weren't one level better, they wouldn't be able to play at all. As long as they lose the game, I can't imagine how hacked they will be. I suggest you take a look at the setting of the book "LOL Top Lane Queen". There will definitely be some ideas.

Looks great ~ Looking forward to the next games

❤️Although I can't understand it, it's still so cool❤️

A novel book, come on!

It's nice to watch. The game process is not just skipped in one sentence but written in great detail. The male and female protagonists have very good personalities and their teammates are also very cute. Moreover, the setting of the female wild king is really touching!

Some pacing suggestions - just suggestions Baozi, the article has its ups and downs to make it exciting. Our favorite point is that there is no big problem with the technical performance of the heroine, but in terms of the interaction between the characters, there are too few ups and downs throughout, and it is too dark. Xining and his parents, Chelizi and his parents, Xiao Zhou and his parents, the interactions between bad netizens and bad teammates are all in down tone. This is reality, this is the truth, but it accounts for too much, it seems too depressing without breathing, and the proportion is a bit out of balance. For example, there is really no need to take up so much space for the stinky remarks made by netizens, which will affect the perception a bit. It can be replaced by one or two ellipses, and then summarized by saying that there are countless such stinky remarks, and then there will be more interaction between teammates, normal human interaction in the live broadcast room, and a slightly warmer tone. (Suggestions given only from the reader's perspective) Moreover, everyone scolded everyone in the passerby game, which seemed to make the game a bit stereotyped. (The guy who was scolding had too strong a presence and there were too many shots) Then here are some reading feelings and thoughts—— I really felt depressed after reading this article. As a female gamer myself, I know that these are facts, and I have deliberately avoided certain potential possibilities - choosing a "funny and nonsensical" name to weaken my identity as a female gamer, never filling out my identity card, and ignoring anyone who adds me as a friend for no reason. I have also been scolded as a "wooden hook", but maybe I have a better mentality. I can recognize these kind of prejudiced players (I completely accept scolding me for being a bad guy), and I don't treat them as normal people, so it's okay - I can either scold them back or ignore the clowns. For me, why should I argue with a character like a gangster? Maybe this is very tasteless to me. Being mentally strong is the first step to dealing with gender bashing.