Prehistoric Green Bamboo Road

After reading more than 30 chapters, the author's writing is pretty good and the rhythm is relatively steady. In fact, it is not easy for Zhunti to restore the West in traditional prehistoric novels. With the addition of the protagonist, I feel a lot more relaxed. Later on, Zhunti probably won't let go of his saintly appearance and say things like "this thing has a destiny with the West", right?

The plot of this novel is somewhat different from traditional prehistoric novels. For example, Hongyun becomes the "Great Emperor of Fengdu", which is different from other previous novels where Hongyun becomes the Three Emperors. It feels pretty good.

It has a great prehistoric flavor and there are no conspiracy theories, which I like very much. The details are well researched, but some parts are written that I feel would be skipped. For example, the plot of Chang'e flying to the moon is not included in the Lich War.

Fellow Taoists, please stay and let the shameless Taoist himself rate my work [laughs] First of all, thank you fellow Taoists for taking the time to read it! Everyone is welcome to speak freely and make comments. Whether it is omissions in the plot or errors in words and sentences, please feel free to correct me - poor people must carefully edit and edit, and strive to make everyone read it comfortably and happily!

The author has a deep understanding of Buddhist teachings, a profound understanding of the ancient times, and the writing is very good.

Now that I have read Chapter 44, it seems that the plot is not bad at the moment, but I would like to make two suggestions: 1. I feel that the pace in the early sermon and lich period is a bit fast, but it can be slower later on. 2. I feel that some paragraphs in chapters 20 to 35 are too long. They can be divided into paragraphs to make it easier to read.

The setting is quite fresh. The perspective of building the West and becoming the third saint in the West is quite rare.

The concept of ten thousand monuments and boundary bridges in the protagonist's inner world to feed back the prehistoric times is good.

It's still okay to write After further review, I saw some comments in the book. The author really listened to the advice and immediately changed it after the readers said it [laughter]

To be honest, the writing is okay. I like this kind of ancient novel without a heroine and no system.

Enough to pass the time

It looks effortless. Clear logic

If you keep pursuing it, your writing will be innovative.

Okay, I can only say that it is not suitable for tomatoes.

It's good not to criticize Hongjun and the saint's prehistoric novels

I really like Hongjun's setting, leaning towards the way of heaven.

The author has an understanding of Buddhism and has adopted the incarnation of the primordial spirit, Sakyamuni, which is rare.

The author's writing is good. I really like the plot of this novel. It doesn't include the plot of demons killing humans and refining the "Witch-Slaying Sword". Let's continue reading.

I like the character of the protagonist, he is bland, neither competitive nor brainless.

It's different from other prehistoric novels. Some places are quite well written.

The writing is more innovative than most of the prehistoric texts in Yang Persimmon

The plot of Fengshen breaks through the Immortal Killing Formation and the Ten Thousand Immortals Formation. It is well written.

Quite appetizing. The plot of Fengshen is well written

The author's writing is innovative and to be honest, it's good. Come on

This book was written to attract Zhunti's compassion. I like this kind of book.

The writing is okay. I saw in the paragraph comments that book friends made comments about the author's improper use of words and details, etc., And the author revised them. This is a good attitude. After reading Chapter 133, I have to say that the plot of Fengshen is very well written and innovative. I look forward to the subsequent plots.

The author's writing style is very classical, and he can outline the vast and vast artistic conception of the prehistoric world with just a few strokes.

The author writes quickly at first, but slows down in later chapters. The plot of Fengshen is good.

Cheers to the author, it's good and worth collecting, savor it carefully [laughs][laughs][laughs]

This book can be considered a new approach, and it is very well written.