Naruto: Something's Not Right with This Hinata!

This is the only way to rate this thing about licking Uchiha Itachi

How to say? It's hard to evaluate. It must be admitted that this is an excellent Naruto fanfic. Most of the time, the logic is online, and it is based on the world of Naruto. Although the combat power exceeds the standard, the author "tenaciously" controls the protagonist's actions, so the combat power is not a collapse, but the frequency of "cool points" has dropped significantly, which is dissatisfying. Similarly, due to the protagonist's extensive "inaction" and "maintenance" of the original plot, the novel is highly "similar" to the original work in many places. There are not so many differences, there are not enough novelties and associations, and the plot is not interesting enough.

It's okay, better than most Naruto stories Ever since I met Tsunade, giving welfare to the masses has become a 6

The writing is very good, but when I saw Tsunade's part, I lost all interest. 5 Points for encouragement.

The plot was okay, but in the last few scenes, I was stunned that Kaguya was taken into the harem. I thought I would simply convince Kaguya to join the fight against Shiba Otsutsuki [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

The normal rating is 3 stars, but because Tsunade was pregnant and gave birth to a daughter, I gave it 5 stars. I have read many fics where Tsunade is the heroine, and they are all infertile.

A book that uses modern Chinese medicine to explain the chakra-ridden ninja world is correct but feels wrong, but it makes sense. After all, cells have been talking about science since the first generation. If you combine Hinata Uchiha (eyes), Kaguya (bones), Uzumaki (blood), and Senju (skin), you can create a pseudo-Otsutsuki. The five elements of yin and yang are just short of the original genes of Toneri Otsutsuki. Moreover, Danzo was really comfortable when he died after only a few chapters. The protagonist has the strength and will not grind away. If he gets bored, he will just kill him.

To open a harem, there is absolutely no need for me to ascend to heaven. I just say that I, the Taoist, will never have an overnight feud.

Ah, is this blocked? Why can't I click on it in the comments?

Okay, okay, just with this small horse and big cart, you are a five-star. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

In fact, the culprit of most tragedies in Naruto is Obito Ningchiha, followed by Madara Ningchiha, Black Zetsu, Tobirama Senju, Danzo, Itachi Ningchiha, and then Hashirama Senju who were too idealistic, Hiruzen Sarutobi and others for their inaction. Senju Tobirama is right about the inherently evil Ning Zhibo brat. Ning Zhibo people are involved in all the tragedies of Naruto.

The plot of the whole book is brisk and enjoyable to read, and the word count is not enough. It is fast when it should be, slow when it should be, and the plot is very exciting at the same time. However, the writing of the final battle is a bit delayed. I personally feel that it is delayed, but it is also very good. The ending is smooth, there is no bad ending, and there are no pitfalls. Keep up the good work, the author! ! !

I have watched hundreds of Naruto movies, so I give this one five stars [smile]

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good Naruto novel. I remember that the last one I read was 800 Naruto. When I read Naruto, I just read one thought. The original novel was very depressing. It's pointless to read a fanfic if you don't like it. The author's writing style is also very good and he's a great talent.

The content is very creative. The Five Elements Cultivation is integrated into the world of Naruto, and the protagonist has many creative methods. At present, the heroine should be Tsunade (Hinata is also possible, well, I haven't seen too much yet) Chapter 72, it's confirmed that Hinata is also the heroine, but the two heroines are 40 years apart. . . Emm, the protagonist's immortality cultivation method has also been taught to Tsunade. I guess it won't be a big problem if the life span is extended.

Everything else is good, the character strength and rhythm are good, and there are not too many conspiracy theories and salvation missions. The only two problems are that both currency and various measurement units have to be reduced by one zero. The two and yen in the original work are one to ten, and here they are converted to one to one. Then the real heroine is Hinata, who ended up having an affair with Tsunade first, and they have a daughter. The two heroines later reconciled without any Shura field, which is not bad, but it is a bit awkward at the beginning.

It's actually pretty good. Very interesting. . The reason why I only gave it four stars is that the heroine is a strong hand. . I really don't understand why it has to be her? Not good at muting? Does red smell good? Red beans are not fun? Xiaonan is unhappy? Isn't Tian Tian Ino soft? Hinata is not old?

For me, this book can still be read, but the protagonist's current strength is a bit confusing and I don't know the specific level. Come on, author!

Yes, the 8.4 Points are a bit toxic, but I can accept it. If someone reads it, I think the 8.9 Points can still be achieved.

Overall, it's pretty good. The first part is pretty good, but the second part just keeps following the original plot.

Except for these things on the timeline, everything else is pretty good. The writing is delicate and the ideas are clear and the goals are clear [Like][Like][Like]

Will the daughter of the author's hero find a man in the future?

Not bad but a bit short

Okay, domineering, cool and good-looking

See how many hours you have watched

Not bad, it is a qualified and refreshing article.

The progress is relatively fast. I follow the original main line and make my own changes. It's not bad.

I personally like to watch it, support it with five stars, and cheer for it

It's a bit interesting, a different kind of Naruto worth watching

OK, but not what I like