The Real Young Master Comes Home and Slaps Everyone in the Face

Emmm... In fact, according to my own standards, it should be three or four stars, but the author has just started writing, so I would like to encourage him [sending my heart] The following are the advantages: 1. The father has brains, is a sober person, and is a great culprit. It is very enjoyable. It is rare to see a father who is not a scumbag and has brains, and he will help the protagonist in a vague way. 2 The protagonist has a brain, a force, a mouth, a little brother, and no! Lack! Like! 3 The protagonists and supporting characters have distinct and full personalities, each with their own characteristics. There are still advantages to be developed The following are suggestions: 1. Since you have just started the article, you can give a background introduction or add a tag, "abo + awakening object + true and false young master + cannon fodder that wears books + cannon fodder that has been reborn four times + slap in the face" 2. It is recommended not to appear too late (if it is for the rationality of the plot, then pretend that I didn't say anything) 3. The introduction can be more concise. 4. It is recommended to add an introduction to the character before and after his appearance, such as the protagonist's family (especially the second brother) So far, I can see that there are no big surprises. The article is very cool and can be edited. The author will update soon! Come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This article is not bad. It is an interstellar article. The rich family at the beginning was replaced by dozens of children. It really shocked me. There are so many real and fake young masters, but there are only a few appearances so far. The main character, Shangyang, has a great character. He will not wrong himself and is not lacking in love. He is a very normal person. Kaiyang's father, the head of the Ming family, is also a normal person with brains. I like him even more, but Kaiyang still I often encounter a bunch of stupid people, as well as Ming Xiyue Qingran, the two reborn people who have no good intentions towards Kaiyang. Kaiyang is really in trouble, but he has not suffered any injustice. The CP of this article is the uncle, and now the uncle has appeared. Just looking at Kaiyang's description of the uncle, I am so obsessed with Xia Qingyan and Kaiyang. I look forward to the reunion between uncle and Kaiyang!

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Finally, there is a normal person, not a real and fake young master who is a doormat and a loser.

It's a cool article. I can't tell if you have any brains. But the modal particles are too frequent, and it's really uncomfortable to watch [laughing and crying] Everyone adds "ah" when speaking...

I think the first two-thirds are better to watch, and are often very funny. The few normal people in the bloody world are incompatible with those people🤣. The male protagonist has a very good character. He doesn't suffer anyway, and he doesn't pretend to be a man. The emotional line is relatively weak. There is cp, but it can be regarded as without cp.

A very good article, with a particularly exciting beginning that captures the reader's heart. The author's writing style is delicate and the characters are well-depicted. It is an enjoyable article. I look forward to the follow-up. Cheers to the author!

It is a novel interstellar novel. So many children were exchanged. I was attracted by the beginning. The author's writing style is smooth and the story is compact and interesting. It is very beautiful! Worth reading Read more! So wonderful

This is a refreshing article with a unique concept. The author has profound writing skills, fluent language, full and vivid character descriptions, and the ups and downs of the story. It is very interesting and worth recommending!

What a great novel! I keep reading and can't let go...